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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika



<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">maine teaser diya hai jaan dekhlo 7 more likes for update🤔</font>


di aisa jaanlewa teaser
i want update nw
hope jaldi 7 likes jaldi miljaye
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan


di aisa jaanlewa teaser
i want update nw
hope jaldi 7 likes jaldi miljaye



yaar maine toh bkh ke bhi do do teasers diye😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anky_s

dear wahi toh kar rahe hain yaar itne dino se...

i am seriously tellin ur demands are increasing jst lyk petrol prices... lol



updating😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

updating bkh first😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika




haha waise maine jyada likes nahi maange sweety actually meri last wali update ki likes toh 180+ thi phir bhi maine 170+ hi diya thought that ull gimme the likes soon so that i can update soon lekin woh bhi mujhe nahi mile🤢






arre chill yaar...readers kabhi-kabhi alien zone mein chale jate hain... 😆

neways seems lyk tumhara quota pura ho gaya hai... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 9:
warning: plz give up reading or skip the update if u dont like the content dont be mad at me

Maan hum kaha hai??Geet asked as her eyes shimmered looking at the room. There she saw the bar where there were drinks.


Maan: we are at my farm house geet!!! tumhe yehi laane ka plan banaya tha maine bt then I didn't know how u wud feel toh.... I loved it maan!!! geet replied excitedly looking at the beach view from the room walking towards the window.


Maan: acha laga?? Geet smiled to the question.....kya acha laga its just awesome I loved it, by then maan got the drink in a glass while geet took it from his hands and sipped it, she puked it..... maan!!! its yucky!!! Kaise peethe ho tum log yeh??


He laughed at the innocent question of hers... Mujhe pata tha chalo leave it bohut der ho gaya chalo ill drop u at ur home, maan held geet's hand to take her to home, she did not move.... Nahi maan I want to drink


Maan: tum maanogi nahi jyada mat peena waise bhi tum pataka ho I wont be able to control u geet blushed and nodded for a yes.


Till then maan made the drinks bt now geet took the whiskey bottle into her hands and gulped the drink in large amounts while maan watched her. Geet drank so much that she lost all her senses as to wat she was doing or talking.


She got down the chair on which geet was sitting till now and walked towards maan who was watching her from far away. There were so many questions running in his mind. He wanted to know abt geet's life, her past, everything abt her. The reason for her being this way, the reason for her working, her family. Breaking his thoughts geet held his collar giggling like a baby maan!!! pata hai I neva thought that ill actually drink!!! Thanks to u!!! really tumhare saath rehke pata nahi secure feel karti hoon, jaise main kuch bhi karon tum mujhe bachaoge. I donno I neva felt the way I feel now, wen u saved me that day from my uncle main keh nahi sakti how happy I was dat day. Lekin maine tumhare paise liye I am not feeling good for that plz take the money maan mujhe acha nahi lag raha, geet shook him while maan wanted to ask her the questions of her life.



Maan: geet ek baat poohun?? Geet fluttered her lashes with the serious question of him, and nodded meekly, I want to know ur past geet everything and a big laugh. Geet left him and walked away, bt maan held her wrist, maine tumse kuch poocha geet..... kya janna hai tumhe?? Yehi ki mera ek kameena baap tha!!! Jisne meri maa ko chod diya aur doosri shaadi karli!!! I hate him maan I really hate him. Only I know how I cud cope up with my life, doctor ne jawab diya do din mein tumhari maa mar jayegi, aur main do din!!! Do din maut se ladti maa ko gale lagaye baith gayi lekin maa chali gayi maan mujhe chodke chali gayi


Maan: mujhe poori baat janni hai geet wat happened to ur mother?? Yeh tumhara uncle woh kaun hai?? he hugged geet dragging her towards himself, bt geet was crying madly main... main abhi nahi bata sakti maan abhi mujhe khush rehna hai I want to cherish this moment


Listening to the plea of geet maan cud not say anything bt made his mind that he will some how try to know the whole truth of her life.


Maan bent on knees and placed geet's bare leg on his thigh... yeh payal pehna sakta hoon geet? he asked reluctantly again thinking that atleast in this stage she wud agree... sirf aaj raat ke liye for ur happiness she said while maan smiled at geet's self respect


Hey kaash, kaash yun hota.....Har shaam saath tu hota...Chup-chap dil na yun rota....Har shaam saath tu hota


Maan fixed the payal on geet's ankles, she pushed him away while maan too drank the whiskey from the bottle which was left by geet


Guzara ho tere bin guzara ab muskil hai lagta....Nazara ho tera hi nazara ab har din hai lagta...Hale dil tujhko sonat....Dil agar yeh bol pata....Bakhuda tujhko hai jata jaan


With that maan too lost his senses. He observed geet who was wearing the knee length dress which was teasing him since the movement he saw her. She was busy drinking, his eyes were scanning geet litrerally


Tere sang jo pal bitaata.....Waqt se main woh maang laata...Yaad karke muskuraata haan
Woo oo ..


