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Posted: 12 years ago
wow very interesting story
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww extremely loved this update..
Maan was very harsh on Geet and that wasnt nice..
soo sad for Geet
even though she loves him but he was still vicious with her
wonderful update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Next morning sun dawned on Maan's room making it brighter..today the surrounding was more brighter now making the room fresh and sweet.Maan stirred in his sleep and pressed to the soft ones and held her waist even more tighter which made Geet moan in her sleep.Maan's M shaped lips curved into cute killer smile hearing her moan and he once again buried his face inside her soft curves.Maaneet slept peacefully some more time while Geet was in deep slumber and Maan stirred in his sleep once again and he opened his wide chocolate brown eyes and lifted his head fm her soft bare curves and saw around him.When he lifted then Geet came into his vision who was in deep slumber.For a moment he thot it was only a dream but when he blinked then he came to reality he did actually first night with her.

Maan was shocked to see her in that state and stood up immediately and saw her state.Her vermilion was scattered away fm her forehead and her soft slender neck was full of love bites.Her curves were red and sour and her lips were swollen and her feminine parts were raw red.Maan banged his back to the wall walking backwards in so much force that his back skin scratched to the edge of d wooden wardrobe and started bleeding but he dint give any attention as he stood seeing her state totally numb.His eyes were widened with shock and soon it resumed the hatredness...not for Geet but for him.Maan gulped down saliva seeing Geet's state and was afraid of facing her questioning eyes which would accuse him in every possible way.Those hazel almond eyes which were windows of her soul..she would see him with accusable eyes which would burn his soul with guilt...
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 teaser...

Plezzz updt sooon plezzz
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PART 04


Geet sobbed feeling d pain on her feminine parts and she sobbed silently and tried to push Maan fm her but he held her naked waist holding it possessively and she sobbed feeling his crushing finger as it was marked by his fingers.Geet saw upwards complaining to her babaji for giving this painful night as a gift of her marraige'.she had forceful marraige and forceful suhaagraat where Maan was half-drunk and was tired with exercise and was angered and he nearly raped her but difference is that Geet too responded to his wild passion but still she dont wanted this.







Geet tried to get up but his hard body unknowingly pressed her soft petite body that she cant get up so she closed her eyes to catch some sleep but was thinking tomorrow's Maan's reaction and she felt restless.But Maan was soothing her restlessness in his way and kissed her neck softly and stroked her hairs slowly to go to sleep.Geet dint had any choice and she closed her eyes tightly and went off to a deep slumber which was peaceful and her hands slipped around his waist in her sleep and he groaned badly and in his sleep still he gave another deep thrust and went off to a deep slumber hugging Geet's waist possessively.











Next morning sun dawned on Maan's room making it brighter..today the surrounding was more brighter now making the room fresh and sweet.Maan stirred in his sleep and pressed to the soft ones and held her waist even more tighter which made Geet moan in her sleep.Maan's M shaped lips curved into cute killer smile hearing her moan and he once again buried his face inside her soft curves.











Maaneet slept peacefully some more time while Geet was in deep slumber and Maan stirred in his sleep once again and he opened his wide chocolate brown eyes and lifted his head fm her soft bare curves and saw around him.When he lifted then Geet came into his vision who was in deep slumber.For a moment he thot it was only a dream but when he blinked then he came to reality he did actually first night with her.












Maan was shocked to see her in that state and stood up immediately and saw her state.Her vermilion was scattered away fm her forehead and her soft slender neck was full of love bites.Her curves were red and sour and her lips were swollen and her feminine parts were raw red.Maan banged his back to the wall walking backwards in so much force that his back skin scratched to the edge of d wooden wardrobe and started bleeding but he dint give any attention as he stood seeing her state totally numb.










His eyes were widened with shock and soon it resumed the hatredness...not for Geet but for him.Maan gulped down saliva seeing Geet's state and was afraid of facing her questioning eyes which would accuse him in every possible way.Those hazel almond eyes which were windows of her soul..she would see him with accusable eyes which would burn his soul with guilt...











