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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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waiting for the next shock ehehheheee
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow u updating!!!!!!!
How much tym more???
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Part 33


Geet was siiting on a swing. It was beautiful flower decorated. Long shining chains of mirror and white pearls were hanging from top to touching floor. It was white cloud everywhere with twinkling stars. Geet in pink dress sitting on it . Swinging slowly. her open hair were flying and playing with dawn air. Her face was glowing. She was lost somewhere. She was happy.


Maan came from back. Slowly pushed her swing. She looked back and smiled. She again looked same direction where she was lost . maan came front and sit next to her. He looked her beautiful face. He cupped her face and asked


"geet "


"hmm"


"kya dekh rahi ho'


'sapna" she said smiling


'khuli aankho se'


Geet looked him and nodded.


'achha.. mujhe nahi dikhaaogi " he teased


'aap dekhoge maan..mera sapna" she had excitement in eyes


Maan nodded. He hugged her sideway . she kept her head on his shoulder and raised her finger to direct some direction.


'who dekho maan.humari shadi. Mai laal jore me, dulhan bani hu.. sirf aapki. .woh dekho..aapne meri maang bhari maan aur humne kasmeen (vow) li. Aapne mujhe mangalsutra pahnaaya.. aur mai aapki ho gayi ..hamesha le liye" maan looked her face. It was lost. He kissed her cheek lovingly. 'fir' he asked coming close to her face


'fir' fir humaari suhaagraat. Who dekho maan. Mai waha aapke ghar me, aapke room me , aapke intzaar ar rahi hu. ' she smiled. 'fir ' maan asked her with desire


'fir aap aaye aur mujhe anpe aagosh me le liya.mera iis duniyaa me aana safal ho gaya maan aur hum ek ho gaye " she closed her eyes. a happy tear wanted to drop but maan kissed it befor it could fall.


'fir geet "


She looked him. ' fir humara sapna, hamara baby, humari haantho me hai maan" she looked somewhere. Who dekho ' she pointed maan kissed her forehead.he had tear in his eyes. ' fir "


"fir.. fir hum bhure ho gaye.. yaha..isi jhule pe hum ek sath baithe hai " 'maan ek baat puchu '


'hmm'


Jab mai bhuri ho jaaungi .. tab bhi mujhe ase hi pyar karoge na' maan nodded no. she looked him confused.he smiled


'isse bhi jyada yar karunga.. aur meri mishty uus waqt bhi asi hi pyari hogi " he took her in his arm. They were hugging very lovingly. She closed her eyes living this moment. Suddenly she oped her eyes. No one was there. She looked around. Her maan was not there. 'maaa nnn" she screamed. Rano run to her .


'geet..ki hoya beta.. geet" she asked her worriedly. Geet looked rano with confused eyes. then looked her dress. She was still in her bridal. She memorized everything. Tight hugged rano and cried. ' asa kyu hua maa..kyu kiya baabji ne asa.. maan kaha hai maa..mere maan kyu nahi aaye" Rano was caressing her hair knowing not what to reply. She let her cry. Let her pour all her inner soul.



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After few hours brij banged door with full rage. He came inside with red face, eyes and hand.daarji , mohindar run to him. All were in middle hall. Geet was sleeping so rano also went to know what happened. Brij was not telling anything. Only showing his anger on everything and everyone. Mohindar held him and asked ' brij..bata toh hua kya' curiosity .

was killing everyone.


' bahut bara dhoka hua humaare sath daarji.. Bahut bara dhoka kiya uss khuraana ne' all looked him. 'Brij.. bol hua kya' rano was begging not to bear more .


'PYAR KA JHUTHA NATAK KIYA USS MAAN NE HUM SABKE SATH...humaare ghar me raha ..humaare bich ..aur jab shadi ka din aaya toh bhag gaya muh chipa ke.. aur uski jagah apne bhai ko bhej diya apni jagah...humaare khandaan ki izzat pe daag na lage isliye.' brij shouted with highest pitch.


'Nahiii" geet held her spinning head and whispered. ' maan asa nahi kar sakte. Who mujhe dhoka nahi de sakte.. mai janti hu...woh asa kabhi nahi kar sakte...' she run to brij and shouted holding his collar ' Jhut bol rahe hai aap veerji..maan mujhe dhokha nahi de sakte ' kabhi nahi de sakte" she was crying and shouting unaware everyone is glaring her except mohindar and rano.


Rano run to her and tried to get her back in room but geet was gone mad. She was not moving a bit and repeating again n again only these words. Brij glared her with fire eyes. He wanted to kill her right there. He knew she was witness of his crime but waiting for right time to do his work . Somehow rano took her to her room . Geet was crying bitterly. ' maa ..bolona veerji ko..maan asa nahi kar sakte. ..nahi de sakte maan mujhe dhoka...' rano hugged her tight to console her.


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Guard listened everything and got alert. He immediately called to maan and told everything (he dint know maanav..by face and by name , so only told main matter) what maanav told about geet. Maan shocked and got hell worried. He told him to anyhow bring geet out of there keep her in his guest house , out of HP, near to his site and he is reaching there as soon as possible. Maan wanted to run and reach there to geet but he was helpless. he immediately took his private plane and left to India. He was restless , panicking , grave worried about geet. ' geet please thik rahna.' he closes his eyes in his helplessness.


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Geet was crying, sitting on floor, in corner of her dark room. Her face was pale , dark circle was placed around her red ans swelled eyes. She wanted to be with maan .. she was not ready to agree what brij said. ' mai jaanti hu maan..sab jhuth hai.. aap mujhe dhoka kabhi nahi de sakte..kabhi nahi" she was lost when felt somebody i9s moving her door knob.. She terrified. Door was moving now. She stood in fear. Suddenly door jerked open and a person entered and stood in front of her. She couldn't see his face as it was dark. That man came closer . Geet eyes widened in fear. ' Br..ij ve..ee.r .ji" and dark covered everything.



Precap : No Precap


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope it is the guards
i feel like killing these guards
had they been more careful all this wouldnt have happened at all
plz bring maan back asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
brij naa bhaii ke naam pe dhabba hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing update...👏👏👏 loved it..❤️...😊

hope yea brij nehi hai...kamina brij maan k bare mein jhoot bola...😡😡😡...

maan ko aane de fir tera kya hoga tu soch v nehi sakta...😡😡
Edited by soma.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update ,hope the guards save Geet frm brij n Maan comes in time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
this brij is such a b******..
hope maan reaches on time
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Posted: 12 years ago

Geeet ko kuch huwa nah except a loty of hugging scenes😭

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