Geet looked at maan sensuously, placing her leg over the other leg sitting on the chair, her bare thighs got highlighted. Maan gulped hard unable to control his growing urges. The atmosphere changed and soon the thunder started followed by rain. Geet got up to go out, bt maan blocked the way indicating for a no!!! she made a baby face pouted her lips. His mind got crowded with numerous feelings looking at those lips


Tere sang jo pal bitaata...Waqt se main woh maang laata.....Yaad karke muskuraata haan...Woo oo ..Tu meri raah ka sitara....Tere bina hoon main awara.....Jab bhi tanhai ne sataya...Tujhko besaakhta pukara.


Geet understood that maan was watching her lips, she too was feeling no diff. Breaking the inhibition she moved forward brushing her lips with his telling him that she also wanted the same. With that bold move of her maan lost all his control and slammed his lips on hers, sending shivers to her. His hands automatically reached to the hooks of her dress trying to open it while geet moaned in the kiss, hugging him even tighter fitting perfectly into his arms


Chaahat hai meri la fanaa.....Par meri jaan dil, main hoon rakhta haan......Haal e dil tujhko sunata.....Dil agar yeh bol pata.....Bakhuda tujhko hai jata jaan. Tere sang jo pal bitata....Waqt se main woh maang lata....Yaad karke muskuraata haan...Woo...

Geet ran her naked leg on maan's calf muscles over his jeans making him go mad as his senses got drugged with the pleasure she was giving him, both of them landed on the bed kissing each other madly!!! She bit his lips making them bleed which shocked maan to the core. Both of them were lost with the oozing passion, while maan took the revenge taking charge thrusting his tongue into geet's mouth biting her tongue, that was not enuf he nibbled both her lips



Tere sang jo pal bitata....Waqt se main woh maang lata....Yaad karke muskuraata haan.
Woo...You're the one.....I love whats meant to be....I know you feel it too , I look at you.


Understanding the breathless state of geet, maan left her, both rested their heads on each other panting heavily. Maan observed geet's features they were as if beautifully carved. He pecked her lips for one last time and then traced her throat with his tongue, stopped at the collar bone where he discovered a birth mark, he kissed it open-mouthedly



Khwaabon ka kab tak loon sahara...Ab toh tu aaja khudara.....Meri yeh dono paagal aankhein.....Har pal maange tera nazara...Aa samjaun inko kis tarah...Inpe mera bas nahin chalta haan.



pata hai geet everything abt u is special, even this birth mark of urs, jaha jis cheez ko hona chahiye waha kuch jyada hi khubsoorti se hai, listening to the remark of maan geet blushed crimson red while maan again kissed on her collarbone and moved further down till her cleavage, holding her waist with one hand, he unhooked the dress from behind with the other hand, that rose the heartbeat of geet, she gulped down her saliva, tears trickled down wen maan tried to take her dress off the shoulders.


Haal e dil tujhko sunata...Dil agar yeh bol pata...Bakhuda tujhko hai jata jaan.....Tere sang jo pal bitata.....Waqt se main woh maang lata....Yaad karke muskuraata haan...Woo oo...


Geet held her dress with one hand and dragged maan along with her onto the bed with the other telling him she is ready. Both of them fell on the bed, maan cudnt take anymore and bit hard on the exposed cleavage of geet. She screamed in pain and pleasure that drew him back to the reality. Geet was lost bt he is not that drunk, he is just tipsy. He took the spread and covered both of them, bt geet looked at him disappointedly, he smiled at her restlessness, so jao geet warna pachtaogi, dont gimme those looks, saying this he engulfed geet in his arms, both of them slept peacefully


Precap: Aftermath!!! A fight!!! Who is wrong in all this??


PREVIOUS PART:
PART 8

NEXT PART:
PART 10

I didn't want this part to be more intimate than this as maaneet are still trying to understand each other I have few reasons which will reveal soon


Next update after 170+ likes so get to work girls


anky_s apna naam toh batado yaar love ya sweety!!!😳

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb liked tat maan wants to knw abt her past.
the way he himself controlled him shows he indeed has some deep feelings for her
but nw wat will happen whenthey wll be awake
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

u shown some glimpses of geet's life and i can say after her mom's death it was not easy for her to live in dis meaningful world

chalo maan ko toh time pe hosh aagaya

but in d morning maan ki watt lagne waali hai

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read i really enjoy reading this story of your
thanks for the pm

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