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Posted: 13 years ago
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WAITING

EAGERLY

FOR

THE

FIRST

PART

OF

THIS

FF

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

hi dearies!!!!!!!!!!! here u go 1st part...our finger crossed... plz do tell us how do u like it or not...


Part 1

Maan the business tycoon of India..Whom all falls for his handsome looks were descending his steps in km..his footsteps made all servants fear n concentrated on their work..he can see every nook n corner of his mansion from where he is ..Kitchen dining n the big living room …his eye stopped on the cook who was busy in his phone chatting..maans eyes turned red in anger..he came n sat in dining..Another servant nudged the cook n he switched off his phone seeing his master already seated for breakfast..he sweated badly…he wiped his sweats n placed the breakfast on table…though maan was not specific in food,he needs tasty…the cook served him n maan kept the first piece of food in his mouth…he spitted it out n his rage was seen in his face…

Maan - What's this..do u call this as food..?

The cook was confused..as what mistake he has done..

Maan took the bowl of curry n thud bowl is on cook head very harshly and cook's head start bleeding..the cooks was baffled n other servants trembled in fear..when the curry went inside cooks mouth ,he realized, what mistake he has done..not 1 mistake..many mistake..Concentrating in phone,he has added sugar instead of salt..n has added more spice..more than all,the curry tasted burnt smell..as he did not stir frequently..it has burned..

Cook:i..i..am sor..ry sir..

Maan:u r fired..

Nakul,the head of all servants came to maan..

Nakul - Maan baba..forgive him for one time..

Maan – nakul kaka i never repeat mistake what my dad do and lastly pay with his life... i never give 2nd chance to anyone..and my decision is final...he should be thankful to me that i doesn't kill him for his negligence... i already take decision and i never change it for anyone and thats final..ask him to vacate quarters in an hour..

Nakul pitied the cook n said

Nakul kaka – maan baba i ask him to do so,till then u change ur dress n come..see the curry has spilled all over ur dress also.. in mean time i prepare something for u...

Cook look nakul kaka with hope... because cook know if maan through him out no one dare to gave him another job but he also knows if his boss take any decision its next to impossible that he can change it for anyone in this world..

Nakul kaka (put his hand on cook shoulder)- I cant help you.. and leave from there...

Maan after changing his dress enter in a room which is dark and cold... like no life is there he put on the lights and see a lifeless old woman lying on bed...he see this woman ful of life, joyful, laughing, giggling, playing but now there is no life in her from last 10 years... he come close to her and sit beside her on her bed which is surrounded by so many life supporting machines...she having oxygen mask and drip in her hand.. he softly cares her head and give a peck on her forehead...past start running in front of his eyes

Flash back

Rajbeer tightly holding Dev Chopra from his neck where simran's death body lying on floor in pool of blood.. its not like rajbeer doesn't shoot his also having 5 bullet in his body still try his best to save his 15 year old son who is standing at main door with his 60 year old dadi , who is pulling his grandson to run for his life where rajbeer shout on top of his lungs

Rajbeer – maan run my boy... u have to live for ur dadi and to take revenge for ur parents death from this bustard who killed ur mom and my love...maan go away from here

Dadi (while pulling maan) – maan chalo beta...

But maan was looking his mom' lifeless body on floor... no word is come in to his ear as he too lost... when his dad last line echo in his ears

Rajbeer – champ go atleast save my mom from this devil...plz champ run... all the while dev wriggle in get free from rajbeer's grip but his all attempt is fail..

Maan gave last look to his dad and mom and run with his dadi to save her and his life... they come running to nakul's house penting heavily... dadi ask nakul to save maan and send him away from that devil because now he is the whole and soul owner of the Khurana Empire which is result of hard work of her husband and son... her son only do one mistake he trust on his wife step brother who killed his own sister and husband for money...dadi placed FIR in police station against dev but dev already underground know one know about his whereabouts and after 1 month even police declear him death... but devil doesn't dead so sooner... after 1 month dadi coming back from temple dev kidnap her and torture her for maan's address... nakul and mohinder somehow able to save her from dev but its too late she already slipped in to coma... after his parents murder dadi send maan to London to save his life..but when maan come to know about dadi's condition he come back and start look after his dad business with study and taking care of dadi... nakul and mohinder worried about maan's security and ask for police protection... even make maan agreed for security... in last 10 years... maan become a heartless INSANE person... he trust only nakul and mohinder... for others he is only a devil who never think twice before killing u for ur one mistake..

Flash back ends

Maan's eyes become teary he wipe his tears and make his way out of the room with a saying a single word...

Maans secretary came

Secretary - Sir,our driver mohinders wife has come to see u..

Mohinder was his driver working under khurans for ages..maan had a soft corner to him..last week he died ..maan was really missing him..though maan was harsh always to all, he was soft with him as he has memories attached with his parents..n used to share his parents gud nature n love about maan and he is one who save his dadi from dev in his absence

Maan -Nakul kaka..get my suit ..

Nakul - Ji baba..

Rano entered the mansion hesitatingly..

Rano - Namaste

Maan - Hmm..maan looked at rano,who was standing like a lifeless soul..he has seen her 2 or 3 times..but that time she was so happy ...

Rano - Ji..im rano handa..aapki driver ki patni..

Maan - Ya I know..

Rano started to cry..

Maan though hated the tears, he was helpless looking at the elder women..

Nakul came n gave the suit to maan..

