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------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ @ spvd - dear geet is not saying maan about marriage things because first she is very nave, shy and innocent girl, who doesnt talk about marriage openly. and second she thinks maan knows everything and that why he always teases her. so there is no need of her saying this specially.

@tushti.kiran - yaar u figured out very gud point that why channi dint tell maan about geet s life in danger too. in this part u ll get ur answer .

Part 27


Geet was sleeping peacefully in maan s arm. They were in balcony maan was resting his back on wall. Geet was in his lap resting her back to his chest. she was smiling in her sleep finding most comfortable place for dreaming. He was caressing her hair. He looked her calm face and his mind went to incident held few days back

Flashback

He brought channi to Khurana Mension. Channi was still in shock what happened with her. She was feeling discomfort with maan in unknown city. Maan brought her inside. She was in her worst mind state that she forgot to tell about geet s life also in danger. Maan said nakul (his head servant) to clean guest room for her. He went to dadi after made her sit in hall.

Maan ' dadi

Dadi ' maan beta " she run to her and hugged. She kissed his forehead. Aap kha chale gaye thy maan .. hum kitna ghabra gaye thy. " she was sobbing. " aap thik hai na beta..aap ko kuch hua toh nahi na..aur wo accident..woh sab.."

Maan shook her who was lost in emotions. " dadi mai bilkul thik hu. Aur aapse kitni bar toh baat ki maine phone pe.. fir aap itna kyu ghabra rahi hai. dekhiye mai aapke saamne khara hu na.. mai bilkul thik hu " and he hugged her.

Maan- dadi who mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai . "

"boliye beta "

Who dadi mujhe hp me ek larki mili. Who shayad kisi bari musibat me thi. Kuch gunde uske piche pare thy toh mai usse yaha le aaya apne saath. "

Dadi- achha kiya beta. Kaha hai wo

Maan brought her in hall. Dadi looked channi who was shivring due to nervousness and was still in shocked state . Dadi went to her . channi stood and wished her Namaste. Dadi smiled seeing her culture. She made her sit on sofa and sit beside her. " beta ..aapko ghabraane ya darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. yaha aapko koi pareshani nahi hogi. " and she caressed her hair lovingly, feeling bad for her fate. She dint ask channi about her family as she wanted to tell her own wish. channi felt little calm. Dadi made her settle in guest room gave necessary instruction to nakul. Next morning dadi sent nakul to give her breakfast. After some time nakul came back with same breakfast and told that she was not moving or waking up. Dadi went to her room and checked her forehead which was burning due to high fever. She panicked and informed maan who was doing his morning exercise. Thay called doctor. Doctor suggested them to admit her in hospital as she had some injuries also. So they admitted her in hospital. Next day channi got her sense and was feeling lil better. She was was sleeping when her mind went toward all incidents again. She remembered about geet that she was also in beast den. Anytime brij or shanker might know about her also and then can kill. She started sweating and crying badly in fear. Hospital staff called maan immediately. Maan rushed to hospital and saw her sleeping. She was in seductive effect still blabbring " geet ko koi bacha lo ..please "

Maan shocked hearing geet name that too followed with these fearful words. He had been waiting impatiently for gaining her conscious. After few hours, channi got counsious. Maan run to her and shook her asking " kya hua geet ko ..channi bolo kya hua geet ko " he was in edge of breaking down fearing and thinking what would have happened with his angel. Channi told hin everything crying, how they were trying to make fun with him, how they trapped in that building n all. Maan was shocked knowing all this. He immediately called his security head and gave him some instructions about geet s safety. Channi was looking him with gratitude eyes. Same day in evening channi been recharged and maan rushed to hp.

Flashback End

He looked her in his lap sleeping like a kid. A lonely tear came from his eyes but this time he did not want to wipe it. He kissed her head. Tight in his hug more fearing what worst could happen with his geet. He was holding her like a small kid holds his teddy fearing of losing it. She sensed his condition in sleep also and kept her hand on his heart, made him feel she will be ok if he is there. she smiled proving her act. He also smiled back agreeing and closed his eyes entering in her dream.

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Somewhere far from there, at same building in desert place

" maanav , I love you. Tum mujhe chor ke toh nahi jaaogena "

Maanav- naina, mai tumhe kaise chor sakta hu. I love you too sweetheart" he hugged her tight sipping some liquid.

Naina ' toh fir tum bar bar hp kyu jaate ho

Maanav ' business darling ' ab mai paise nahi kamaunga toh tumhe ye asho aaram akese dunga

Naina- maanav, mujhe ye sab aram nahi chahiye. Mujhe bas tumhaare sath rahna hai. tum mujhse shadi toh karoge na.

Maanav- of cource darling. Tumhe koi shak hai

"nahi " and she surrendered herself to him smiling.

