MG FF: Angel Of My Life Pt 14 pg 105 18th nov - Page 52

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Part 14



In Khurana Kingdom:

Maan is in his room painting something. Painting is his hobby. Unknowingly he painted the image of geet, when he completed he was shocked seeing his own painting. Geet is not at all leaving his thoughts. And till today he met many people but this girl made a special place in his heart. His eyes are yearning to see her, geet's face is flashing in front of his eyes making him mad. He lied down on his cozy bed lost in geet's thoughts. He closed his eyes to get some sleep but all went in vain, he is waiting for this night to be over soon so that he can get the glimpse of geet again, as she only told she will daily here for flowers.

"Will she come tomorrow also? I told her not to come, but she is stubborn. What if she listens me and don't come. Hope she comes, I want to see her and make sure she is fine because she was drowning in water hope she didn't get ill. Yes I am worried about her because she belongs to my kingdom and I want my people to be safe" thought maan and convinced himself, but in deep heart he want to get glimpse of geet.

Next day morning, Maanveer got up as usual before sunrise took his horse and is riding towards the jungle. Today he reached the jungle before the time as it is still dark outside. Early in the morning in the jungle made him feel fresh, forgetting all his worries about his kingdom and enemies. He completed his routine sword fight practice, when he was about to go back to kingdom he heard the sound of anklets. He is curious to know who is that. "Is she the same girl whom I saw yesterday?" thought maanveer and stopped his horse. As usual Geetanjali came there for flowers, she silently went towards the area where maanveer usually practice his sword fight. Today she didn't find him, her face fell. Here maanveer saw she is searching for someone, he got down from the horse and followed her. He then saw her going back near the lake again with a sad face. "Whom she is searching" thought maanveer. He then realized it is the same place where he practices every day. That means she is searching for him. A small smile formed on his lips and left from there making sure that she too left.

The routine followed for some days, usually geet use to watch him secretly and go. But now maanveer is doing the same, he is watching her secretly and after she left from there he too use to leave. He don't know her name, he want to know her name but don't know how. He just can't go directly and ask what her name is. Without knowing anything he left from there. It was lunch time he was called by his mother for lunch. Everything was set in big plate, maanveer along with his parents and ministers were having food, that day everyone appreciated the food as it is very tasty. Maan too liked the food, today the items are more tasty.

"Mata (mom), who prepared food today?" asked maanveer. "Our cook's daughter prepared food today" told maan's maa. Maan nodded and told "After lunch, send her to my mahal (room) I want to gift her for preparing tasty food" Maa nodded and told "I will send her" After lunch a small meeting was held between maanveer and the ministers. Then he came to know that dev is planning something against his kingdom. Maanveer became alert and ordered the minister to be careful and ordered the soldiers to be careful and if they think that dev's kingdom is coming for war then they should inform him immediately. But maan thought to go and check on the border of the kingdom everything is fine as he want his soldiers to be safe.

Maanveer retired to his room after the meeting, then one of the soldier told him that someone is waiting for him outside. Maan remembered that he told his mata to send the cook into his mahal. "Send her in" told maanveer, soldier nodded and left from there. The cook came in "Namaste Maharaj" she wished. Maan turned back to hear the same voice which he is not able to forget. "Tum?" asked maanveer. Geet felt nervous and replied "J... ji... Maharani told me that you called me" she stammered. Maan want to laugh out loud seeing her scary face and she is not even looking at him. "yes I called you, I want to tell you that you cooked very well today" told maan and gave her the gift. "Ji... maharaj iski koi jarurat nahi" told geet, she is already in cloud 9 that she is seeing him after a long time. Her heart is beating so loud that she is scared if maharaj listens. And on top of that she is in his mahal, she soon came back to normal and chided herself for what she is thinking. She knows she loves maharaj more than her life, but this is wrong. How can she love him, she is a mere girl in his kingdom, there are so many girls who are ready to marry him and give their kingdom to him but what she has to give, nothing. She calmed down a bit and realized maharaj is calling her from long.

"Maaf karna maharaj, mai kuch soch rahi thi" apologized geet. "Thik hai, yeh lo" told maanveer and gave her the gift. Geet, without denying further took the gift thinking he might be already angry on her with her stupid behavior. Geet ran to her house having so many feelings in her heart. Here maanveer is so happy to see her in his mahal, he felt so special having her in his mahal. He felt so happy, but his eyes didn't miss her painful eyes. He wants to know what is bothering her and decided to know the reason.

Next day morning, maanveer as usual went to jungle. But that day he was little late. After so many days geetanjali got to see maharaj and she felt so happy. She wants to live her life this way by seeing her maharaj mornings and start her day afresh. Maanveer finished his workout and geetanjali was about to leave from there but felt a pull and within a span of second she banged to maharaj and he is holding her hand tightly, if he leaves her she will vanish again. "Aap yaha roz kya kar rahi hai?" asked maanveer. Geet looked at him shocked.

Precap: Geetanjali learning sword fight from Maanveer


Here is the next update of Angel of my life, i hope you remember this story and please press like and comment. I am damn nervous about this FF as i am updating after a long time.


The scenes of this story are completely my imagination and any resemblence in any scene its totally co-incidence and please tell me know through PM.


Cheers

Chinni

Edited by chinni10 - 11 years ago

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