Maan thot,"What happened to me last night..i lost control, in front of her..who's she to me..just a mere substitute her sister made gave me to success her plans..that Sameera made her sit in her place thought knowing that i was her would brother-in-law...her sister Sameera made all that fiasco...but Geet never wanted this to herself...she did as her sister said to her..and that too forcibly..but what i did last night was also force...i forcibly had s** with her...(This time he was using the word s** becoz this action was forcible in the view of Geet)..i became just like dad...what have I become...but i hate this girl..and her family...in one day they turned my life upside down...in one second i was her husband not of my choice...!!!"(Though Maan's was an arranged marraige still he was cheated..and for Geet it was a mere arranged but forcible marraige...arranged in heaven but on that time it was forcible)Maan lowered his head with shame not seeing her state fm his eyes.












Maan came forward and tucked her in the sheet and was abt to go from there but was stopped due to the stir on the bed.Geet moved on the bed and she lifted her hands stretching it still sleeping on the bed and opened her almond eyes slightly and saw Maan rotted to the spot with guilt.Geet blinked and got up and felt the pain around her thighs and saw it entering inside her blanket.











Geet was shocked and came outside from her blanket and closed it immediately seeing Maan till her curves and saw Maan who stood there feeling guilty.Maan was observing her from the corner of his eyes while Geet's eyes welled up and tears poured down from those almond eyes.Maan closed his eyes totally feeling guilty seeing the big fat tears leaking from those painful almond eyes and she tried to stand from the bed but couldnt and she fell on the bed immediately as her knees were wobbly due to the pain in between her thighs.












Maan stood there without giving any helping hand to her while Geet once again tried to stand holding the bed rest firmly and tried to manage her blanket on her closing her naked body from the sheet and holding the bed rest.Maan couldnt see her attempts and ran inside the washroom immediately leaving the baffled Geet of his behaviour.Geet's eyes welled up once again and tears poured down from her almond eyes.










Geet thot,"Why am the unfortunate one...i never get any love from anyone...when i was 5 then i lost my parents then only i came to my uncle's house...then when i expected the motherly love from Pammi aunty then she gave only hatred to me...then when i expected the motherly love from my sister then for her selfishness my life turned upside down..she bound my hands giving the loyalty towards uncle and have to sit in the mandap...when i expected love from Maan..then he too gave pain to me and left me to burn myself in that pain which he gave me cruelly...why am unfortunate one...!!!!"











Geet cried silently and walked in difficulty holding the bed rest when she felt two strong arms lifting her.Geet was shocked to see Maan who was lifting her on his arms..she noticed guilt in his eyes and he dint even take any glimpse towards her and looked straight and avoided her gaze.Maan carried her to the washroom and placed her gently on the floor and took her blanket and she stood closing her curves and her naked body from her hands whole Maan dint even took a glimpse of her body and took her in his strong arms.










When her soft milky white skin rubbed his hard skin then he felt a current run down his spine still resisted it and placed her inside the tub filled lukewarm water and said to her without meeting her eyes,"Stay there for sometime u feel better and get ready for further rituals dadimaa will be waiting for u and if u have any means of pity to Dadimaa then i presume that u wont say anything abt last night...(The last night caught on his throat which Geet understood immediately) and am sorry for everything...!!!!"That was the last word which he told and ran from washroom feeling totally suffocated..becoz he thot that he had polluted her and her breathing air and cursed himself for doing that and ran towards his gym still half bare.















Dadimaa saw his state and the scratches of Geet's nails and smiled that actually Maan accepted Geet after that marraige fiasco but least she knew that Maan forced her just like his father always did to his mother and she thanked god for making everything alright.Geet stayed inside the tub and felt better and got up and had the shower and wore a pink color selwaar suit and went downstairs for further rituals...Here Maan exercised aggressively to wear off the mistake he had done lat night but cant be gone so easily while Get asked dadimaa innocently,"Dadimaa...unhe kya pasand hai...!!!!"Dadimaa teased,"Unhe kinhe beta????"Geet blushed furiously and whispered,"Maan ko...!!!!"











