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waiting for next part dear
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kamini sameera
kya natak karti he
i want to kill her yar
maan wanted to give their marriage a chance
lekin os sameera ki waja se sab garbar ho raha he
ye kya smeera a gai
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Maan left for washroom leaving baffled Geet.Geet who was supressing her feelings stood there totally baffled.But after sometime she felt her ground has been slipped when she came to present world and saw Maan lifting her and heading towards the washroom.Geet was shocked and saw what he's gonna do further as her heart anticipated fast and many naughty thoughts came to her mind which made her so restless.But Maan made her to enter the tub filled warm water taking off her blanket and said,"Geet..mujhe apne feelings ko express karna nahin aata aur mein yeh bhi nahin kahoonga ki tum meri patni ho aur tumhe choone ka haq hai'agar tum is rishte se khush nahin ho toh tumhe mujhse door jaane ka utna hi haq hai jitna mein aaj kal tha'.mein is rishte ko ek mauka dena chaatha tha toh meine tumhe apna kal raat ko banaaya'meri sirf ek galati thi ki mujhe tumse poochna chaahiye tha ki kya tum khush ho ya nahin is rishte se'..Geet mein koi dabaav nahin daalna chaahta tere upar'..isiliye sochkar mujhe jawaab dena kal..agar tum is rishte se khush nahin ho toh kal hi mein lawyer ko bulaadoonga aur hu dono ki divorce ho jaayegi'..socho Geet'.tumhaare har faisle par mein tumhaare saath hoon'.!"

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PART 11







Maan told her the decision for her convenience and for her comfortableness but he was feeling so restless when he was saying this decision.He felt that his hear slit apart and his soul was thwarted by him.He clutched his left chest where heart lies and he felt that he has pain in his whole body'.he felt that his soul has been ripped halfly and his soul has been latched to her.His heart said whatever he was doing was wrong and he cant let Geet go free.Maan immediately ran inside his room clutching his left chest and slammed his door immediately feeling total restless.Maan was sweating badly feeling the pain in his heart which was not physical but was mental.His agony was not permitting him to feel Geet's soul that's why he was blind and always hurted her soul though it wasnt her mistake.But today'he was so restless'restless enough to not to bear the pain.He only gave her the pain and it was turning towards him only.













The pain which Maan gave was turning to him only.Maan thought,"Geet'.what u have dont to me'the mere thought of u going far away from me giving the pain'..please dont go far away from me'.am in love''.!"Maan stopped his thoughts with widened eyes which gave the shocking expression.Maan saw the ground with shock and thought,"Love'..can i love her in one month?







A poem by me''

I know nothing about her''still my eyes searches for her presence'..

I know nothing about her'..still i feel her around me'..

I know nothing about her''still i feel her name perfect on my lips'..

I know nothing about her'.still my lips craves to have her lips'..

I know nothing about her'..still my body craves for her skin'..

I know nothing about her'..still every cell of my body craves to fell her'..

I know nothing about her''still my soul craves to be with her soul''.

I know nothing about her''still my soul craves to be latched to her soul'.

I know nothing about her''still my heart craves to listen to her melodious voice'.

I know nothing about her''still my heart craves for her love'.

What is this emotions which is making me speechless''making me crave for her more'..












When he was thinking then he dint notice that Veer had entered his room and seeing him intently.Maan turned and was shocked seeing Veer behind him seeing him intently with folded hands and his right hand on his chin.Maan clutched his heart as Veer had given almost heart attack to him and asked,"Veer'what you are doing here????"U scared me'.!"Veer said in teasing tone,"Oho'.so Maan Singh Khurana is scared of me'.interesting news'.it can become a big bulletin in every media that he's actually scared of his friend Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat'.!"














Maan nodded dismissively to his remark and asked casually examining his naked upper body in the mirror,"Tu yahan kya kar raha hai'.abhi toh tera jogging time haina??"Veer answered,"Haan tha lekin kya kare'hum kissi secret mission mein vyast the toh jogging aaj chutti liya'!"Maan asked smiling dismissively,"Kaunsi mission?"Veer answered proudly,"Mission Maan Singh Khurana'!"Maan smiled and said casually,"Achcha..ab tu mere saath kya karna chaahtha hai?"
















Veer asked innocently,"Mein'mein kya kar raha hoon'jo kuch bhi karna hai abhi shuru kar raha hoon'.!"Maan said casually,"Bhole mat bano Veer''mujhe maaloom hai ki tum kya kar rahe ho'.!"Veer knew his friend very well and asked casually,"Kya kar raha hoon mein'.!"Maan said casually still examining his upper naked body,"Veer'.tu mujhe aur Geet ko paas laana chaahtha haina..isiliye kal tum kuch zyaada hi baat ki mere saamne'.mujhe jalaane ke liye woh sab baatein keh rahe the haina?"















