[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89] - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Awesome start Shika! 🤗 Loved it!

The initial description was like a beautiful ,sweet dream and Tadaan suddenly appears The Maan! He enters like a Don and scares the princess!! 😎 😆
BTW...Geet's fear reminds me of one Uncle, I was always scared of that uncle when I was a child!😕 Now , he sometimes asks me the reason behind those weird expressions of mine but I never answer that question , I myself don't know the reason actually! His scary voice might be one of the reasons! 🤣
Why is Geet's Teddy's name chocolate ? Now even I feel like eating a chocolate! 😆
Beautiful part!
Do continue soon...Will be waiting for the next part! 😊


Dude what are you doing here?😆
It is really embarrassing when our friends read whatever crap we write. Isn't it?😆
oh yeah about the scared uncle wala part even I have a memory. I will tell you more about it in 5 minutes. Right now me in skype and doing combined studies with my friend :P rofl
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So when I was a kid, there was this uncle near to our home and I dreaded him. He was sweet with all the kids but I don't know why I was shit scared of him. For no apparent reason. So much so that whenever our Rikshaw crossed their home, and if he was outside I used to hide myself crouching back. He many a time tried to call me, get me chocolates and what not but I always ran away from him. Actually my bhai and all the kids of our locality were friendly with him and even my parents were his friends whatever. So one fine day he got pissed off, stopped the Rickshaw on the way back my home, and with the help of my co rickshaw mates, who were laughing, he pulled me out, literally carried me like a sack of potatoes over his shoulder, took to his home, dumped the chocolates he bought for me and made me watch TV with his mother. Forcefully. I hated watching that show. But who'd listen to me. Argh. I hated him. BTW I was studying first standard then😆
Edited by Cloud9. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

AA gayi tu? Meri twinnie?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
what a lovely start
one scold from maan left a scar on her for ever
she loves him byt fears him too

and maan wants to tlk to her but finds it impossible
what is rehan upto

wish you could change it into an ss or ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
lovely n amazing part


loved it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
hi there..of cos we missed u! Congrats on the SS !🤗 thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! Loved it! Well written! 👏 Hmm..So Maan likes Geet bt will nt admit it! Geet n her teddy bear ! Geet sees Maan n is shocked! Maan staring at Geet! Maan upset tht Geet caught him! Who left teh card! Wat will Rehan get? Wat will Geet tell Rehan! I added u as a buddy, pls accept! Btw still waiting 4 da epilogue for a little to late to love! (Hope its the rite title lol). Update soon n do pm me! Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ITS MAAN OBVIOUSLY!AN THIS STORY GOONA BE SPECIAL COZ MY BIRTHDAY IS 16 FEB!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabuls start. do continue n add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Interesting part ...
Cont. plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
congrats on the new ff
interesting start
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
absolutely loved it
awesome start dear👏

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