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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends ..?
hw r u all ...😊
chalo pehle sorry ..kafi late kardiya ...
then gud news this is not the last part ...thr is one more left ..😳
and now wanna share a grt news with u all ,...
last night Almighty blessed my family with a sweet little angel girl ...
n now me promoted as a Phoppo ...😃

enough of my bak bak ..
here is the update ..

Friends In Love ...😳


PART 10

While maan was in his same thoughts the next moment from geet made him surprised …his sweet innocent friend authoritively kept her head on his chest holding his arm slept peacefully …the first reaction came from maan was shocked …to feel her soo close not that it was the first time she was sleeping like that but then the realization n acceptance for the real feeling they have made it all different …it feel so soothing to feel her close like he possess her …like she just for him ..all for him …with him …always ..

Smiling looking at the serene face of geet maan was all the while staring at her sleeping form with utmost admiration …

Its was hour since they were traveling after that …maan was sitting with closed eyes leaned on the seat …holding geet in his arms like his most possessed treasure … feeling the contentment ..the peace after confessing his heart ..somewhere realizing the love geet always showered over him remembering the past …smiling occasionally on his innocent jangli billi … feeling high with every flashback somewhere realizing that what ever vineet uncle said was true …true that geet's love has no boundaries just the way her mischief doesn't have …but somewhere in the corner of his heart the fear with the thought of her nave mind n nature which will not let it easy for him to make her believe n confess her love was not letting him be calm …n the reason coz of which even after soo much fuzz he was still not having any slightest tint of sleep in his eyes …but the love was oozing out of his non-stop staring session …

It was almost night even In the outskits the sun was going below the horizon allowing the shimmering light took over the sky n decorate it with the beautiful colors of red n pink …. Suddenly the car started jerking on a aloof road ...breaking the deep slumber of geet n making maan come out of his thoughts ..his grip of geet tighten n geet adjusted her view ..n that's when vicky said he will go out n see what happened with the car …n maan gazed geet ..moving the loose strands back of her ear ever so softly gazing her with so much love n care ..holding her face in his palm ..looking her with a slight smile …while geet was just staring at him confused ...but still couldn't break the eye lock they were having …like trying to see something ..wanting to find something in the depth of those dark chocolate brown eyes …holding his shoulder for support ..n moved sideway still in his warm embrace …she moved forward n that's when maan noticed the confusion written all over her face …making him realize thr proximity …n immediately removed his hands from her waist n freed her from his iron grip …but to his surprise she didn't removed her hands from his shoulders 😳…n her eyes were still lost in his …her eyes were not scared ..not teary ..not even confused a the moment …but a new feel was thr in her hold …the look that made him lost in the love shinning in those hazels ….soo much of love was clearly reflecting in her beautiful hazel eyes making him forget the whole world .. but the next moment a loud voice came from outside n both came out of there trance ..geet immediately removed her hands from his shoulders n maan looked outside ..

Cursing himself to have behaved that way ..but then the look in her eyes made him freeze at the moment …n he looked at her direction ..confused what he felt ..n saw in her eyes ..LOVE ..!!
The thought came n he turned to her side but seeing her looking out of the window just made him disappointed n concluding that its his desperation which is making him feel so ..taking a deep breath he put up all his guts n said ..

Maan : geet u be here …mien dekhta hoon vicky ko ..phir hum yahan se chalet hain ..okiee ..

As she nodded ..maan made his way out n asked vicky n other guards who were standing infront of opening the bonnet of car …trying to know whats the problem …then deciding they will proceed in other car leaving this one with driver when maan made his way towards the back side …shock n fear took over his senses for a second not seeing geet in the back seat …n he panicked sending all the guards to look for her ..n vicky too got scared with the news …n both maan n vicky made thr way in either directions …

Geet was heading towards the end of the cliff ..slowly trying to balance her weak structure on the uneven ground …wanting to see the beautiful pink sky n the sun setting down the horizon …but the next moment she tripped n was about to fall down on the ground but the next moment a strong support came from back n she felt a hand on her stomach n another on her shoulder supporting her …preventing her to touch the hard ground …opening the her scared eyes she saw a worried concerning pair of eyes looking at her panic was clear on his face …n a small weak smile made her lips curved seeing him holding her protectively …that definitely worked to cool down maan … she felt him being relaxed n she lowered her lashes feeling tickled with the touch of his palm which was now on her waist …but maan was still confused with her red cheeks …the situation n her reaction was not making sense ..cupping her face he made her look into his eyes …he said ..

