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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

pls tell me he didnt take geet with him
nahinnn aisa nahin ho sakta
tell me she is okay pls now you are just sacring me even more
maan where are you dude get back to your geet and soon
okay what does he know about geet what truth are you talking about
thank god naina stopped the wedding or it would have been bad
what now
cheers for pm looking forwards to next bit now



aaree areee chavvi relax yaar..saans le le thora sa... 😆
aaj bataati hu na kya secrest jaanta hai maanav kamina

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

Maan where are you
Maanav😡
Poor Geet




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

omg loved it monika

a big hug to u for this mindblowing part

infact me loved naina tooo

waiting fr next

update fast




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Posted: 12 years ago
How much more tym r v geting update???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princes939

How much more tym r v geting update???



wait only for half an hour dear .. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
@monika
yaar tu mujhy pagal honay se bachaegi
wow matlab...
samajh gaye
now update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Part 32


.. Lights came back withing few minutes but it was enough to happen what maanav planned. All found maanav and all khurana s were not there. All run to main door. Suddenly rano looked back and screamed 'geeettt'


Rano runs to back where everything was shining some moments back but now it was dark abandoned palace where s princess was sleeping lifeless. All panicked and run to her while brij and his men chased maanav.


'geettt..aankhe khol beta..aankhe khol geeettt" rano was screaming crying taking her head in her lap. ' koi doctor ko bulaaoo 'geettt uth betaa'." She was shouting. Her motherly heart was sinking looking this condition of her daughter. Mohindar run and lifted geet and brought to her room . he kept her down on bed and run to see doctor came or not. Everyone was panicking and was unable to understand what happened or going on. All were doing everything like any zombie.


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Maanav was speeding his car in fastest speed. He was with naina in one car while in another all other were. He was now n then looking naina in fume where naina was shocked and scared, crying. Maanav knew brij jeep was following his so he was driving like insane. Here brij informed his men to follow other car . he was seeing maanav car was going in full speed . he increased his jeep speed and in no time it stopped in front of maanav car. He jump down and run to car and hit a stick on glass of car. While his some men came out with swords and guns. Maanav and naina were hell scared looking these violent people laced with weapons. ' Oyeee Bahar Nikal" brij shouted hitting his leg and gun on car. He was in full rage. ' baahar nikal .." maanav was not coming out while naina was in total shock.


Looking not coming him out brij hit hard on car glass and opened door opening himself. He held maanav collar and brought him out with tough force that maanav fell on ground. Naina came out shivering.


Brij- teri himmat kaise hui hume dhoka dene ki haan.." he was beating him with his leg. "kya socha tha ki brij handa ko pata chala toh tujhe jinda chor dega haan" maanav was total near to death . "uth saale ..uth..itni aasaani se nahi maarunga tujhe..Uth" brij held his collar and made him stand.


'agar mai marungaa toh tu bhi nahi bachega brij "maanav managed to speak some how in very meek voice with bleeding mouth.


'kya bola...kya bola haann...mai nhi bachunga" he again punched on his stomach


"haa...tu bhi nahi bachega brij..teri apni bahan tere maut ka karan banegi" maanav smriked '.tu bhi marega brij' maanav laughed with his blood covered teeth , more evilly


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doctor was checking geet. After half n hour she came out and told hell worried mohindar and calm daarji

that she is in deep shock. She needs complete bed rest and a peaceful environment to be fit and fine soon. mohindar nodded meekly and went inside looking his daughter who was sleeping there with no life left. He caressed her hair and wanted to scream so run outside hurriedly. Rano saw her husband bitter condition and run behind him to give support. Least they knew, it was only starting of biggest storm, which was coming in face of their own son.


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maan s guard seen something is not good happening there. He guessed it was related to geet . Then he saw brij chasing a car and that too with full rage so he decided to follow him, but with full attention that no body could see him. After following some miles , he saw brij was beating a man badly and a girl standing there shivering , crying surrounded with some goons. He went near them to listen what they were talking and what he listened, alerted him hard


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Brij saw him laughing and his anger reached to highest. He started beating him hard. Maanav was unable to stand on his own feet while naina could not see this. She run to him and tried to save but brij held her hair and brought near his face " yaha se chali ja larki ..warna tu bhi aaj isske sath maari jaayegi ' and he pushed her with full force then she fell on ground hard. Then brij held again maanav and made him stood again. " kya bol raha tha..mai marunga...meri bahan mujhe marwaayegi ..haan' brij glared him hard


' haa teri bahan tujhe marwaayegi brij.. tu bhi nahi bachega.. tujhe kya laga tune jo kuch bhi kiya wo koi nahi jaanta..." he laughed.


' kya kiya maine ..kya jaanta hai tu'


sab jaanta hu brij..ye jaanta hu ki tune channi ke sath kya kiya uske bhai shankar ke saath milke..aur who bhi jaanta hu jo tu bhi nahi jaanta'


'kya jaanta hai tu '


' ye jaanta hu brij ki uss din waha sirf channi nahi thi.. koi aur bhi tha' brij shocked looked to shankar who was standing near him.


' aur kon tha waha..bata warna' brij pushed maanav chin hard that it started bleeding hard.


Maanav smriked and said calmly ...


'GEET'



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Hope I m doing good

i m going Under Ground for today

Thank you alll

My other FF ---DOR---


Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yupie i m first
loved the update dear
but wht will maan do yaar?
when will he come to know of these incidents

continue soon
Edited by ana56 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovuuu awesome update ...pehlibar brij ne accha kam kiya uss manav ko acche dholai ki...😡...hope maan jaldi se aa jaye...
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome!!!!!but maan wasnt dere in the update!!! 😒

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