Veer knew that he's gonna guess this seeing his behaviour yesterday'.as he knew that except Naina'Veer is not gonna keep his eyes on any other girl'..that's why Maan trying to give a chance to Geet..their relation a chance'..Veer kept his palm on Maan's shoulder and asked,"Tujhe pata haina ki mein kya kar raha hoon toh fir tu kyun nahin meri madat karte'.!Tu kyun nahin Geet ko apnaa te'..ek baar usse aur is rishte ko mauka to de'.!Shaayad Geet bhi yahi chaahthi ho'.!"














Maan closed his eyes to resist the pain remembering the reaction from Geet previously and told,"Veer'.tu jo kar raha hai woh kabhi poora nahin ho sakta'.woh is rishte se khush nahin hai'.woh mere saath khush nahin hai'.!"Veer saw his pain and was shocked and thought,"Yeh kya bol raha hai kahin firse jagda toh nahin ki isne Geet ke saath'..par meine toh ek chamak dekha the kal dining table mein jab meine Geet ko Maan ke bagal mein bithaaya tha'.aur woh sharmaana..sab kuch jhoot tha kya'.!"















Veer asked immediately with worried expression,"Maan..tu aisa kyun bol raha hai'.Geet bhi yahi chaahthi hai ki woh is rishte se khush rahe'.woh tere saath khush rahe'aur meine woh ehsaas dekha hai uski aankhon mein..ho na ho..uski aankhen bahut kuch kehti hai Maan'.ek baar soch le'.ek baar try kar'..usse apni taraf kheench'.!"Maan said,"Nahin Maan koi faayda nahin woh aise apne emotions ko chupaati hai ki usse baahar nikaalna naamumkin hai'.!"
















Veer asked apprehensively,"Tu yeh baat keh raha hai'..Maan Singh Khurana..kabhi haarna nahin seekha tha aaj ek ladki ke jazbaaton se haar raha hai'.!"Maan said painfully,"Veer'.kaise mein uski jazbaaton ko samajhta'..aaj tak meine usse diya hi kya hai sirf dard'..usse aisa tadpaaya hai ki woh aaj bhi mujh par vishwaas karne ke liye tayaar nahin'.aise mein'..mein kaise uska saamna karta''!"Veer asked,"Tu kya galat kiya uske saath?"Maan said,"Kehna mushkil hai Veer'.!"














Listening to this Veer's eyes widened with shock and asked turning Maan towards him,"Tune kya kiya hai Maan'bata kya kiya hai''!!"Maan hesitated to see Veer's eyes which were spitting fire to him but told what he had done to Geet in their first night.Veer was shocked and angry on Maan that he punched him hardly near the nose in which Maan fell on the ground twitching and said crying,"Aur maar Veer'..i deserve this'.!!"
















Veer controlled his anger and pulled Maan in his feet and punched him to his stomach and shouted angrily,"Tujhe pata hain tune kya kiya hai'.aur is harkat ke baad tu mere saamne bahut chota ho gaya'..sahi hai tu sach kehta hai she deserves a better man..not animal like you'..!"Maan dipped his head with guilt while Veer went back towards the door but stopped halfway and saw Maan and said angrily,"Jaane anjaane mein hi sahi ab tu bhi apne baap ki parchaayi bangaye'..!"















Maan closed his eyes and tears poured down from his chocolate brown eyes and Veer stormed out of his room.Veer bumped into dadimaa where he tried to control his anger and sadness and told her that he's going jogging while Geet was preparing the breakfast in the kitchen.Dadimaa felt something fishy when Maan got a phone from Adi.Adi told that he has to attend a meeting in xyz hotel international.Maan nodded and went to have the shower.













When he was having the shower then he felt that her essence has been filled around him.He inhaled her scent which unknowingly drove him crazy.He started thinking about Geet while he had the shower.


If u cant see the pics then do see that in my blog link...here is the link-https://srirmg.wordpress.com/2012/12/03/venomous-desire-updated-part-11/











When he was having the shower her thoughts made him calm and composed and he felt contented.Unknowingly a killer smile crept on his M shaped lips''


Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan Khurana at Geet set



Maan remembered her almond eyes and felt his heart beat faster and he felt he wished to drown himself in those hazel almond eyes.Here Geet was searching Maan from her corner of almond eyes which was noticed by Veer.Veer spoke harshly about Maan for which made Geet glare at him angrily.Geet told him angrily,"Aap apne aapko Maan ke best friend kehte hai aur aise gande bhaasha use kar rahe hai'.!"Veer was amazed seeing Geet's possessiveness but told,"Geet'.mujhe maaloom hai ki Maan ne aapke saath kya kiya hai aur issiliye aisa keh raha hoon'woh'.!"