Maan : tumhain sun set dekhna hai ..?

Geet was again surprised …how he got to know ..?? but then his eyes n the concern n thr depth was making her sense numb with the new found feelings … something which she never experienced before being with him … lowering her head she just nodded n took a step away from him walking 2wards the cliff end but next moment her breaths got caught in her lungs ..n heart beat rose to an exceptional level feeling herself in his arms …close to his heart ..in his embrace …she gasped with the realization he had actually lifted her off her feet …😳

Geet : maan …

He stopped for a second n her red flushed face was again making him loose his senses to this one n only love of his life …forcing him to believe what he was seeing in her eyes from the moment they met …but her gasp made him come back from his trance n he looked at her uncomfortably ..

Maan : wohh u r bruised …n weak too …tou I thought ..i mean ..😕

But before he could complete his explanation geet cut him in-between n said ever soo cutely ..with a baby angry face looking at the drowning sun …

Geet : maan mera view miss hugaya na tou fir dekhna aap …😕



Maan looked her instantly shocked with her statement … he was not expecting this atleast not after seeing her blush …but then sighed knowing its his innocent jangli billi …way too childish & stubborn with him …n ONLY WITH HIM ..that's what makes him happier the way she claims her every right on him .. as if she owns him …well she does ..every single inch of his existence belongs to her n only her ..😃

Sitting near the edge of the cliff ..maan messaged vicky to have found geet ..n then looked at her lost seeing the sun setting down the horizon …her face n mist eyes was making it clear enough for him that she is again thinking about past 2 days n her good for nothing dad …placing his hand on hers' … hating the feel of helplessness not able to take her all sorrows …but her next set of words just wrecked his heart all the more …

Geet : yeh sab kyun hua Maan …mere saath hi kyun ..??

the painful low voice n her gaze fixed on the drowning sun ..just made him feel her pain all the more .. making it impossible for him to control his own emotions …intervening thr fingers making the hold tighter ..the only word came from his mouth was nothing but her name …

Maan : geet …

But she was still lost thinking about all the harshness of her dad ..trying to reason it all ..just wanting to know what n where things went wrong ..the long held tears made thr way out ..n she dipped her head down ..sobbing .. hurt pouring out her questions in front of him ..making him feel like kill those bas**** ..

Geet : dad kyun mujh se itni nafrat kartein hain maan …(sob) mien itni boori hoon kya …pata hai mene itne saaloon mien kayi baar daai jan se bhi poocha ke mene koi galti ki hai kiya jo dad mujhe itna hate karte hain …par unhoon ne bhi mujhe kabhi jawaab nahi diya (sob) …meri kya galti hai maan ..kyun koi mujhe pyaar nahi karta …kyun .😭.

That was enough for him to hold back ..he moved closer n embrace her as tight as he could not letting a single inch space between them …hiding her in himself to protect his innocent jangli billi from this mean world …wanting to erase all her pain n fill her again with the happiness n mischief which she carried in herself always ..

Maan : koi galti nahi hai tumhari geet ..koi galti nahi hai …galti un logoon ki hai jinhoon ne tumhain dukh diya …meri jangli billi ..meri best friend kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti …kabhi galat nahi ho sakti samjhi tum …aur ab kabhi meri geet ko galat mat kehna …who buhat achi hai iss dunya ki sabse achi dost …sabse achi saathi ….samjhi tum ..kabhi aisa mat kehna ...

Geet ( snuggling close in his arm wanting to burry herself in her warmth never to let go ..feeling the peace she sob hard ) : tou phir kyun koi mujh se pyaar nahi karta kyun maan …kyun ..

