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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys i am back with part 19
thanks all for your support



PART 19


Arjun and arohi went to the canteen ….. arohi was quite comfortable in his company….he didn't talk rubbish infact was friendly in his own way….. they were sitting alone with students…arohi's friends had left to their home since no other classes were going …leaving her alone well offcourse geet was there but busy in her rehersals….

Arohi : so arjun what could be our subject for the project…… well I want that the topic and theme should be such that whole class will see that the project is made by us…I mean it should not only impress the faculty but will leave an imprint on the minds of the students…..

When arohi was speaking asking him and suggesting her ideas ….arjun was plainly staring at her in such a way he could not be caught and can drool over her…..

Arjun st: wow…she is really beautiful….and naughty and devil too …arjun aaj toh bach gaya ..warna she would have kill you for calling her wify……WIFY!!!! U literally called her your wife that too in college campus…..mana I was teased a lot with her when I bumped with her…maan along with daadima make fun of me…and mom she asked me about her when I didn't even knew her…..

Arjun was in her thoughts and openly gaping at her and arohi was just going on with her never ending talks……

When she noticed arjun was not responding to her she snapped her fingers in front of her …a cute frown appeared on her face….

Arohi called him loud….

Arohi: arjun …are you listening to me..?????

Arjun came out of his dreamland and thought of a reasonable and genuine reason to say to arohi….

Arjun: hmmm arohi your ideas are nice…do you know how to implement them….

Arohi made a puppy face and nodded her face in a big NO!!!

Arjun smiled at her cute innocent face wanted to pull her cheeks……..

Arjun: hold your thoughts arjun….. what are you doing with her …don't think about her…you are her mentor….don't try to cross that line that she has marked between us…..

Arjun: arohi …..can we start your project after the cultural event…..i hope you are fine with it….

Arohi replied with a cute baby smile….

Arohi: its absolutely fine…even I want to start after the event…I am very much excited for the event I have heard there will be many competitions….i just want to see the play DIVINE…… I heard its concept its really something I can't believe…but offcourse true love can face anything…….

Arjun: play will be nice….its depiction will be great ….. it's a splendid concept where Edward will take his lady love from her wedding ball…..

Arohi: wow…you know so much about it….. are you in dramatics club….

Arjun:NO….. I am not in the club..i have been a spectator of this play once that's why I know about it…..

Arohi:you mean you saw it before….

Arjun: yes….

Arohi with a curious gaze: really …where???

Arjun: here in college …. The play is organized second time….i saw it when I was in first year….. it was really good…..

Arohi: wow…… now I can't wait to see the play……

AFTER THREE DAYS
CULTURAL EVENT DAY

AT THE GREEN ROOM

Geet was in the green room rehersing her lines again….. she was dressed in the beautiful white wedding gown….. but no make up…getting tensed as usual….. well the thing that was making her nervous was kunal…her partner he didn't show up…yesterday also he was absent from the staging of the play….and today also he was missing…geet was in her thoughts and expressions….when the co ordinator came to her ….

Coordinator: geet what are you doing here come mam has called you….

Geet: what happened shweta …why mam has called now the play is going to start with in an hour and I have to get ready…..

Shweta(coordinator): just come geet…..

Geet and shweta went towards the room all the participants were present except kunal….

All left the place except the coordinataor , geet and their HOD of dramatics..

Teacher: geet …kunal cannot come to the play he has left the college …yesterday…..

Geet was stunned hearing that and started getting nervous….

Teacher: geet there will be a new partner…. He will be joining you on the stage….and left….

Geet slowly in a trance went to get ready….when arohi came geet was in tears and said the whole thing to arohi…

Geet: aru how will I act now….how will I manage….co ordination in dance I had only practiced with kunal aur badi mushkil se I matched with him

And here I din't even practiced once…

Arohi consoled geet to her best and made her ready…..

ON THE OTHER SIDE

HOD has called maan and asked him to play Edward as he was the one who played it on stage and knew what to do exactly…..

Maan: mam please I didn't even know anything now..i can't do it….

Teacher: maan now our college reputation is at stake and I know the reason of your NO believe me nothing will happen this time….you know many other prestigious institutions are there and you are the last hope otherwise the play will be cancelled….

And left from there….

Maan was in green room getting ready …..he was not at all wanting to be a part of the play …when arjun came..he knew that maan has be in play now…the same play in which he faced a humiliation three years back…..

Arjun: maan please I know what is going on in your mind….. but just for your passion portray the role ….

Maan: bhai I don't know what to do…..

Arjun: maan just get ready the play is going to start within few minutes….aur haan ….please be calm with your partner…she is very scared maan…..

And left from there….

After arohi had gone from the room geet was looking at the script when arjun came to gave her his wishes for her success….and saw tears in her eyes and asked her …geet told him everything ..arjun first gave her the gift he had brought for her and after wiping her tears assured her that the play will be a big hit…

Arjun: geet don't cry dear….you know your partner is the best…..he knows everything just play your part ….and leave the rest to others….

Geet: bhaiya dance..i didn't even rehersed with him…it wil be a great mess….

Arjun: well we'll see that after your performance ….best of luck….

The play started with the entry of the king and his ministers…..the play was going smoothly when The scene changed and geet was shown entering her room …she was crying holding the ring inher hand…..and went towards the bed and sat there….

CLARISSE: EDWARD where are you??? …your love is waiting for you….father has fixed my alliance with the prince of france…ohh edward..please take your love…..i can't breathe without you…these relations will take my each breath away from my….come before your clarrise ends her life…..