But Geet cut across him and told,"Aap unke baare mein kya sochte hai mujhe maaloom nahin lekin mere liye woh aaj hi mere bhagwaan hai'..woh bhagwaan jisne mujhe dhakke maar kar baahar nahin nikaala yeh jaante huve bhi ki meri behan unhe dhoka diya'..unhone kabhi mujhe paraaya nahin samjha and mujhe is ghar mein sahaara diya'..unhone kabhi bhi mujhe akela nahin choda aur duniya ki buri nazar se mujhe bachaate rahe'.woh mere liye bhagwaan hai aur aapke yeh gandi baatein mujhe koi farak nahin padta'.dikhne mein toh aap samajhdaar lagte hai Veerji fir bhi aapki yeh vichaar gandi hai'..!Aayinda agar aap mere saamne Maan ki buraayi kiya toh mujhsa bura koi nahin hoga'.samjhe aap'.!"Geet wetn from there angrily to collect more paratha from the kitchen.













Veer was shocked seeing Geet's possessiveness while one person was also shocked and he was none other than Maan Singh Khurana who stood there listening to the convo of Veer and Geet and was shocked when she for the first time shouted on someone angrily.Geet till now never shouted or showered her anger on anyone when she came to KM.But today it was so shocking that Geet had lost her control in front of Veer and that too for Maan.Maan felt a tinge of possessiveness and proud of his wifey whose nose were flared with anger and face was red too due to anger.













Maan thought that she looked more adorable when she was in the anger.Maan was so carried away thinking about her thoughts that he dint noticed a person watching his expression and he was Veer.Veer who saw Maan asked sternly,"Tu usse khush rakhega kya'seedha seedha bol'.!"Maan smiled at Veer and nodded yes to him.Veer thought for a second and told him,"Agar Geet tere saath khush hai toh mujhe koi aitraaz nahin lekin agar woh mana karegi toh mein tere saath ek minute ke liye usse rukne nahin doonga samjhe tum'..!!!!"Maan nodded yes making grumpy face.
















Veer finally decided to help Maan seeing the love in Geet's eyes for Maan.Geet was unaware of that while Veer apologised to Geet for his bad words about Maan.Geet forgave Veer and they both became a very good friends.Next morning Maan had to go to the meeting in xyz international with Geet.Geet had wore a white color saree for the party before the meeting and went with Maan as the couples are allowed for the party.









Precap-Maan pulled Geet towards him and her soft curves banged his rock chest making him groan with anticipation.His rough palm started to move around her sleek naked waist while his eyes turned into dark which Geet noticed and was about to speak when he sealed his lips on her soft petal like lips.Geet was shocked as he was kissing her in the dance floor and that too in front of the people who were lusting her and admiring her.Every man stood there with stunned expression while media clicked their pictures.Geet whose lips craved for his lips and the feeling of soul touching kiss made her froze to the spot inside his wide muscular arms.In that party one person was also present who was boiling with anger and that person was none other than Sameera for whom Maan wanted to teach a very good lesson of cheating him.Maan nibbled her lips and sucked her honey sweet juice while Sameera immediately walked out of the party angrily.



After this scene the same precap which i gave in previous update'..




How was the update and the precap and do let me know...



Target is 160+ likes and 20 pages of comment...or else not update till then






Previous Part 10-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3160342/venomous-desire-thread-01



Next Part 12-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3160342/venomous-desire-thread-01


Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago


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Kudiye, jaldi kar. Prolouge ka soch kar & story ki pace dekh kar aur bhi control nahi ho raha.
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was fabulous
maan realized his love for geet and veer also came to knew about his deeds par the possessiveness which she have for maan shocked both and veer decided to help maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Srir, kya part tha. That was fab. Kya dialogues aur thoughts they. Me total thud, yaar. Amazing, as always. Loved it to the core. Precap 2 ho chuke hai ab. Maan hi usko sabak seekhayega and veer bhi toh hai saath. Geet, Maan ki addiction hai.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

geet is hiding her I0ve due t0 tat b**** sameera
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Posted: 12 years ago
i want kurbaan hua dance seq plzzz

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