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Maan lost in her eyes, Geet felt some thing, seeing Maan ki eyes, she thought to not to find anything,






she diverted her eyes from him..Geet saw they position and felt embrassed and try to get up, but wen Maan didt response, she poke him on his shoulder , Maan came back to his sense, and got up, give his hand to Geet, but Geet stood by herself,


Maan : wat te hell is tis Geet

Geet : wat

Maan : why u poured water on me,

Geet : why u off te tv

Before they continue they fight, Geet saw through te window it was raining, she went out , she got so excited and started to call Anni

Geet : Anni Anni cum out

Anni too came out and saw Geet is playing in te rain, she too join her





Maan : u both cum in

But they didt listen to him and started to play in te rain

Maan saw both of them and admiring they excitement, he saw Anni first and then Geet,they both are playing like a kids.






Maan smiles at them, but he shift his eyes to Geet , wen he saw Geet , he got lost in her, te way her childish antics and te way her expression, te way she playing like kid in te rain, her every expression sends a shiver through his blood. He cant take his eyes from her.





Maan was seeing her from head to toe, were her dress stick to her body like second skin, he was burning in his desire seeing her for first time so close, but he close his eyes


Anni saw Maan was standing near te entrance, Geet winks at her, and next moment Maan was pulled by Anni and Geet ,Maan was shocked to see he is wetting in te rain.


Maan : Anni wat is tis,

Anni : ah tis is rain Bhai

Maan : u both I wont leave u

Maan started to chase both of them, Dadi was watching them and having tears in her eyes,


Maan was chasing them , they were playing like small kids, forgetting they past.. Anni went inside km, and stood behind Dadi, Maan didt realize it but chasing Geet , Geet too running, , Dadi and Anni stood and watching them


Once they both cant run

Geet : pls Maanji wait wait ,


she was breathing heavily, Maan too stop and panting


Geet : Maan ji pls I cant run

Maan was staring at her , te way her dress and te way she breathing taking his breath out.he lost in her

Geet saw Maan who lost some were : Maanji Maanji

Maan came back to sense (st) : wat te hell im thinking abt Geet, no I cant


Suddenly, thunder hit ad Geet got scared and hugs Maan, Maan was shocked to see Geet hugging him, he tightened his fist, . Geet hugging him so close , breaking Maan's little bit control,



Maan too started to hug her , he was holding her tight and crushing her inside his arms. both are lost in they hug that they don't know , wat they doing.. Geet felt some familiar touch and Maan feeling her inside him.


Both came back to sense with another thunder sound, Geet was shocked and crying holding her mouth , Maan too shocked wat he did, both look each other, one is ashamed and one in guilty.







Geet : im sorry,

Maan : im sorry

Both said

Geet : im scared of thunder so im sorry , and runs inside km





Maan stood in te rain and feeling her touch, it was felt like pure, washing his all sins, . he felt blessed to have her so close . he smiles from his heart. But he don't know, his heart was jumping in happiness realizing his love which he didt realize still.



Geet went to her room and lock herself in te washroom and stood under te shower and crying. Trying to rub Maan ki touch. She was rubbing





Geet : no wat I did , only my Guru have te rights to touch me, only my Guru, she started to rub her body vigorously to erase Maan touch


After some time she came out of te wash room and lye on her bed,

Geet (st): oh god wat will Maanji will think abt me, babaji, she lyed on her bed staring at ceiling.


Here Maan too stood under te shower thinking abt they hug, he was still feeling Geet touch in his body,




Maan (st) : no I cant think like tis, no nooo

Both lying on they bed thinking abt they feeling

Next day morning,


All sat, for breakfast,

Maan gaze was on Geet, but Geet avoids him and started to behave nothing happen last night

Anni : oh god Geet tis much dishes , u cooked , wow

Geet smiles : yes u like it


Dadi and Anni was happy to see Geet like tis and thought last night ki effect

Anni : I know for whom u looked all tis , eyeing Maan

Maan can sense Anni indicating him and he felt nice tat some one is cooking for him, but his thinking brokes by Geet ki next set of words


Geet : yes Anni , I cooked for u r Bhai, Guru,

Anni and Dadi chocked and Maan felt some thing hit hard on his heart,


Geet : yes Anni from yesterday I was thinking to cook Guru ka fav, but he is not there to eat, atleast I can cook for him naa, u know naa he love my cooking


Dadi : Geet tis all Maan's fav too

Geet : ohhh, u remember Anni wen we cook , Guru will be roaming around te kitchen itself

Anni : hmm Geet, how can, and how we will mess full kitchen and Guru bhai will clean it

Geet smiles with tears,

Maan : im finished , Anni , u and Geet can go in together, im leaving

Anni : ok Bhai

Geet : bye Maanji

Maan turns : hmm and went off

Anni : Geet I will get my bag

Geet : hmm

Dadi went behind Anni,

Dadi : Anni , buddhu

Anni : Dadi why scolding me

Dadi : I planning to bring Geet and Maan closer but u spoil it

Anni : wat I did

Dadi : Geet was talking abt Guru, im trying to stop but u are

Anni : oh im sorry Dadi , I didt think in tat way im so sorry Dadi

Dadi : it s ok beta, I thought they will cum close after te last night but it became reversed

Anni : Dadi it is so hard to get Guru bhai out from Geet heart

Dadi : hmmm

Anni : but Maan bhai can do it, but he himself avoiding her

Dadi smirk suddenly

Anni : wat happen Dadi

Dadi kissed Anni : u gave a superb idea

Anni : wat

Dadi : only Maan can bring old Geet back and make her to fall for him

Anni : Maan bhai, but he is looking at Geet itself, then how cum he will


Dadi : u don't know abt Maan, I can see some kind of attraction towards Geet, but we have to make realize his love, once he did, sure he will make Geet fall for him


Anni : if it happens I will be te happiest person Dadi and hugs her

Dadi : me too, ok now u leave Geet will cum searching of u

KC,


Maan cant concentrate on his work, wat ever he dose last night moment flashes in front of him, te way Geet hugs him, her touch, her smell, everything making him insane.



