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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Jus read all parts.

N m glad i did.

Its vry diffrnt n vry well writtn.

Plz conti soon n plz add me to ur pmlist.

Also m sry i won't b able to click like,though i liked it lot, bcoz readng frm fone n like tab doesnt wrk.

Count my like frm my comment plz

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

nice, lovely part
loved it
continue soon

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Mansi Tripathi

@mansi.tripathi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

2 more likes before the update

😊

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mounacuty

@mounacuty

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

waiting
waiting
waiting

waiting
waiting
waiting

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nadira

@nadira29

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

WOW AMAZING DESCRIPTION
GEET'S DRESS
N MAAN'S INTENTIONS
WAITING 4 NEXT PART
SUPERB SHEENU

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

interesting story ...maaneet as demons...

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Fabulous dear
maaneet passionate moments aur he also felt pain when she cried and respected her and didn't consumate at first place
and their challenge waiting for it

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

JUST READ IT

SO MAAN FELT HER PAIN FOR THE FIRST TIME

HE RESPECTED HER WISHES NOT TO CONSUMMATE

WAITING FOR NIGHT 1

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Enigma78

@Enigma78

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

So Maan is being considerate in not forcing himself on Geet... and is even growing a concious feeling Geet's pain although not to the same extent as her.

An interesting challenge set by Maan... but will he be able to control himself I wonder... 😉