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Posted: 13 years ago
#11


very interesting...

par yaar Geet ki to Ranbir se shaadi ho rahi hai...😭

Maan-Geet will get separated...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
awesome start and me will also read for one more reason Ranbir kapoor ❤️
Edited by hermoso - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
ranbir n geet shaadi fixed by maan...hazam nehi ho rahe hai...sahi nehi hai...kuch toh karon...

interesting starting
...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Part-2>
Geet and Ranbir get married.Armaan,geets elder cousin performs her kanyadaan.rano and dadimaa get highly emotipnal at her bidaai.maan gets broken upon yhe fact that she was to leave him but happy that her life is filled with love and happiness.
At the Airport
Geet and Ranbir were to migrate to Denver othe next day.Geet couldnt stop crying.Maan was tryong hard to control himself.
Maan:Saaale...tu meri mishti ka acha khayaal rakhoge na...warna tere khair nahi...samjhe
Ranbir:Vaada karta hun ki tumhare mishti ko apne jaan se zyaada khayaal rakhoge.
Geet(crying badly):Maanu...tijhe bohot miss karegi
Maan:Mai bhi mishti,lekin tu chinta mat kar...ek phpne karinga ki main bhagkar aaungi terepaas chaahe jo ho jaaye
Geet:promise
Maan:pakka promise
(both hug tightly)
They depart.Maan smiles seeing his cute lil friend Geet Handa...now turned into Mrs.Geet kapoor,a dutiful wife.He finally burst out crying.Armaan comforts him.
Armaan:Yaar,tu chinta mat kar.geet bohot kush rahegi.
Maan:armaan bhai...mai bohot kush hu uske liye.lekn bohot miss karegi usse.
***********
Maan and Geet keep in touch through phone and mail.he craved to see her but decided not tp intride into their personal lifes.from her talks Maan could make out that she was very happie.Rano was also called to Denver to live with them.Maan was really happie for her.
************
6 months later
geet calls maan.
geet:maanu...hum PARIS shift ho rahe hai
Maan:what?????aise achanak??
geet:woh ranbir ke HQ waha shift ho rahe hai.
Maan:tjats really nice.
geet:maanu...problem yeh hai ki bohot dino tak hum contact nahi ikarpaoge.
maan:to kya...mishti.uske baad to karpaoge na...ti chinta mat kar.ma aur ranbir ko ko keh dena
geet:bbye...
*************
days...months pass...no news from geet
maan feels she is busy with er private life so decides not to interfere.in the mean time his company recieves a lot of success.his cousin and friend KHuShi,who was a psychologist gives him all the support.his dadimaa as always stood as a pillar to him.but deep inside...he missed geet highly and craved to see or talk to her

