'Two Broken hearts fall in love'Pt:68Pg:42 (The END)

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK

oh teri. . . someone is not liking the track.

i won't disappear now i promise 😳

Its not that i am not liking the track but suspense is too much..just praying u dont write sad endings like i do..🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: mchopra
Its not that i am not liking the track but suspense is too much..just praying u dont write sad endings like i do..🤣

oh to aisi baat hai 🤣

why do u give sad endings but don't want others to give sad endings hmmm?

i am not saying i am or i am not. . .just wait and see jii. I am updating tomorrow 😃

at the moment i am supposed to be updating Love is blind 😆

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK

oh to aisi baat hai 🤣

why do u give sad endings but don't want others to give sad endings hmmm?

i am not saying i am or i am not. . .just wait and see jii. I am updating tomorrow 😃

at the moment i am supposed to be updating Love is blind 😆

U see i lub to make ppl cry but not cry myself 😉

Love is blind ki toh story also i have fogotten..it was such a long break u took..hehe

U are not saddist type darling..so i know it wont be sad.. 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: mchopra
U see i lub to make ppl cry but not cry myself 😉

Love is blind ki toh story also i have fogotten..it was such a long break u took..hehe

U are not saddist type darling..so i know it wont be sad.. 😃

is that why ppl call u a vamp? 😆

i think u told me that once a while back.

I took the same break i took for TBHFIL. As soon as i updated TBHFIL people started commenting now its LIB's turn 😆. So i am trying to update that now but i am getting distracted.

yeah i am not the saddist type yet . . . i might be later on.

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK

is that why ppl call u a vamp? 😆

i think u told me that once a while back.

I took the same break i took for TBHFIL. As soon as i updated TBHFIL people started commenting now its LIB's turn 😆. So i am trying to update that now but i am getting distracted.

yeah i am not the saddist type yet . . . i might be later on.

Yes thats why i am called VAMPIRE..i keep killing someone or the other in my OS's..its just a habit..cant think of a story without that..😆

LIB ki story bata..i dont rem head or tail of it..i forgot it when u took that break last time..abhi wala toh was small..wait i will link u to one of my Os's

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1545811/os-the-angels-errand

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mchopra
Yes thats why i am called VAMPIRE..i keep killing someone or the other in my OS's..its just a habit..cant think of a story without that..😆
LIB ki story bata..i dont rem head or tail of it..i forgot it when u took that break last time..abhi wala toh was small..wait i will link u to one of my Os's
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1545811/os-the-angels-errand

Check page 5 of your OS.

how do u have the heart to imagine and write maan or Geet dying 😭

if i do that i know i will cry cuz their so close to me like they really exist and are a part of my life.

r u serious u don't remember 1 bit 😆

okay i am copying and pasting this from my LIB thread. . . but it doesn't summaries the 7 parts after that. which u will have to read 😉

Dev and Geet were married and it was a love marriage..They fell in love during college days..both loved each other very much but dev started ignoring her all of sudden when his company got bankrupt.

On other hand, Maan Singh khurana who's life revolved around his family, for the past month has been seeing these pair of brown eyes haunting him ...asking for help. He sees nothing but her veiled face and eyes full of masked pain holding him prisoner...Who was this anjaani girl? WHo was this brown eyes?

He bumps into this girl accidently one night and time stood still as he watched the girl of his dreams walk away. Again her face was covered in a veil only showcasing her hypnotizing eyes. Was he dreaming? Was his brown eyes real?

This brown eyes is none other than Geet. He again encounters her at a business party again face covered with a veil, but at that party he fell in love with her in first sight.Her brown eyes captured his heart the most.

Dev told geet to dance so that she could impress MSk and do bussiness with him.
During the party only, Geet got drunk and started dancing and on the way to home with dev she asked him about her husband and dev got irritated and slapped her and told her to leave his house and geet left the house and in way when she was enjoying the rain maan saw her and recognizes her as his brown eyes and geet in drunken state told maan that he is her husband because she sees love in his eyes for her.

After that maan tried best to get rid of her with his harsh words and after some encounters she started calling him hippo.Then they both went to hotel to take a room and surprisingly only one room was available. Inside, Geet tried to get intimate with maan thinking he was Dev but Maan rejected her and geet got hurt and seeing geet hurt maan clarified that he cannot take advantage of her in this condition and they both slept cuddling with each other.

In the morning when geet saw she is sleeping with some random man,she lost it and slapped maan and then maan came to know that she is married geet then went to dev and there watchman told that dev has told to not allow her and geet thought that it is because of maan.

and so to get an answer she went to maan. Maan Singh Khurana seeing Geet confront him in his office out of rage he also goes and kisses her in front of the whole crowd! She ends up fainting.

Geet regains consciousness and finds out that she misunderstood Maan. She blurts out a sorry to him before running away trying to hide her tears. Maan finds Geet and clears everything between them. He even is willing to go help her and get the answers she deserves to get from dev. But when they go they find out that Dev has left to london for some time. Geet is completely broken.

Maan takes her to his house and is doing all his best to ease her pain and bring a smile onto her face. But Geet has started to feel this unknown attraction toward Maan! Are they feelings developing for maan or is it just an attraction?

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK

Check page 5 of your OS.

how do u have the heart to imagine and write maan or Geet dying 😭

if i do that i know i will cry cuz their so close to me like they really exist and are a part of my life.

r u serious u don't remember 1 bit 😆

okay i am copying and pasting this from my LIB thread. . . but it doesn't summaries the 7 parts after that. which u will have to read 😉

7 only na i will manage..half an hr max..😉

and hmph u have read this let me give u sadder one..padna hai..

and i dont know the emotions are at its peak when its something sad..thst my crazy brain..hehe

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mchopra

7 only na i will manage..half an hr max..😉
and hmph u have read this let me give u sadder one..padna hai..
and i dont know the emotions are at its peak when its something sad..thst my crazy brain..hehe

yeah gosh it was so beautiful but sad. Missy i will have to get revenge from you somehow for making a zaalim like me cry 😡

okay i will prepare myself. I won't cry haan this time . . i hope 😆

oh and here is the link to LIB

Love is blind

Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK

yeah gosh it was so beautiful but sad. Missy i will have to get revenge from you somehow for making a zaalim like me cry 😡

okay i will prepare myself. I won't cry haan this time . . i hope 😆

oh and here is the link to LIB

Love is blind

thnks for the link..i shall read later abhi mujhe neend aa gayi..

i will give u another one to read..

lets see 😉

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1601567/os-till-death-does-us-apart-epi-pg-5

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mchopra

thnks for the link..i shall read later abhi mujhe neend aa gayi..
i will give u another one to read..
lets see 😉
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1601567/os-till-death-does-us-apart-epi-pg-5

i win it didn't make me cry . .. but it did make me sad

ur angel one was so damn impactful and i didn't know it was coming. . .or i did a little bit.

i think ur angel one is one of ur best work 😃