Nakul saw rano crying..he came to her..

Nakul - Rano..tum yahaan..kyun rorahi ho..

Rano - Nakul bhaiya,wo mujei akele chod kar calegayi..mei akeli aurat,kya karun..agar bachi na hothi mar jathi..all relations cheated me..i don't know where to go..so I came here to seek help..

Nakul - Saaf saaf kaho..

Rano - Bhaiya u know na though small we had a house of own..he made deposits for future..but his brothers forged his signature n took all under their custody n threwed me out of house..

Maans mind went to flashback..he folded his hands in fists..Controlling his anger..all are cheaters..

Rano:gudia hostel mei hai..uska tho ye sab patha nehi..lekin ab mei kya karun..muje apne beti ke liye kaam tho karna haina..isilye saab se madath maagne aaya hoon..

Saabji.pls muje koi bhi kaam deejiye..mei poori sidhat ke saath karungi..

Maan:I understand ur situation..but I can't help u..

Nakul:baba,we must help her..kamse kam mohinder kliye..

Maan:what work she can do kaka..we have all servants here..

Nakul:baba,she is a great cook..u can give her that post..

Maan thought for a while..

Maan:ok..first let me taste her food..then I'll say..i want my breakfast sharp in 20 minutes..

Rano:ji..

Nakul showed rano kitchen..

Maan seated on the living room n watched her cooking..the smell itself created hunger inside him..sharp after 20 minutes..the food was ready..

Maan tasted the first piece..n he whispered maa unknowingly..n his eyes moisted..the food tasted like his mother prepares for him..

Rano:kya hua beta..zyadha mirchi dalthi hai kya..

Maan composed to his original self..

Maan:no..

Nakul was happy seeing maans this side..

He had his food cherishing after many years…he even licked his fingers tasting the left over ..

Maan:rano maa,u may work here..he stood washing his hands..n moved to exit..

The word rano maa,stunned even nakul..

The hard shell even needs love..

Rano:where will I stay bhaiya..

Nakul -we all stay in servant quarters..but all are males..u r the first female here..i'll make alternate changes for ur stay..

Rano:yahaan kaun rehtha hai..


Nakul -sirf maan baba aur dadi yaha rehti hain..hmm..ek kaam karthe hain..u stay in kitchen for 2 or 3 days..till then I'll make a room free in quarters..

rano:ok..

Nakul taught her maans likes n dislikes..his way of having black coffee..n his timings on dining…she even start taking care of dadi..

it was two days rano stayed there..as she was elder than all..all respected her..

maan came at midnight

the mansion was dead silent..

maan(st) - hmm..all servants must have retired to their quarters..

.he don't know rano was staying in kitchen..his head was paining..he thought of having coffee..so he headed to kitchen n switched on the lights..

It made rano wake up..

Rano:beta aap..is waqt..kitchen mei..

Maan:aap yahaan kya karrahi hai..

Rano:wo nakul said he will clear a room in quarters for me as all are full..so,I sleep here..

Maan:oh..

Rano:aapko kuch chahiye..beta..

Beta word always made him week..

Maaan:hmm wo..my head is paining..i need coffee..

Rano:you sit..i'll make..

She made coffee n gave it to him..she took the balm n applied on his forehead..n gently massaged..

Maan felt relieved..

Maan:rano maa..aap so jayiye..

He went to his room n slept..

The mid night incident n his need made maan think..so he said nakul,let maa stay in mansion itself…and its also convenient for taking care of dadi too..

Rano also agreed..

It is six months now,she has started to work in mansion..she has seen his anger to all except her n nakul..she maintained a little distance from him..as a worker…

Dadi also gelled up with her because she also treat mohinder as her own son... dadi health start improving under good care of rano..

Maan get to know it and his respect toward rano also increase... he also help her to get her house back, for that he killed her relatives... but no one know this reality... but he ask rano to live in mansion only... and she agreed...

Once in a month she will ask permission to visit her daughter..

Maan one day asked..

Maan - Where is ur daughter..

Rano - She is in hostel..

Maan - What is she doing..

Rano - She is in 10th grade now..her father paid full amount at starting

itself warna,uski studies par bi asar pad sakthi thi..bcoz of her

uncles…

Maan did not say anything nor interested more about her

daughter..

Next - maan chasing dev...


thanks dearies for ur likes and comments🤗

plz ignore spelling and grammar mistakes😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
yepiii me first 😆

ok dearies we saw lots of readers having so many question regarding to the ff so here is note for u all...this ff is little bit different...and grey too, their is so many surprises for u all in this ff... so relax dont panic and get confused...just wait and watch what surprises is in store for u... and u see valli di already writing 4 ff with family and kids... and me 1 with my job and study so plz consider with us for updates but we both try to give regularly...



love u all
ruby😊
Edited by rubykatariya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
wow it's too gud...

but u killed mohinder in 1st part itself..
and sadder part is me leaving for 3 months😭
but i'll defo read after coming back..😊




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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
MIND BLOWING DEAR MAAN LONGING FOR HIS PARENTS LOVE AND SEE HIS MOTHER IN RANO

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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
superb update..
maan is so dangerous yaar..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
wow suprbb start
interesting
next part cont soonnn

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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Awesome update dear . continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
yaar geet to av v nanhi si hain...10 years younger than maan...bt maan actually killed them to bring ranos property back...hajam nehi hui...maan is a killer...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Interesting start
really loved it
continue soon
😳😃

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