PRECAP:
a leap
shocker for maan
Edited by pari_jyothika - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
#15
thanks guys for yr support...love you alll\
EID MUBARAK!!!
Part 3
2 years later
Maan Singh Khurana...one of India's best and world renowned entrepreneurs.over the years...he managed to get this name made.he was highly successful.Geet was always a part of his life deep inside his heart.that feeling motivated him in every action of his.he ven established a range of DIAMOND jewellery,named geet.
Khushi was always behind maan to get him married and he paid no heed.he was least interested.after a lot of effort...she managed to convince maan to open a FACEBOOK account so that he could mingle with girls.he finally agreed.
he tried searching for geet and ranbirs account but couldn't find.
after a few days
he recieved a FRIEND REQUEST from armaan.he was elated to see his armu bhaiya.he went through his pictures.he finds an album of his marriage with RIDHIMA MODI.he was happy.he looks for geets picture and finds them in one.he was shocked to see her dressed soberly and also wearing glasses.his geet was always colourful and fancy in dressing.people change after marriage,he thought.ranbir was also not seen in the pictures.suddenly he finds armaan online.
MSK:bhai...aap kaise ho?kha hai aap??
Armaan:fine...tu kaisi hai...mai ab sydney mai hu
MSK:fine bhai...geet kaha hai...kaisi hai...do saal se uska kuch pata nahi...
armaan after a long time...:woh yahi hai...humare saath...tu kuch din ke liye yaha aa sakti hai kya...please.
maan was elated to know where geet was.he imedietly took the next flight to sydney.he was over excited.he went to shops and bought a lot of chocolates..flowers and gifts.he reached his hotel and contacted Armaan.he told him that he was in his hospital and told him to come there and meet him and he could come through metro.he rushed.
IN the train.
Maan was sitting in the train thiking about the old times he had with geet
.Yeh hawayein gungunaein poochhe tu hai kahan
Tu hai phoolon mein kaliyon mein
Ya mere khwabon ki galiyon mein
Tu hai phoolon mein kaliyon mein
Ya mere khwabon ki galiyon mein
Yeh hawayein gungunaein poochhe tu hai kahan
Tu hai phoolon mein kaliyon mein
Ya mere khwabon ki galiyon mein
he realised how much he missed her over the years.suddenly he heard a soft,sweet and highly familiar voice...
"one black coffee with 2 blocks of sugar,please"
it was geet...his mishti...his BEST FRIEND.he rushed to her.
Maan:mishi...(hugs he Tightly)i missed you...i missed you...i missed you...i missed you
main tujhse bohot naraz hun...ek baar bhi phone nahi kiya...ranbi kaisi hain...aur baby aaya kii nahi,,,,mere buddy hui ya meri princess...tu kabse black coffee pine lagi...tu kuchbol kyun nahi rahe...
Geet:(stood there emotionless)maan...mai aur ranbir ab saath mai nahi hai...mera stop aagaya hai...hum sham ko milte hai...ye mere number hai...bye
and she rushes out of the train.maan stood there dumbfounded.he had the uge to kill ranbir now.he decided to meet Armaan and find out the rest.
PRECAP:another shocker for maan
New entry.

Edited by pari_jyothika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
1st to comment!

Nice update. Poor Geet sounds pitful
What twist is in store?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2
so Geet got married to Ranbir...
poor Maan...
hope Geet is fine...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3
OMG Geet has changed this much in every way?
why?
and is she living with Armaan?
cont soon dear...
Posted: 13 years ago
#19
part 4
maan rushes to armaan's hospital...he bumps into him there
Maan:armaan bhai(hugs him)...isse pehle aap kuch aur kahe...yeh batayiyen geet ke saath kya hua...aap log mujhse kuch bataya kyun nahi...answer me bhai...????

Armaan:maan tu geet se milii??
Maan:ha bhai...she is changed...what so happened that she didnt even come to me??
Armaan:maan...tu mere saath ghar chal...abhi...tumhare saare sawaalon ka jawab waha milegi...
they both go inside a small villa in botany bay west...
rano greets them at the door...upon seeing maan ...she cries her heart out hugging him...tears flow down his eyes seeing his ever cheerful mama so broken...the next sight he sees shocks him highly.a huge photo of ranbir stood in front of him behing a garland.he was shocked.it meant that RANBIR DIED and GEET WAS A WIDOW.he crouched on the floor crying.armaan comforts him as well as rano.
maan:itna sab ho gaya...koi mujhe bataya kyun nahi???
rano:beta...1 1/2 years ago jab humlog paris shift hue the...tabhi ek accidentmei...geet bilkul toot gayi thi...uss din woh bohot royi lekin uske baad pathar ban gayi hai woh...baat bhi nahi karti kissi se...ski aaj tak yahi zid thi ki tujhe kuch pata na chale...
maan:lekin mama...woh akeli kaisi????he breaks down...it felt as if he lost 2 friends of his in one blow...
rano:she took up kathak...her dream...ab sirf ussi ke liye jithe hai...lekin her heart has become stone maan...ab tu hi usse waapas laa sakte hai maan...sirf tu!!!
maan:waada karti hoon maa ki main geet ko wapas lakar hi rahoonga...bilkul pehle ki jaise...
armaan:we trust u maan...
rano:jeete rahe puttar
~RAJSREE CENTRE for DANCE AND ARTS~
tha...ritha...thaiy..dhindatha...thaiy...
voices of chimes lingerered in the air...as geet stood in the middle dancing away but with no emotions...maan walks in and sees geet.he was broken to see her in such a state...he cries remembering his old times with geet...
{flashback in italics}listen to the song ppl...its realy nycmaan:mishti...jab tu naachti hai na...ek ajeeb saa...pyaara sa muskaan hote hai tere chehre par.. geet:pata hai...kyunki nachna meri passion hai...meri zindagi haiNaa bataati tu pichhan - naa dhin dhin na - 3
Naa dhin dhin naa, naa dhin dhin naa
Bhool meri jaan tu, naa bataati tu pichhan,
Naa dhin dhin naa na dhin dhin naa
geet:aggar mere saath kuch hua to tu mere saath hogi na...
maan:hamesha hoge...chaahe jo hojaayePadh lu padhaa lu-hoji ho hoji
Maito jiya mein basaa lu-hoji ho hoji
Yaato maathe pe sajaa lu, yaa main mukh pe likha lu
Khushboo se rangaa koi naam ha,
Tujhko padega pahchaana-main toh haule haule haalu
Bhool meri jaan tu, naa bataati tu pichhan
Naa dhin dhin naa, naa dhin dhin naa
Naa dhin dhin naa, naa dhin dhin naa - 5

