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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

@great_love

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

HMMM... SIMENTENOUSLY PAST AND PRESENT...@ANS TO UR NOTE
NYC UPDATES

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

awesome, emotional, nice part
loved it
what is happening with geet
who r they ,
y they r torturing geet
hope maan find this all and save geet
continue soon

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Loved the update. Superb
but where is geet
continue soon

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

awesome update poor geet she is missing and know one know where she is awesome update maan knows she is in danger hope he find her soon thanks for the pm loved the update

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

nw wht will maan do...i hope k maan will save geet...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

continue nxt prt soo plz...

eagerly waiting...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! well written! Past n present is fine

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Awesome update..

awww where is geet??

curious to knw abt wht happened 5 yrs ago...

continue soon

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

what is happening with Geet...

who are they torturing her...

I think u first finish past...

see in my POV---this time there are many suspenses...first their past...what happened that Geet even left her child and Maan...then in present also...here Maan's life with his daughter...he is searching for Geet...there Geet is in somebody's custody...so there are many suspenses and incidents running parallel...it will be better if one suspense is completed that is their past and then u can concentrate on present and Maan's search for Geet...

very interesting part...

thanx for pm...