Suddenly the scene changed and a maid came…

Maid: princess your highness has ordered you to get ready and arrive soon…. At the wedding ball…..

The scene changed geet went from the stage and maan entered dressed in a black Armani suit looking ravishing….the girls hooted only seeing him giving him compliments….….

EDWARD: clarisse …I will take you away no kingdom or prince cannot stop in taking my love with me ….. I will take you infront of them …. Wait my dear….

Now the palace ball room is shown…clarrise came in white wedding gown with the veil covering her face….. with bridesmaid…..couples were dancing ..prince of france approched clarrise ….

Prince of france: may I have the honour of dance with this beautiful lady….

Clarrise politely refused….

Clarisse: Edward where are you???

Edward: right behind you love…..

Clarisse turned and looked at Edward…..the stage went dark …a spot light on the divine couple standing in the corner ….. talking with their eyes….

Edward: MAY I HAVE THIS DANCE…and forward his hands towards her……

When geet didn't respond …maan recalled arjun's words about her….

Maan: just don't be tensed look at me …..

She was looking down at his feet when he gently touched her milky soft hands guiding towards his shoulders very smoothly hold her waist and very slightly pull her to him….

Maan: Clarrise look into my eyes….. no one can part the two loving souls….. you are mine and only mine….

Geet with some courage looked into his eyes …..those chocolate brown eyes …so deep that you can drown in their estacy…… like they are meant for her……..

Geet: just take me away Edward…..

Maan: love I will take my beloved with me….

Slowly he brought her in the centre of the stage…..

Maan noticed her hands were sweating and she was looking down…he very firmly hold her from waist and pulled her close to him….

Suddenly the music started….the focus was again on them…..

The music started….

EDWARD:

Take my hand,
Take a breath,
Pull me close,
Take one step,
Keep your eyes locked on mine
And let the music be your guide.


Maan: don't be nervous just look into m eayes…nothing will happen….why are you scared …maan asked to geet …well instead of lipsing he was talking to her and trying to make her at ease…..

They swayed with the music….. covering the whole stage…maan was twirling her around keeping a grip on her…..

CLARISSE:

Won't you promise me
(Now won't you promise me, that you'll never forget)
You'll keep dancing
(To keep dancing)
Where ever we go next…
.

Geet: looking into his ocean deep eyes….i don't know I am scared what if I didn't impress the audience….

Maan smiled slightly with her concern…ohh you will….

He now loose his hold on her hand and turn her around bringing back to him…..

EDWARD

It's like catching lightning,
The chances of finding someone like you.
It's one in a million,
The chances of feeling the way we do.
And with every step together,
We just keep on getting better.

CLARISSE

So can I have this dance?
(Can I have this dance)
Can I Have this dance?


maan: didn't you practiced…..maan asked geet knowing that his conversation will divert her mind….

EDWARD
Take my hand,
I'll take the lead,
And every turn will be safe with me,
Don't be afraid,
Afraid to fall,
You know I'll catch you through it all


Geet: I did practiced a lot with kunal…but we were not in coordination…I am not good in western dance….. I only know Indian classical….she said ever so cutely…..

Maan bent her little and looked into her eyes…the same eyes he had seen…..but right now couldn't recognize….

EDWARD
And you can't keep us apart
(Even a thousand miles can't keep us apart)
Cos my heart is where ever you are

CLARRISE


It's like catching lightning,
The chances of finding someone like you.
It's one in a million,
The chances of feeling the way we do.
And with every step together,
We just keep on getting better.

So can I have this dance?
(Can I have this dance)
Can I Have this dance?


Maan: I should have known…..by the way you dance really graciously……it was your partner's fault I can say…

Geet: no…he was perfect …believe me….

They were talking in between dancing….like they knew each other from ages….

EDWARD


Ohh no mountains too high and no oceans too wide,
Cause together or not, our dance won't stop.
Let it rain, let it pour.
What we have is worth fighting for.
You know I believe that we were meant to be.
Ooohhh.


finally maan picked up from waist making her sway in air….dance on her own with a wide smile and quickly bringing her down again twirling her around the stage…the light was falling and following them….

When they were talking looking in each other's eyes….it seemed that they are deeply and immensely feeling and living their love….

CLARISSE


It's like catching lightning,
The chances of finding someone like you (like you)
It's one in a million,
The chances of feeling the way (way) we do.
And with every step together,
We just keep on getting better.
So can I have this dance?
(Can I have this dance)
Can I have this dance?


the dance ends and with a split of second the scene changed to the ball room with the wedding guests…. And king and queen searching for their daughter who flew with her love EDWARD…..


when the dance came to an end there was a huge round of applause from the whole auditorium…… maan and geet were standing in each others arms…..and the applause brought them back and ended the play…….

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NOTE: guys arohi doesn't know that arjun is the one who is geet's brother... and arjun called arohi wify in a haste coz she was the one withwhom his alliance was almost fixed by maan


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Edited by suhaaana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maansee

ok i understand dear ... par i have to keep my eye on your update to be first . samgha kar na yaar 😃




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Posted: 13 years ago
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happy to be first at this beautiful ff ...

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Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maansee

nahi ... maine para tha . par like button 😡 how i missed that . or may be maine do bar press kar diya . idiot mee



awww dont be sad yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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second post mai kisi ko nahi deti . sorry girls ... greedy mee 😃

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃third to bas mera hi hota hai ...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for reserving the place first for mee suhana... love u dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is mee reserving for my comments 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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now its open for all the girls to comments ... hehehehehehe . silly mee 🤪

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