Maan (tightning his hold on her back almost crushing her bone not able to take her tears n the pain which he was feeling seeing his strong friend like this all broken ) : kis ne kaha koi tumse pyaar nahi karta ..han kis ne ...mien karta hoon ..buhat pyaar karta hoon tumse geet buhat …😲😳👏

His words just made her heart skip a beat …she parted from the hug not believing the words she just heard …looking straight in his eyes wanting to know what he just said ..while he was still feeling the pain …hating his own self cursing himself to have left her alone to suffer …holding his own self guilty for what ever she w4ent through in last 2 days …witnessing her eyes full of tears ..cupping her face in his palms removing the tears from her face he simply confessed his heart looking straight into her eyes …


Maan : plss geet kabhi aisa mat sochana ke tum akeli ho …aisa kabhi nahi hosakta …jab tak Maan zinda hai yeh kabhi nahi hoga …mien humesha rahoonga tumhare saath …tumhara dost ban kar ..har mor par tumhara saath dene tumhara saathi ban kar …har rah mien ….zindagi ke har safar mien tumhare saath dene tumhara humsafar ban kar …yeh wada hai mera …aur haq bhi ..humesha tumhare saath tumhara saya ban har mushkil mien tumhain sambhal ne mien rahonga tumhare saath geet …tumhare har aansoon ko tumse churane ..har takleef se bachane …mien wada karta hoon aaj ke baad kabhi tumse door nahi jaonga …kabhi tumhain akela nahi choroonga …kabhi nahi ..kabhi bhi nahi geet …

For geet world just freeze with his pure n simple words …which reflected his heart …like some magic was done on her n all her pain ..all of her bruises were healed with just his words ..the love oozing out of his eyes captivated her in them …making her forget the whole world ..a cool breeze passed by them ..n the darkness engulf the whole area with stars shimmering in the sky glittering the teary eyes of both staring at each other with oceans of love n care for each other …talking thousands of words yet silence prevailed …

There are just so many words
But I can't find one that's perfectly true.

You're the only one I desire
You're the only one in my heart
Through good and bad times
Nothing can keep us apart.

To my one and only love
That no one will ever compare
Take this simple vow …
Let this be my devotion forever.

I love you and I will never leave you
No matter what happens I'll always be true
Though times may be rough
and days may be tough
I'll stick with you through and through
until the next life ...

After a moment or so maan broked th eye contact n looked away while Geet just lost herself in the words of Daai jan ..remembering what she said when she was making her believe that she is just friends with maan …

(friends it a scene when geet was in chaudhry's farmhouse n daai jan asked her if she loves maan n geet snapped back at her explaining her relation with maan to daai jan but I left it in complete n now narrating the whole scene after geet explained her feelings ..)

Flashback ….

daai jan was looking at this mad girl with a smile on her face n teary eyes ..admiring her love …trust …n bond she has made up with maan ..

Daai Jan : geet aap agar yeh jaanti hain ke aapka aur maan ka rishta dosti se alag hai tou yeh bhi jan lejiye bete ke …

jo shaqs zindagi bhar aapka saath nibhata hai wohh aapka dost ..aapka sabse acha dost tou ho sakta hai magar … Aapka sab se acha dost bhi aapka saath zindagi bhar nahi de sakta ek na ek din zaror aata hai jab usski zindagi mien koi aapse bhi ziada khas koi aajata hai aur phir wohh rishta dosti par bhari par jata hai …

geet looked at her shocked with her last set of word ..she could never imagine maan distancing him from her …before that moment she would prefer to die …

jo aapko girne se bhi pehle bacha le itna bharosa kisi aam dost par tou nahi hota geet … aisa ho hi nahi sakta geet ke koi insaan kisi ko bina apne dil mien jaga diye huye usse par aankh band karke vishwas karle ..

kaise koi insaan apne dost ko itne ache se jaan sakta hai ke dono ke beech lafzoon ki zarorat hi na hoo …geet ek dost aapki pasand na pasand ..aap kab kaise react karienge sab jaan sakta hai par bete koi chahe bhi tou bhi sirf kisi dost ke itne gehre jazbaat nahi jaan sakta …ke ek nazar se hi usske dil ki baat jan le ..yeh rishta yeh ehsaas dosti se kahin aage hai geet …

geet lowered her eyes ..not able to comprehend what daai jan was saying about thr friendship ..just can't accept all this or rather say name her feeling correctly ..but somewhere daai jan's words were effecting her …

geet ek dost se hum apne dil ki har baat har jazbaat bant sakte hain sab kuch share kar sakte hain ..par agar uss hi dost se ek baar baat kar ke agar lage ke jaise saare dukh halke hugaye tou yeh sirf dost nahi ho sakta hai geet …yeh rishta aur yeh bandhan kisi dost ke saath nahi ho sakta geet ...

geet was remembering all the time when she was with maan lost in those blissful memories ..back in hostel n then what they shared here in delhi ..the moments came in front of her eyes making her vision blur with the tears n she closed her eyes remembering the memories of the dance n rain hug ….

