SS: Near to you: Teaser 22/6 pg 120

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26_chaitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Amazing!!!!!!!!

Too emotional update.

thankz for the pm

continue soon...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Wow...a nice new story...

I should confess that I am happy that Maan is still there... sorry !

Love the new feel about it...Geet and Vicky seemed so much in love...waiting to see what will happen in the future and how Geet moves on, if she does...

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

part 1
oh that was so painful...
painful to see Maan burying his love and happiness and sadness within himself...
the first meet was so lovely...
cont soon dear...

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amrutavjoshi

@amrutavjoshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Wow

Emotional Update...
First School Meet was too Good...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

geet and vicky loved each other and married also...(me sad)

feel sad for maan...she is infornt of his eyes but cant get her

but still till date he is willingly helping her

I have one question...really geet dont have any idea that maan also loved her...I think women are very expert in sensing such things...

T4pm

cont soon

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

such a touchy update.. pls cont soon..

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

that was quite an emotional and touching part

a glimpse in the past and maan is in love with geet always loved her
that was awesome
lovely update
continue soon
waiting for more

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

My heart went out to the pain that Geet is feeling at having lost her husband. 😭

My heart went out to the pain that Maan has been feeling since he realised Geet couldn't be his. 😭

My heart went out the the mother who lost her son so young. 😭

Needless to say that the update made me really sad.

Maan had to suffer because he had never been verbal with his feelings. But he still wanted happiness for his cousin and his best friend. Such a beautiful heart he has! 😳

Like I said before, your readers can actually feel the characters' feelings. You portrayed their feelings beautifully! 😊

And, the song perfectly suited to what Maan was feeling seeing Geet's condition.

I wonder if this story is going to be a happily-ever-after... 😕 Guess I'll have to wait.

Thanks for the PM. 😊

Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago