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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update
feeling bad for geet...
Posted: 13 years ago
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part 5
geet slowly starts getting normal...she spends a lot of time with maan and feels a lot better.his uncle sam also gives her a lot of moral support...armaan and rano are happy to see her back.
~3 months later~
geet and maan are in a coffee shop where geet is telling him about her upcoming program(kathak) in singapore where she will have to leave for 1 month.
Maan:no ways geet...tu nahi jaa rahi hai..matlab nahi
Geet:maanu...please...its reallly a great opportunity aur main isse khona nahi chahti...
Maan:lekin tu akele...kaise????
geet:i am not alone...tujhe hamare school ke arnav raizada yaad hai??
Maan:koun arnav...dont tell me "CHOTU"...how come he?
Geet:woh hi is show ke organizer hai...aur ridhi bhabhi ke cousin...
Maan:havent met him for ages...how is he?is he still chotu?
Geet:hahahha...maanu...tu bhi naa...now can i go...
Maan:ok...fine...but sambhalena...
geet:maanu...i m leaving a week later...dont worry...
Just then they hear a person yelling out their names"geet"..."maan"
they turn around to find arjun singhania-their childhood friend there...

Both:arjun!!!!!tu yaha
both hug him as they meet years later...
Arjun:yar tum dono yaha hai...sydney main...aur i was going mad finding u both...guys i m getting married the day after...
Geet and Maan:what??shaadi???kisse????
Arjun:arohi ahluwalia...my batch mate...aur waise bhi you both have to come...
Maan:ye bhi koi puchne kii baat hai...ofcourse...
Geet(stammerring):ooo...f...courceee...
maan notices this and holds her hand tightly...he knew what turmoil she is going thru as she remembered her own marriage
arjun:bye guys...see you both day after...
Both:bbye
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Maan:mishti...tujhe aage badna hoga geet...apne yaado se...apne atheeth se
geet:yeh aasaan nahi hai maan...
maan:koshish to karlo geet...mere liye atleast...
geet agrees...
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Handa Residence
Geet:3 months...r u okkk mom???
maan:seriosly maamu aur aap bhi mom...pilgrimage????
rano and sam has decided to go on a pilgrimage together for 3 months in INDIA...
geet:but how will we 2 manage...
sam:beta...ab hamari bhi ummar ho chuki hai...its right for us to go...mana mat karna bacho...
rano:mujhe pata hai...kii maan teri bohot khayaal rakhegi...isse vishwas ke saath chainn se jaa rahi hai...can we plaese go kids??
Both:ok mom...
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THE WEDDING DAY...
maan comes out wearing a tuxedo...looking immensly handsome..

he sees geet already dressed in a simple salwar suit...
Maan:mishti...hum shaadi ke liye jaa rahe hai...coffee ke liye nahi...
geet:but maanu...i dont have anything as such to wear...
maan rushes outside leaving behind a confused geet...
he then comes back with a packet in his hand...
Maan:yeh pehenlo...aur jaldi aao,,,,,,
Geet:but maa...he stops her and pushes her to her room to change...
she comes out after a while...

{chuck deepike padukone in this pic)...it was a red saree...it was simple yet elegant...
maan looked at her mesmerized...she resembled an angel...
maan:geet...u look beautiful...
geet:thanx maan...(he couldnt stop admiring her)
they leave for the wedding
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arjun and arohi gets married in a big fat indian style...all shower their blessings on them

geet has tears in her eyes remembering her wedding...maan keeps his and on her shoulders and comforts her...
after some tym...the waiters offer both a drink and they thinking it to be a mocktail drinks it...
both leave the party feeling immensely giddy and tipsy...maan takes a room in the hotel itself...both leave for that room...
suddenly jerks geet and both fall on the bed...both are lost in each others eyes...
{mature}

maan starts madly kissing her and she too responds...both breathe heavily as they drown in the passion...maan takes of her pallu in one go and start devouring her navel and neck with kisses...she takes out his shirt and kisses her chest madly.


finally the both have nothing in or on them as they both loose out each other in every way...not even knowing what is going to happen to them after this night.both lay hugging each other tight in their embrace under the duvet...