dekho apne aap ko geet …aaj iss waqt jab dunya ki koi bhi larki apni jaan apni izat ke bare mien sochegi tum yahan sirf maan ke bare mien soch rahi hoo …plzz beta apne dil ki awaaz ko sunno mien jaanti hoon ..tumhain kabhi zindagi ne koi khushi nahi di hai geet magar aaj kismat ne tumhain mauqa diya hai apni taqdeer ka faisla khud karne ka …apni saari khushiyoon ko pane ka …

tum kehti thi na ke maan ke saath har lamha khubsurat tha …unke saath kabhi akelapan mehsoos nahi hua ..aur jab se unnse door huyi kabhi hasne ka mann hi nahi karta …geet itna asar kisi dost mien nahi hota ke uski dosti aapko apne aapse hi anjaan karde …yeh haq tou sirf uss insaan ko diya jata hai jo aapke dil ko apna bana leta hai …jis se aap pyaar karte ho ..

tou maanlo geet …plss beta chali jaao yahan se ..buhat door apne maan ke paas aur keh do ussko ke tum uss se kitna pyaar karti ho …sahab kuch nahi kar sakte maan ka …maan le mere baat geet bhag jaa yahan se apne pyaar ko dosti ka naam de kar un-dekha mat karoo geet ..kahin aisa na ho ke tum phir se sab kuch khoo do …

geet just looked at her horrified …eyes popped out teary with all the events …it was too much for her to handle in all this situation ..n now excepting her feeling for her best friend was way too much …

Flashback Ends

But now every single word of daai jan's was making her shiver with the realization of her feelings …recalling her every act with maan ..the way she use to get pissed off seeing sam with maan in hostel n then how in all these years she use to tear off the newspapers having maan's pic with some random girl in any party ..the way she always use to feel secure with him around …thr bond ..the friendship ..the trust ..all the feeling which she shared with him n only with him ..vicky was also a friend & has become a very good close mate of her during last few year but she never felt that way with him ..the feel of peace which surrounds her every time he is with her …the feel of belonging ..the feel of possession like she can do what she want with him …that was never thr with anyone else in the whole world ..the way she could express herself in front of him ..she wasn't even able to express herself in front of daai jan ..the way she always behaves in front of him she never does ..in last 6 years she have managed to live life with utmost maturity ..facing the world …excelling in her work …everything was much more different …she was different till the moment they met …she started doing things which she never did in last 7 years …acting so childish …making him trouble ..throwing all type of nakhras …but what made her think that he will fulfill n tolerate all her tantrums …he is the business tycoon of India but still she made him sit with H.G ..but he never said anything …he is a man who is known for his attitude n arrogance still just coz she said he danced in the middle of road …n then just coz she was in danger he risked his life just to save her …even after all what she said to him on call …the way he had beaten rohan when he tried to touch her …all came in front of her eyes ..every thing ..every minute ..every incident …n reality drown upon her that she actually loves him ..

The mere thought was enough to make her shudder …n instantly her gaze traveled up to look at maan's face ..who was shocked …n somewhere frustration was clearly visible on his face ..the frustration made her scared to the core …n she just kept looking at him with a longing face wanting to see his deep brown eyes which always reflects his heart …wanting to know if he is doubtful of what he said …the thought was not less than death …a moment before she realized her love n the very moment she saw the regretful face of the person she loves the most in the world ..confused she was still looking at him in that darkness ….

While he was looking away seeing everywhere else than her ..from the moment he said all that …. her shocked lost face just made him realize that he actual confessed his feelings to her ..frustrated he was thinking what she might be thinking after hearing all that …will she accept his love or will she leave him …he was still in a delima occasionally looking at her but founding her lost he looked away thinking she will be angry or must be confused with his sudden confession …

Both were in thr reveries when Vicky came saw them holding each others hand n looking the other way …he sat beside geet holding her shoulder …n that's what made them realize his presence ..

