MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm update...👏...
aab kea hoga?Maan aur kitne dntak ayse betha rhga?aabto usse ana chahiye.

Richi,plz issbar jldi update dena...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for update
soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow lovely update.. geet ki marraige talk and angry geet maan were are u see they are fixing marraige for ur wife geet..i love te update
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25
nice part...
why is her dad doing this?
cont soon dear...
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*DEMON'S ANGEL*
PART - 26

GEETAKSHI ws trn in2 a statue. She lokd hrslf in hr own room. 2 days passd nd she dsnt cm out of hr room. Wen Karanveer forcily opnd it,he found hr sittng on hr bed,bt she ws nt ok. Hr eyes is empty nd lifeless. Hr heartbeat is running bt she trnd in2 a staute. She is nt mor den a dead body. Karaveer immediately summnd hs rajvaid(doc),bt he also proved fails 2 bring bak hr 2 hr sences. She luked nd feel evrythng bt doesnt respond. Rajvaid trying hs lvl best 2 ciure hr.it seems dat she lost hr whole wish 2 live. Someshwar insist Karaveer 2 meet hr,bt Karanveer rejects hs request nd told hm d reason dat she is nt well. Someshwar felt insult nd fumed bt nt show in front of him. 3 mor days passd nd Geetakshi laid same on hr bed. Her mother cried nd feared seeing her like dat. Karaneer 2 gt tensed nd dont undrstand what exactly happns 2 hr. He discussed dis pproblem wid hs court men. He ws in deep discussion with dem,wen hs servant came nd inform dat 2 saints r come 2 meet him. Karanveer allowed both in respectfully,nd welcomed wen dey enterd in his court. Karanveer greets both nd dey gave deir blessings 2 him.

Karanveer:baba ap log kon hai or yaha aane ka prayojan?

He enquired about dem politely.

1 saint:hum sadhu hai or apke liye itna janna kafi hai ki yaha hum apki sahayta hetu aaye hai.

Karanveer ws amused wid hs statmnt:kaisi sahayta maharaj?

Saint:apki putri asvasth(ill) hai or sare upchar b vifal hue hai uski chetna lotane me kyu sahi keh raha hu na main?

Karnveer ws in trauma. He felt some hope of ray,bt side by side he dont wants 2 fool himslf.

Karanveer:apne sahi kaha baba.lekin apko ye baat kaise pata?or aap humari madat kyu karna chahte hai?

Saint:humare guruji(pointing 2wards another saint who stand silent next 2 hm.)antaryami hai.wo jaha se b gujarte hai logo k kashto ko durr karte hue jate hai. Hum log yaha se guzar rahe the tabi Guruji ko abhas hua ki is rajmahal me koi hai jise unki sahayta ki avshyakta hai.

Karanveer:ap bilkul sai samye par aaye hai baba.meri putri 5 dinn se achetan avstha me hai. Na kuchh bolti na kuchh harkat kr rai hai bilkul murti bani padi hai apne kaksh me.yadi aap use theek kr denge to ap chahe wo le skte hai.

Elder Saint:hume tumhari putri k pas le chalo.

His tone is very calm. Karanveer bowed in front of him nd tuk him 2 Geetakshi's rum.Elder saint enterd in room nd oderd all 2 leave.

Elder Saint:ab aap sabi is kaksh se bahr jaiye.1 bhi jeevit prani mere or rajkumari k alawa yaha nahi hona chahiye.

Karanveer doesnt like his order. As a fathr he ws concious nd dont want 2 leave hs daughtr alone wid a strange man.

Karanveer:kintu baba...

He showed hs doubts.

Saint:maharaj apko baba ki shaktio pe sandeh hai? Tadi aisa hai to hum abi yaha se prasthan(leave now)kr dete hai.

Karanveer joint hs hands:nai baba mera wo matlab nai tha,kintu akele...?

He hesitate alot completeing himslf.

Elder Saint:hum upchar akele me hi karenge.yadi apko manjur hai to theek anytha hum chale jate hai.

Karnveer pleads:nai baba.mujhe shama kar deejiye aap jaisa kahenge hum wai karenge.

Elder Saint signaled his companian nd he make sure dat all leave d room. Aftr evry1 left,elder saint locked hr room frm inside. He went near hr nd sat on hr bed. She ws lay limp on hr bed wid hr eyes closd. He ws soo mush lost in hr angelic beauty and gazed hr without a blink of hs eyes. He stretchd hs arm and carees her forehead wid d tips of hs fingers. His touch proved so magical and she awked wid a jerk. She scanned whole rrom and found herslf wid an old man. She scared seeing a man having long white beared and long white hairs. She felt disperced as he looks her body. His hysterical gaze disturbs hr alot.
She slipped away frm him and stands on d other side of hr bed.

Geetakshi:kon ho tm or mere kaksh me kya kr rahe ho? Or meri sari dasiya kaha hai?

Her voice is full of anger and aggression bt she ws so weak and cant able 2 stands properly. Her head spin and vision turnd blurred. Elder saint rush 2 her but she also moved far away frm him.

Elder saint:dekho rajkumari jidd mat karo.tum khud ko chot pahuncha logi.

Geetakshi recented:or agar tumne galti se b chhune ki koshish ki to mere pati tumhari jaan lelenge.paas mat aana mere warna achha nai hoga samjhe tum.

Elder Saint:achha sach me to kaha hai tumhare patidev mujhe to nazar nai aa rahe kahi.(he start steppiing towards her)main b dekhta hu kon mujhe rokta hai.

Geetakshi luked here nd dere nd pick 1 vass 2 hit him:aage mat bado wrna anjaam achha nahi hoga.

Saint:or agar main aage badu to tum kya karogi?is kaksh e tumhari sahayta k liye tab tak koi nahi aayega jab tak ki hum khud sabko ander aane k liye nahi keh dete. Kanya ab hum 2 k siva is kaksh me koi nahi aa skta...

He said mischeviously and stepped towrds hr. She threw dat vass 2 hit hm bt he bends and save frm hr attack...


PRECAP ;-P ANY GUSSESS GIRLS WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPNED NOW :-O
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Posted: 12 years ago

wowww actually i don't have the words now to praise you...


its like a fantasy and thank u sooo much for including index...


update was fantastic... hehhe maan is saint...

please jaldi update kar do i can't wait

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part dear

maan is saint na

i know please cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part yaar...
yeh dusht bhi aa gaya gert se shaddi karne...
well i think ki yeh saint is non other den maan... hehe m right na...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey maan is saint
who is wid her
wo maan tho nahi hai na
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon
Edited by kiran_rati - 12 years ago

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