maan:mishti.. jab logon ke saath bura hota hai...tab woh kaise usse bahar aate haigeet:koi farishta zarror aata hai...unka saath dene...jaise tumhare liye maimaan:aur tere liye mai..
Nabh ke sitaare, hoji ho hoji
kaise saje hai sitaare, hoji ho hoji
Jaage jaage ujiyaare, ho mukh rang gaye saare
palko ke tale chhupa hai chandnaa, tujhko padega
pahchaana
kuch samaj ishaare... bhool meri jaan tu
Naa bataati tu pichhan... dhin dhin naa
Naa dhin dhin naa, naa dhin dhin naa
Naa dhin dhin naa, naa dhin dhin naa
Naa dhin dhin naa, naa dhin dhin naa
Naa dhin dhin naa, naa dhin dhin naa
geet stops dancing when geet sees maan...she goes to him and puts up a fake smile

geet:maan...what a surprise...tum yaha kaise??
maan:hello...finally maine tumhe dhoond liye...kaise ho tum??
Geet:good
Maan:acchha
Geet:yeah
Maan:aur baaki sab??
Geet:baaki sab teek hai...
maan:tumne mujhe bohot hurt kii hai geet...tum mukhe bata nahi sakti thi...ek phone nahi karsakti thi...(courtesy:jab we met)
geet:maan..woh...(she stammers)
Maan:SHUT UP aur abhi chalo mere saath...he screamed...
tujhe bata bhi hai kii tum meree liye koun ho...main aggar zinda ho to tumhare wajah se u fool...zindagi main pal pal sirf tere yaad main jeeti aayi hai...tum mere liye ek aise hissa ho...jaise how oxygen is to others...or itna sab kuch hua aur...
GEET HUGS HIM CRYING ALMOST AFTER 18 MONTHS...
Geet:sab kuch khatam ho gaya maanu...sab kuch..woh chali gayi maan...mujhe akela chod kar...usse wapas laadho maan
Maan:sh...mishti...chup ho jao...main hu tumhare saath...khabardaar agar is ke baad kabhi bhi apne aap ko akela kaha tho...
both comfort each other...
things started getting better...maan shifted his business to Sydney...till things get better...geet slowly started recovering and maan was with her at every step...meanwhile ridhimaa gets pregnant and geet gets excited that she's gonna be a bua soon.
maan goes to his maama(moms brother) samarth khana uff sam...to whom geet is a pet and he has a huge crush on rano(he is a bachelor)...he lives there too...

precap:
a weak moment between maan and geet as both get drunk...😲

Edited by pari_jyothika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very sad for geet...maan is there for her...pls cont soon..

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