MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 7 - Page 27

beautiful update

hello Maansee!!!!!!!!

rahul's pov is very well described...his helplessness and insecurities have been portrayed very well...

Amazing one...😊

love bond with Geet-Rahul is awesome..
Rahul's POV was necessary ,,,,It is beautiful scripted...

ritzy di beautiful updates
my comments are from part 40 actually
got busy wid my job so please forgive me di
but glad i cud finish them

beautiful updates
right from maan changing for geet, taking care of her, visiting her everyday and actually making her realise that he too had developed feelings for him
loved the way u used geet's father treatment
and maan backing out the family with utmost ease and care
loved the caring maan
asking geet to stayback till her father gets well
superbly portrayed di
👍🏼

glad geet confessed everything in front of maan
it was good to see family's POV changing for maan
loved Rahul's POV as well
he was right, super bro-sis bond
all in all beautiful updates di
poems in the updates were like cherry on the cake

waiting to see Maaneet together now
continue asap di

P.S if i get late in commenting please bear with me😉

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie

ritzy di beautiful updates
my comments are from part 40 actually
got busy wid my job so please forgive me di
but glad i cud finish them

beautiful updates
right from maan changing for geet, taking care of her, visiting her everyday and actually making her realise that he too had developed feelings for him
loved the way u used geet's father treatment
and maan backing out the family with utmost ease and care
loved the caring maan
asking geet to stayback till her father gets well
superbly portrayed di
👍🏼

glad geet confessed everything in front of maan
it was good to see family's POV changing for maan
loved Rahul's POV as well
he was right, super bro-sis bond
all in all beautiful updates di
poems in the updates were like cherry on the cake

waiting to see Maaneet together now
continue asap di

P.S if i get late in commenting please bear with me😉

congratulation for new thread
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
loved maaneet moments
loved their care understanding , trust for each other
loved maan- rano conversation
loved how maan is taking care of geet's aka his another family
mohindar also understand maan now and maan won his trust
rahul out burst also as brother very much needed
he really cares for his sister, love her can't see her in any more pain
he fear about geet and her happiness
geet also understand it and try to make him understand
Rano also try
it'll take little more time and only maan can win his trust again
continue soon