PRECAP:
THE REACTION...
GEET LEAVES FOR SINGAPORE
ASR ENTRY

message to:
  1. my mummy-papa:please forgive for me for this...i hav never in my life writen such a post...dont kill me pleeez😭
  2. my bhaiyy:if u ever come across this...pleez dont break my bones...i promise i will buy u a DAIRYMILK SILK 😳
  3. readers:pls promote this ff and give max. number of likes and comments pleezzz😳
  4. buddies:suggest this ff to all your freinds also pleeechhh
Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys...nw on pleeez just pm me to my id...dont buddy me as i will do it :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24



ha ha note to mumma -papa and bhai...

very funny...

awesome updates...

Maan and Geet crossed their limits...

waiting for their reaction in the morning...

thanx for pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls cont update yaar...very lovely..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 5
nice lovely part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part. Update next part soon.

Posted: 13 years ago
#28

part 6

Maan opens his eyes slowly...he was feeling very heavy due to last nights hangover...he then moves a little and the sight before him terrified him...His Mishti lie cuddled to him and that too n***d...he could not bear the sight...he wriggled out which made geet wake up...she was shocked and shattered by the act they committed...she carried a sheet she found and rushed to the washroom crying...maan was extremely guilty...he hated himself...geet could not control herself from crying...suddenly maan notices the sheets which had few blood stains...he was utterly confused??it happens with girls at their first...but geet???he could not think of anything...he just went out...

Listen to this song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vj72Wc4CXvA

naa jee sake yaha, naa mar sake yaha

hasne kee bat chhodo, naa ro sake yaha

toh jaye ham kaha - (3)

meanwhile geet recalled her married life with Ranbir...a jyothish Rano had consulted said that the couple should not have physical relation for 8 months as it could create problems in geet concieving later.ranbir was more than ready as he cared about geet first before anything.both fulfilled their respective duties well and loved each other truely but destinys play was brutal as Ranbir died.leaving geet alone.not even in her wildest dreams she had thought that she and maan could do something like this...

yeh dard kee aahe juda huyee rahe

(bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire

mohabbat ke sare sitam dhire dhire) - (2)

Days pass by...the guilt was killing the two of them.they tried not to meet each other...as they really could not face each other...it was time for geet to leave for singapore for her program...she felt it was good as she will be away for a month...

just before leaving...she badly wanted to see maan...but she coulnt...she just send him a text...

"i m going...hope everything becomes normal again..."

she wasnt angry on maan as she knew it wasnt his fault...maan saw this text and rushed to the airport as he badly wanted to see her...but fate had other plans as by the time he reached...the flight had taken off...he felt deep pain in his heart so did she...what was that feeling(love...what else...)

abhee naj hai tute dil ko wafa pe - (2)

ke tutenge sare bharam dhire dhire

bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire

geet reaches singapore and Arnav Singh Raizada was there to recieve her...they shared a great bond of freindship and he was her rakhi brother(a fact unknown to all...even maan)...they hug and was happy to see each other after soo long...she was his PRINCESS!!!

days pass by...maan was feeling restless...his eyes longed to see geet...he lost his sleep...he was dying every minute...

dil meraa chahe ke sine se dil mai nikal ke phaink du

bedard iss berehem ko hawa me uchhal ke phaink du

dhoka diya mujhko dhoka diya, dil ne mere haye yeh kya kiya

dil meraa chahe ke sine se dil mai nikal ke phaink du

geets program was getting amazing reviews…all were happy…but geets eyes reflected sadness…..arnav noticed this….

Geet decides to tell him everything…..

Geet:arnie(as she called him)…pata nahi kyun dil main ek ajeeb s bechaini ho rahi hai…din raat bus maan ke khayaal hi rehta hai mann main….kyun aisa hota hai..

