MG-FF-Mann se Zude Risthey-#4-Pt-48-pg 124

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rsusmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

nice part dear waiting for maan and geet reuinion ,

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Mina420

@Mina420

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

I enjoy ur ff a lot... but I think maan would turn into a vilain if he goes on and takes custody of pari...
He is already not really understanding the troubles Geet had to go through because of him and this decision would break them apart even further. Maybe Maan could marry Geet at least to save her and pari from nita and her family or geet goes away and maan misses geet and pari. when he sees geet in difficulties, he will realise what he did...
I don't know how far you have planned the story. If you have already planned a lot then ignore my ideas but if you havn't then plz don't turn maan into a villain but correct him...

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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

nice part
but why maan is just thinking about himself and pari only and not for geet
continue soon

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vrinda22

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

nice part..still maaan wants pari's custody..he is not thinking about geet

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

maan is still trying to take custody of pari

before i thought he felt guilty and will realise his mistakes and try to amend them

but no

seriously this MSK disgusts me

how can he think in such a manner

and meera

she calls herself geets sister but doesnt care abt her feelings

she wants a happy family but forgot abt the pain geet had to face

the problems pari will face when people will ask abt her father

mohinders pain to see his only daughter raped and living sucha dry life with no life partner and just responsibilities

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Beautiful update dear

what is wrong with maan. he is thinking about pari's custody

when will he relize his mistake😡

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lg001

@lg001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

nice part...
but till now maan is only thinking about how 2 be with pari forever...
he is not thinking how geet will survive without pari...

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

office mai horlics maanu 😆😆😆😆
hayee i really lv maan n pari
i lv their scene ... awesome...👏👏👏👏
wow both r effecting each other...😉😉😃
omg maanu want pari's custode oye maanu wt abt geet
usko b apni apni custody mi lelo..uf
babaji
maanet ka kya hoga...😕

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it...

geet sahi hai apne jagah par...magar aur nehi...abb kuch zaada hi ho raha hai...thoda romantic hona chahiye...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also....

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...