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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting...
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You'll Have To Update Soon Cuz We're There !! 😉 !!
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Done !!
Done !!
Done !!
Done !! =] !!
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OMG!!!...i have never laughed so much like this in a long time..page 16!!!!...taanee and .AmeenaForEve 's comments..!!!...I was in my class and i was laughing so hard that all the students and teacher were looking at me...but still i couldn't stop my laughing...!!!😆
And kavitamundhara's posts on page 18...! u'r this desperate to read part 18!!!...😲
So this Part is dedicated to u 3 cute cute cute fairies...!
And congrats on being a groupbie taanee''...🥳
And yes!!!...AmeenaForEve )u'r doing most of the work...LOL...!
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...he felt like this is his real home...he happily started to look around the house...suddenly he heard someone running...he immediately went to the window and saw geet running away...he immediately went out...but didnt forget to lock the door of 'their home' before leaving...




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''JAAN...!...GEET...!...WHY R U RUNNING???...''



Geet ran like her life depends on it...she didnt turn back ...just ran...didnt know where...just kept running...she helplessly looked here and there...hoping to see something where she can hide from this monster...



Geet stopped for a moment...it's a open place...just some under construction buildings are situated here and there...she felt like crying...her legs are aching for running that much...



Suddenly she heard some noise...she got scared and ran again...didnt dare to turn back...cause if she see his face...then she doesnt know if she will be able to run away from him ever again or not...



The path was full of small stones which were making loud noise and it was very difficult to run on that road...



her shoes were hurting a lot...she hadn't eaten for2 days...so, feeling very weak...and not able to balance herself...she fell down on the sands...beside a under construction building...she immediately hid behind a large empty truck...



She terrifiedly looked behind...it's night...and thankfully there was no one there...sighing in her panting state...she wiped her sweaty face with her dupatta...she turned to her side to look at her paining foot...only to be scared to death...



Maan Singh Khurrana is sitting on the ground at front looking at her...



''kya hua!...aise dekh rahi ho jaise mein bhoot hoon...!''he said amusingly...



Geets breath got stuck in her throat...her movement stopped completely...she was looking at him...with her eyes popping out...



Maan wiped the remaining sweat of her forehead...she jumped at the touch...THIS IS NOT A NIGHTMARE...IT'S REAL...!!!



Geet jerked his hand away and started to get up...but her face showed that she is hurt...badly...



Maan immediately took her right leg into his lap and worriedly stared to check what's wrong with it...taking the chance of this distraction...geet took a fist full of sand in her one hand...



she put his other hand on his shoulder...he immediately looked at her happily...cause geet had never touched him willingly...(except in his dreams...ahem...ahem...LOL!)



He looked at her and she threw the sand fast aiming his eyes...crawled back from him...got up...and made a mad dash from him...she didn't care about her pain... know from where she got the courage and how did she do it but only one thing was on his mind...no way she is gonna hand herself over to him again...and she wont surrender without a fight...



She ran to the main road and tried to remember the way of pinki's home...she didnt have her bag or money to hire a vehicle...she was crying...but she didn't give up...she has to save herself...at any cost...At any cost...!



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Maan had studied in army school...so obviously he had combat training...'unarmed street fighting' was his type...no one has ever defeated him on that...he is known as 'The undefeated' in that...



He is always very alert about his atmosphere...no one was able to touch him without his acknowledge in fights...so what happened today...the sand couldn't hurt him as he closed his eyes before it could reach his eyes...



But he was shocked to the core...firstly...how could Geet do that???!!how could she possibly do that?! Geet...his jaan...could hurt him...!!!



And secondly...why didnt he reacted back...if anyone did that to him maan would have reacted a in fight unconsciously...not that he would really wanted to...but as a reflex...! So why did'nt he do anything even as a reflex...!



Then he realized something...It's his LOVE for her...he couldn't hurt her even in his unconscious self...



He looked at the way she left...he was stunned at his depth of love...No way he's gonna let her go now...she can't leave him now !...



He started running again...not only to chase geet...but also to get his love back in his life !



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geet has been walking for a long time now...she had no energy left...but still she didn't give up...she helplessly looked around...there's just grocery shops...which are closed now...what time is it ?...no idea...


...ye raat kaab khatam hogi???



Ye bura sapna kaab khatam hoga??




...No one knows...




She was thirsty...her throat has became dry...she was panting...her stomach was aching due to hunger and hyper respiration...she felt mild pain in her chest...her body was indicating her helplessly that it's time to stop...!




But still she has to fight...at least try to fight...still she has to carry on...




...''kaab taq bhago gi geet...paas to tumhe aana hi parega na...aapni maan ke paas...''




The echoed voice behind her forced geet to stop on her tracks...and finally...stopping after a LONG time...her body couldn't take it anymore...her timid body surrendered to her monster...




For that ...without even turning to Maan ...Geet fainted on the empty and quiet street...



Maan rushed to her and took her in his arms before she even touched the ground...



But even in her unconscious state...she kept mumbling something...which maan couldn't understand...rather didn't want to understand...


''...main...maarna...n...ne,,,,hi...chahti...ple...ase...''



Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah !! I Came First !! 😛 !!

All Mah Work Paid Off !! 😆 !!
Awesome Update !! 😃 !!
Poor Geet !! !!
She Ran , Hurt Her Foot And Threw Sand In Maanz Eyes, But What A Poor Soul !! The Devil Got Her Back Again !!
Loved It !! 😛 !!
Nice One !! 😉 !!
Edited by .AmeenaForEva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya twist hai yar😕

why is she running frm him
and maan uff kitna drata hai bechari geet ko

btw loved the update
do cont soon
love meena

and i thnk i m the first one to read and comment hope so :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
poor geet...she is so hurt...
she fainted...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg loved this ff absolutely
maan being aloof first and then obsessed with her now
wat happened in past that geet hates him and fears him so much
waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part dear...
Love it...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh god if he was real he'd give me nightmares LOOOL
HE'S EVERYWHERE !

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