Arnav:kyunki my dear princess….tujhe pyaar hua hai…

Geet:pyaar…nahi…aisa kuch nahi hai…..

Arnav:yes my princess….you are very much in LOVE with maan……chahe tum jo bhi kaho…

Geet:but arnie…kya maan bhi…

Arnav:we will see about that….aggar nahi hai…tho I promise u…I will make him fall in love with u!!!!!!

lamho se hare bujhe najare

abb toh sahenge yeh gham dhire dhire

bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire

Maan:I m in love with u geet….ek baar tu waapas aajaye…I will make u mine forever!!!!i promise!!!!

Geet was now really excited….one month had passed and it was time for her to return…she was shopping with arnav in a mall when she suddenly fainted…..

Arnav panicked and took her to the doctor….

Doctor:congrats ms.geet……u r pregnant…aap maa banne wale ho

Geet was elated..she caressed her stomach…..her maanu's baby….their baby…..she was in tears…arnav hugged her…

Arnav:this means my chotu PRINCess is coming soon….yayyy

Geet blushed….

tanha akele me yado ke mele me tum gaye chhod ke

wado kee rasmo ko, chahat kee kasmo ko tum gaye todke

ghadiya sitamgar katatee nahee, ulfat ke manjar se hatatee nahee

tanha akele me yado ke mele me tum gaye chhod ke

Doctor:you have to be very careful ms.geet….already because of rigorous dances u have strained yourself and you are very aneamic….and please avoid travel for at least 2 weeks.

Arnav:jii doctor…my sister will be all healthy…..so will the junior…

Geet was really happy…she wanted to call maan…..just then she got a call from MAAN himself…

Maan:mishti…(his voice trembled)

Geet:maanu….

Maan:I know u must be angry with me….but if I don't tell you this…mujhe kabhi chain nahi milega…I am really sorry for what I did…..and…..I LOVE YOU MISHTY!!!!!mai tumhre bina jee nahi sakta…..please come back to my life…

jahan bhee jau tumhe hee pau

rukenge humare kadam dhire dhire

bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire

Geet was in tears…..

Geet:maanu…..

Maan:geet…I m coming to u….right now….

Geet:no maan……mai aa rahi hun…in 2 weeks….i promise {maan was excited}

Days pass by….arnav was extra careful and caring to geet….

Geet:arnie….is there any mandir nearby..

Arnav:ha….there is…I will take you ther…

Geet:no arnie…mai khud chali jaungi…..tu already itnA busy hai….

Arnav:ok fine…but be carefulll

Geet went to the mandir…..she thanked god for giving her all the happiness.she takes a cab and goes back….suddenly the cab crashes and faces a huge accident…maan on the other side is feeling highly restless and pain...he feels he is loosing something important...

abhee naj hai tute dil ko wafa pe - (2)

ke tutenge sare bharam dhire dhire - (2)

geet is critical and taken to the hospital…..arnav rushes to the hospital hearing the news…his heart tore seeing geet in the hospital…...the doctor came out

Arnav:doctor….geet kaisi hai??how is she??

Doctor recognized him as he was a known person and hospitals trustee…

Doctor:mr.raizada….geet aapke kaun lagte hai??

Arnav:my sister(he said)…..woh kaisi hai…..

Doctor:Mr.raizada…I have a bad news….geet cannot walk anymore…she lost her legs balance….she will be on a wheelchair for life…..

ke tutenge sare bharam dhire dhire - (2)

bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire

mohabbat ke sare sitam dhire dhire

The world seemed slipping under arnavs legs….he was shocked and saddened for geets state….

Doctor continued:ek aur bad news hai…she lost her baby………….

Arnav was lost……his mind had only flashes of his geet dancing…her happy life with maan….their child….everything that crushed down in a few hours…..he started crying bitterly!!!

Precap

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept...
loved all updates till now...

do pm the next part...
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amazing update...
loved it alot...

do pm the next part...

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