Vicky : geet just don't worry hum hain abb yahan ….pata hai jab se humien pata chala ke tumhare kidnapping ke bare mien maan bhai aur mien kitna darr gaye thay …

Geet just looked at him blank with no emotions ..which vicky mistook as fear ..but his word made her look at maan n she saw the pain in his eyes piercing her heart …knowing his protective nature …she just smiled tightening her hold on his which was still thr intervened with hers' …realizing he must have made the world up side down to search her …the smile left maan confused after what ever happened few minutes back he couldn't comprehend to what was running in her mind ..but she never fails to surprise him with her innocent yet genuine attempt to make him smile …

Geet : fear n Maan Singh Khurana ….vicky ….
combination kuch acha nahi hai ..😃

A small smile came on both thr faces seeing her smiling with full dimples ..n vicky hugged her sideways ..while she playfully tried to get out of his grip but vicky didn't left n eventually geet fell on maan's chest n maan supported her 😳..vicky's hand was still on her shoulder unable to release it ….but chuckled seeing the eye lock session his bro was having with geet …but what he admired the most was the concern they held for each other where everything come second in thr life ….then came a remark from geet …

Geet : gosh choro mujhe ….lagta hai Khurana Brothers aaj mujhe marne ke irade se aaye hain …get off me u both wrestlers ..pata nahi kya khate hoo ..

Maan was a bit relaxed with this …her smile n her chirpy self made him feel less conscious ..with what ever he said to her ..but the confusion was still thr …n the question remained un-answered for him ….Y SHE DIDN'T REACT TO ALL WHAT HE SAID ..??

Geet n vicky were lost seeing the shimmer-y sky while maan was gazing her angelic face in the dim light of the stars n the deep eyes focused on the sky …something told him she was not alright n he was right when he felt something very hot in his hand ..n then it came to his mind that he is still holding her hand but why is it soo hot …he looked down n realized it was actually very hot ..next he checked her forehead n cheeks …they were burning with fever ..n the cold winds just made it all worst …vicky noticed him panic n asked what happened …to which maan answered in angry voice ..looking at a confused geet ..

Maan : vicky go now aur guards ko kaho car yahan laaye n ask Sister Naina to call Dr.Mathore at KM before we reach thr ….

Vickt was stunned with the sudden panicked n angry tone of his brother while geet was frowning looking at his red face indicating he is super angry ..but then crossing her fingers tried to say something …

Geet : Maan mien theek

but failed seeing the angry glare the great MSK was giving her ..n then looking straight into her eyes he roared at vicky making geet jump back not that she was scared of his anger but with the high pitch …

Maan : vicky NOW ..

Trying her luck she again tried to cool him ..

Geet : maan relax mien ..

Maan : chup bilkul chup 😳…ek lafz aur nahi …jab bolna tab tou bola nahi ..geet tum pagal huyi hoo itne time se yahan open air mien itne high fever mien bethi hoo ….

Geet : arre mien

Maan : u just leave it ..tum se baat karna hi fazool hai ..waise bhi tumne kab apna dhyaan rakha hai jo abb rakho gi …..

Geet (making a cute puppy face) : aap mujhe dant rahe hoo …(fake sobbing ..snorting her nose) ..ek tou iss bechari bachi ko bukhaar hugaya aur aap dant rahe hoo …dekho na babji kaise zalim dost diye hain aapne apni geet ki life mien ..dekho kaise dusht danav ki tarha dantna choro kar diya ….

Maan : geet ..!!!!! stop it aur abb se koi baat nahi sunne wala tumhari samjhi tum ..

Geet : par maan ..

Vicky : bhai bilkul theek keh rahe hain …(wrapping her with his jacket) … koi tumhari baat nahi sunn raha yahan …aur abb chalo car aagayi ..

Saying so vicky made his way towards the car leaving shivering geet with a frowned face …n confused maan ..no matter what so ever she do or how much she try her pain is something which is meant to be felt by him …

Maan was still confused seeing her face which was now facing the other side with a frown but he can clearly see the pain on it …but what confused him was that thr was no reaction from her side after what ever he said ….good or bad …. Surprised or shocked happy or angry …something or anything ..just anything but her silence was killing him ..feeling something terribly wrong has happened n for him it was his set of words …but her constant attempts to surpress her pain n tears faking it to be her smile or fake anger …the fact that she was faking something in front of him …the realization that she was hiding her pain from him made his heart wrench in pain …

He came out of his trance with a shouting voice of vicky …n geet tried to stand up but due to her weakness was about to fall …n exactly at the right moment maan scooped her shivering body in the warmth of his embrace ..


Geet looked at him with a slight painful smile …n that's when maan looked at her n their eyes met ..the intensity in either of the eyes …the emotions oozing out from the depth of thr eyes just didn't let any of them to broke the eye contact …n maan walked ahead 2wards the car ..while geet kept looking at him ..