On that time Maan came downstairs wearing his formals with red color office attire in which he looked even more hot and sexy.Geet unknowingly drooled over him which Maan noticed it and felt uncomfortable and shouted for Nakul,"Nakul..meri black coffee kaha hai????"Nakul came waddling holding a tray of black coffee and stood in front of Maan.Maan took it and took a sip and spat immediately and shouted,"Nakul...meine black coffee maangi thi sugar coffee nahin..tum kisi kaam ke nahin ho...!!!"











Maan went to kitchen to make black coffee but stopped by Geet.Geet said politely,"Aap baithiye...mein aapke liye black coffee laati hoon...!!!!"Maan said rudely,"Koi zaroorat nahin mein apna kaam khud kar sakta hoon...!!!!"Hearing this Geet's eyes welled up and said in lower tone which was only audible to Maan painfully,"Haan...mein aapke liye kaun hoon...sorry for invading ur space...!!!"Maan saw her almond eyes which were glistening with tears and bothered him so much but he was alarmed when dadimaa came towards her.











Geet sensed it too and wiped it immediately and Maan noticed it as she was fast of hiding her pain to others.Dadimaa came and said softly,"Geet bete..aap rasoyi ki pooja karke Maan ke liye black coffee le aayiye..Maan chalo ab ye zimmedaari Geet ki hai...!!!"Geet nodded smiling immediately but her eyes always showed pain and Maan noticed it and started her works.Geet did pooja of the stove and kept a water filled vessel and added coffee powder to it and then added one cube of sugar and let it to boil.Maan wanted his coffee to be correctly boiled and d sugar cube will added perfectly to it.












Geet made it and served them and went towards kitchen to prepare breakfast.She made poori and sabzi for dadimaa and macaroni pasta to Maan which was simply delicious.Geet prepared it in one hour and the table was filled with hot smoking pasta with poori and sabzi.Dadima tasted poori and it was simply delicious and gave a diamond necklace to her as a shagun and blessed her whole heartedly.










Maan took a spoonful of pasta and he felt a familiar taste and it was so tasty that he relished it totally licking it.The pasta taste was so familiar..and he felt as if his mother prepared the food and he gave one simple smile to Geet and appreciated her.Geet was in cloud 9 when she saw the killer smile of him but thot in her mind,"Why am feeling that am in seventh heaven...he gave only one smile nothing was special but why i felt of drooling over his smile...????"









Maan dint give any moment to talk to her and ran immediately avoiding her and Geet went to the college to attend the classes as she had got permission from dadimaa.






Precap-Maan is coming to Geet's college to take a private class for Geet's class...gossip is going on but Geet dont know who is that man.




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Am always stalking this FF!! he he!! It happens to be my home page you see!! he he!!

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Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet really has a very painful past!!

Hope she gets all the love she deserves from Maan….

Could actually feel her pain….

Maan's very guilty but he is a smart and practical fellow, he should actually delve into details of what actually happened…

Maybe that way he would get familiar with Geet's past too…

Maan found Geet's cooking familiar???

Almost like his mother;s… this part was too sweet…

Hope Maan makes up to Geet very soon by showering love and concern not because of guilt but because of love!!!

Dadima seems to be a very major role in tis FF!!!

Am really intrigued by this FF dear… Something very different!! And am really liking it!!!

Awesome update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

Geet really has a very painful past!!


Hope she gets all the love she deserves from Maan'.

Could actually feel her pain'.

Maan's very guilty but he is a smart and practical fellow, he should actually delve into details of what actually happened'

Maybe that way he would get familiar with Geet's past too'

Maan found Geet's cooking familiar???

Almost like his mother;s' this part was too sweet'

Hope Maan makes up to Geet very soon by showering love and concern not because of guilt but because of love!!!

Dadima seems to be a very major role in tis FF!!!

Am really intrigued by this FF dear' Something very different!! And am really liking it!!!

Awesome update!!





THANK U SHOOO MUCH DEAR 🤗 BIG HUGS TO U
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope maan accepts her soon without remorse..

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