vampire's Bride maaneet ff update on pg 35 15/3

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

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chapter-6
now i was really beging to get scared.
its ok baby i know u have always had the hots for me&the best thing is u c an shout as much as u want&no1 will hear u,he add with smirk
the panic began to set as lucky hadnds begn to rome acrossing my body
just 1 kiss,he moned,i dont think u relise just how long,i have been wating for u
he lent up&began to take his shirt giving me view of his prfect abs,but also giving me the oporturity to get away with a quick lift of my leg i knead him hard betwn leg

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

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continu..
dont ever touch me again,i hissed betwn my teeth as lucky face turned deadly white.he let out a hug gap then fell of the bed his hand between his leg
u bit*h,he wheezed betwn short breath,just u wait untill i get up
that. my cue.i was so out of home racing down the stair,i was out the front door like a shot&before i knew it i was at the botom of the long drive way to house
oh crap,i whispered to myself as i lane down to walk,wht the hell do i do now?it was at lest 5mile to nearest village

next - pg- 7

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

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continu..
it was vertualy pitch black apart from the half moon.i had left my coat behind at the house&to top it all off i was in place that was full of tree&possibly all sorts of wild animal not forgeting that it was very spooky being out here all alone.
as my anger subside i become more scared my imagination conjuring up vivid scary scenarious.my eye with its clammy hands
i screamed as i heard a noise to the side of me then broke into ran when i saw a gray blur drat from the tree mealding direct to me

next - pg- 7

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

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continu..
i didnt had the chance to ran again because in a split of sec i was lying on the floor my head trobbing pain fuly as my eyes close&i fel into unconsciousness
{the real game begins NOW}

NOTE:plz do like press button and comment is must
and do come out of the sell of nice,beautiful come on i am doing so much of manath &u all r not even leving long comment,i feel like crying

next - updating on 4/8/2012

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angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

we like your update dear! Plz update soon!

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

till part 6
nice...
this Lucky seems to be sick...
poor Geet...
where is Maan?
cont soon...

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Peridot11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Nice updates

loved all of them

do continue

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angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

hey why did u have
to stop here. Plz update the next part
soon.

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

hy guys,i am very upset by the less comment i got

guy did u notice i dint got 1 full page comment also
just think if u were me then how u will fell
just think and tell me if i am wrong if any 1 of u will say that i am wrong then i promise that i will give u daily update,no matter how much less like i got.

lots & lots of love
puja

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angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

hey puja you are right, bt think abt us na, we read, like and comment your work.. I really like your ff's concept and all update. and now waiting for your update. .
:-(

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