Maan closed his eyes, some one knock on his door

Maan : cum in

Again some one knock

Maan got irritated : who is tat but frozed seeing Geet peeping through te door




Maan : Geet tum

Geet smiles at him and hugs him : Maanji

Maan came back to sense , wen Tasha calls him

Tasha : GM sir

Maan : ahan , u

Tasha got confused : sir

Maan straigtened himself : ahan Tasha anything

Tasha : sir u called for dictation

Maan : ahan , Maan started to dictated but , he suddenly feels Geet was standing behind him

Geet : Maanji I wrote wat u said see me naa




Maan smiles at her : yes Geet

Tasha : sir Geet who is Geet

Maan came back to sense : get out

Tasha runs out scared of Maan ki anger

Maan (st) : wat happen to me, I cant stay here , he throws his tie in frustration,




he called Adi and inform him he is going out and went out


Anni ki college.

Geet and Anni are in one car, first Geet came to drop Anni in her college

Anni : Geet fisrt time u r cuming to my college, cum i will show my friends

Geet : no Anni im already late, i will cum some other

Anni : no way, and then i got new friend Sameera , i want to intro to u.


As te car stops in front te college, Anni came out dragging Geet with her, at tat time a girl came to wish her

Sameera : hai Anni, , she was shocked to see a girl beside her

Anni : hai Sameera

Sam : Anni who is tis angel

Anni giggles : no she is My friend cum Bhabhi

Sam : bhabhi?, ur bhai ki wife, she is married ?

Ani : why u so shocked , she is Geet

Sam : Geet whom u will be talking abt her for every mins

Anni : hmm she is te one

Sam : hai Geet im Sameera khanna, Anni ki friend , and now urs too

Geet smiles at her : hai Sam

Sam gives her hand , Geet too her hand for friendly shakes

Sam : then why u not wearing any symbols

Geet : he is no more

Anni : Geet t


Sam : Geet im sorry but i know all abt u, u know , i dont have my mother, wen i born she left me , our lovable ones are leaving us it does means tat we dont have any one, they know they leaving us in safe hands. me with my dad, and u with Anni ki bhai Maan.


Geet looks at her

Sam : im sorry to interfere in ur personal, but ur my friedn im saying tis to u

Geet smiles at her : im getting late, we will meet some other day

Sam : hmm

Geet : bye Anni

Anni didt response

Geet : ok im sorry, now give me my hug

Anni smiles at her and hugs her : bye Geet

Sam : sorry Anni i have hurt Geet

Anni hugs her : no Sam , u done a good thing by saying abt Maan bhai, which she still didt realize, she have to get all her happiness


Sam wipes her tears : u know im feeling jealous seeing u both, how u are bonded together and crying for each other, but i dont have any sibblings to share anything nor good friends

Anni : hello drama queen, dare u sya anything im there for u, and now geet too

Sam : hmm ok now cum we go to our class




HERE MAAN


Maan took his car and went out of delhi, driving his car in full speed . His heart is burning with lost of emotions, he want to cool it, but how. he dont know were he is going but he want to get rid of his new feelings. He went to top of hill and stood and shouting AHHH AHHH AHHH




Maan : why again and again Geet is cuming in my thoughts, how I can think her like tis , no I cant think like tis, she is Guru's , I don't have any place in her heart , I have to control myself, I cant let any one to rule me, no can rule me , Geet cant rule me, Geet cant, Geet, but he stops



Maan : wat im thinking Geet , no she is nothing to me, I cant think her like tis, no she is nothing to me, nothing

GEET IS U R EVERYTHING MAAN

Maan turned hearing te voice

Maan : GURU

Guru : ahan Maan she is everything to u

Maan at once saw Guru , rush to him , hugs him and started to cry like a small kid.

Maan : why u left me, why why








PRECAP : MAAN REALIZING ,

next part-17,69


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

Maan is hallucinating Geet everywhere n can't concentrate on his work

Aniee introducing Geet to Sameera n Sameera try to make Geet understand tht no one leave u alone there is always someone who will be there to save u

Maan screaming out on the hilltop as he is feeling restless to hv feeling for Geet

Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc update!!!
maan n geet's hug was so nyc..
dadi is the super cupid..
maan n guru convo was so nyc..
waiting fr next part ⭐️
Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous
maan is confused one side and geet avoiding him
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Hope both realize their feelings soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...two confused souls...do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo maan toh realise kiya k he loves geet...magar geet k kya kiya jaye...she is not ready to give her life a second chance...such a stuborn...its really tuff fr her to let another person to come to her life but whn she is married t maan she has to try atleast...she is taking maan fr granted...lets see wht maan ll do...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooowww superb update nalini...:):):)
so maaneet r feeling sumthing sumthing when they r with each other..:):) its a gud sign hai na GEET K BABAJI...;);)
yeah dadi is ryt maan is attracted towards geet since frm last nyt incident bt the only thing is he didnt realize this yet...:-|
precap was wonderful...:) wait ing fr next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
hayee love maaneet moments
now maan is going to realize his feelings
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
Maaneet is so confused...
Hope soon they ll realise it...
Dadi and anni playin games..good work...
Continue soon...

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