Geet (st) : pata nahi zindagi abb kis mor par lee jaigi humari dosti ko maan ..aaj iss pal mien sach mien nahi janti ke aage kiya huga …nahi janti ke jo kuch aapne kaha uss par bharosa karoon ya jo regret mene aapki ankho mien dekha uss ko sach mano ..par itna zaror hai ke aaj mene apni zindagi ka sab se bara sach jana hai …..daai jan ki ek ek baat sach thi maan ….han karti hoon mien aapse pyaar …itna ke mujhe bhi iss pyaar ki haad nahi pata …par bas itna pata hai ke ab agar aapse door hona para tou jee nahi paaongi ….

aur iss hi liye agar meri dosti mujhe aapke paas rakh sakti hai tou yehi sahi …aapke saath se ziada mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye maan ..kuch bhi nahi …. agar mene aapko bata diya aur phir se kismat ne meri khushyan mujh se cheenli tou shayad yeh bardaasht nahi kar paaongi ….aapki ankhoon mien who regret mien dobara nahi dekh paongi ….iss hi liye humara rishta humesha aisa hi rahega maan ….humesha …..mien poori zindagi aapki dost ban kar khush reh sakti hoon maan bas sirf aapka saath chahiye …

Maan carefully placed geet in the car ..n they drove off to KM …

Its was quite late when they reached KM …geet was feeling dizzy due to weakness so maan carried her inside in his arm ☺️….followed by a smirking vicky …


Vicky (st) : waoo kiya scene hai ….geet ke babaji aapne bhi poori planning karli hai na …dekho kaise bhai geet ko KM mien lekar jaa rahe hain …bilkul waise hi jaise khurana khandaan ke har couple ki entry huyi hai ….FIRST SIGN 4 THE BEGINNING OF LOVE STORY 😳ke liye THANK U geet ke babaji ..par abb bas geet ko jaldi se theek kardo aur uss ko meri bhabi bana do ..already buhat wait kar liya mene bhi & bhai ne bhi ……(aur India Forum ke reader ne bhi ..😆)

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PRECAP :-
Vicky :- kya soch rahe ho bhai aap ..
Maan : soch raha hoon dobara iss jangli billi ke saath rehna kaisa huga ...pata hai hostel mien ek din bhi aisa nahi tha jab madam geet ne koi shaitani na ki ho ..
Vicky ; means kal se humari shamat hai ..
Maan : cent % shamat hai ...😆😉

Na main samjha, na main jaana
Jo bhi tumne mujhse kahaa hai Senorita
Magar phir bhi, na jaane kyun
Mujhe sunke, accha laga hai senorita

No desvies la mirada
(do not look away)
Quedate cerca de mi
(stay close to me)

Mujhko baahon mein tum ghero
Samjhi na senorita ...😳


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okiee dont how many of u r happy with this as me myself not satisfied with what ever i wrote in this part ...but then me soo much busy from last 2week so cant concentrate on one thing n now a new member ..😃
but i didn't wanted to give a senti end to this story so i exceeded it to another update ...hopefully next part utni hi fun filled hugi jitna first part tha ...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
yehhh me first...
superb mindblowing and lovely update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovely update

loved geet a lot

continue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all amazing update as usual
maan confessed his feelings
n gett realized that she luvz maan
but she misinterpreted the regret in his eyes
hope 1 of them conveyz it soon
geet running high fever
geet bhi na bilkul jhalli hai
maan ko bataya kyun nahi
dekha maan ne daant diya na
n babaji bhi disturb hogaye kya geet
hayye maan n geet entered like all couples do in the mansion
well maaneet r alwayz meant 2 b together
precap is just so exciting
update soon
waiting eagerly
Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooohooo.. first off congrats on being a phupo! its an amazing feeling cuz i have 3 and live with them.. now to the ss.. thank u for not making this the last part.. :D finally geet madAme realises her love.. oh no MU between maaneet. cont sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 update buddy,specially d sunset-confession part-----superb.Pls next part jaldi update karna,wanna see all confusion saughted out.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
realization of love was so nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..maaneet hv realize their feeling and scared to confess..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely part...
Maaneet's convo was just awesum..
y geet s hiding her feelings..?

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesooome upd.
loved it...superb...
tfd pm...

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