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Sun rises spreading his full colorful arm, witnessing world s most beautiful sight in front of him. maaneet were sleeping in each other arms peacefully. Maan opened his eyes. he felt some ticklish on his chest. He looked down, saw his angel smiling and her soft lips touching his chest in her sleep. He smiled . kissed her cheek. She hided her face more in him. he kissed her forehead hugging her more tight. " geet.. tum meri zindgi ki sabse khubsurat aur kimti gift ho. Maine kabhi nahi socha tha mujhe tum jasi jeevan saathi milegi. Itni sundar, itni masoom, itni pure. mai tumhe apni zindgi se kabhi jaane nahi dunga.. kabhi nahi. " his face turned red in angar kisi ki himmat nahi Maan Singh Khurana ki geet ko haanth bhi lagaye.mai usse iis duniya se mita dunga. " he was getting more angry when geet opened her eyes feeling some weirdin her heart. She looked him who was lost in his thought. She frowned thinking what happed to him . she touched his one cheek " maan kya hua. Aap itne gusse me kyu ho "

Maan looked her, sensing she is worring. He smiled . " kuch nahi geet. Kuch nahi hua "

"toh aap ka chehra laal kyu hai " she innocently asked

"kyu tumhara chehra bhi to laal hota hai na kabhi kabhi" he cupped her chin saying

"who to sharam se hota hai jab aap kis'." She instently looked down, she bit her tongue what she said

Maan felt ticklish in his body hearing her innocent yet sensuous talk " geet .." he said huskily " bolona.. kya karta hu mai ..hmm"

"kuch nahi " she stood and run from there , not able to face him more.

"geettt" he run behind her. "geet tumne bataya nahi ..kya karta hu mai haan'" he was more teasing her. They were laughing and running. Maan caught her waist and twisted her in his arm. She landed on his chest. her hair fell and covered her face fully. She was panting hard. He removed hairs from her face. It was like dawn dew. Glowing with rosy shade. She was looking lavish.. He raised her face up to his level. Her trembling lips and closed eyes were inviting him He could not hold back more and kissed her.


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English Version


Geet was sleeping peacefully in maan s arm. They were in balcony; maan was resting his back on wall. Geet was in his lap resting her back to his chest. she was smiling in her sleep finding most comfortable place for dreaming. He was caressing her hair. He looked her calm face and his mind went to incident held few days back

Flashback

He brought channi to Khurana Mension. Channi was still in shock what happened with her. She was feeling discomfort with maan in unknown city. Maan brought her inside. She was in her worst mind state that she forgot to tell about geet s life also in danger. Maan said nakul (his head servant) to clean guest room for her. He went to dadi after made her sit in hall.

Maan ' dadi

Dadi ' maan beta " she run to her and hugged. She kissed his forehead. Where were you maan.. u know how worried I was " she was sobbing. " you are ok na beta.. and what was that, that accident n all.."

Maan shook her who was lost in emotions. " dani..i am perfectly fine. And have already taclek you how many time on phone. Still you are worrying, I am fine dadi" " and he hugged her.

Maan- dadi..i have to talk to you . "

"yes beta "

'Dadi I met a poor girl in hp. She was in some big problem. Some goons were behind her.so I brought her here with me.

Dadi- you did right beta..where is she

Maan brought her in hall. Dadi looked channi who was shivring due to nervousness and was still in shocked state . Dadi went to her . channi stood and wished her Namaste. Dadi smiled seeing her culture. She made her sit on sofa and sit beside her. " beta ..you don't need to worry.. here you ll be safe.. I will not ask you anything about your family.. when you ll feeling like telling me, you can ..ok. " and she caressed her hair lovingly, feeling bad for her fate. channi felt little calm. Dadi made her settle in guest room gave necessary instruction to nakul. Next morning dadi sent nakul to give her breakfast. After some time nakul came back with same breakfast and told that she was not moving or waking up. Dadi went to her room and checked her forehead which was burning due to fever. She panicked and informed maan who was doing his morning exercise. Thay called doctor. Doctor suggested them to admit her in hospital as she had some injuries also. So they admitted her in hospital. Next day channi got her sense and was feeling lil better. She was was sleeping when her mind went toward all incidents again. She remembered about geet that she was also in beast den. Anytime brij or shaker might know about her also and then kill. She started sweating and crying badly in fear. Hospital staff called maan immediately. Maan rushed to hospital and saw her panicking. She was in seductive effect still blabbring " save my geet ..please "

Maan shocked hearing geet name that too following with these fearful words. He had been waiting impatiently gaining her conscious. After few hours, channi got counsious. Maan run to her and shook her asking " what happed to geet..channi tell me what happed to her " she was in edge of breaking down fearing and thinking what would have happened with his angel. Channi told hin everything crying, how they were trying to making fun with him, how they trapped in that building n all. Maan was shocked knowing all this. He immediately called his security head and gave him some instructions about geet s safety. Channi was looking him with gratitude eyes. same day in evening channi been recharged and maan rushed to hp.

Flashback End

He looked her in his lap sleeping like a kid. A lonely tear came from his eyes but this time he did not want to wipe it. He kissed her head. Tight her in his hug more fearing what worst could happen with his pure angel. He was holding her like a small kid holds his teddy fearing of losing it. She sensed his condition in sleep also and kept her hand on his heart, made him feel she will be ok if he is there. she smiled proving her emotion. He also smiled back agreeing and closed his eyes entering in her dream.

*************************

Somewhere far from there, at same building in desert place

" maanav , I love you. you won't leave me no "

Maanav- naina, no daarling.. How can I. love you too sweetheart" he hugged her tight sipping some liquid.

Naina ' so why again n again you go hp

Maanav ' business darling ' now tell me.. if I wont work how would you get this luxuries life

Naina- maanav, I don't want money and luxuries life. I only want your love. You will marry me no

Maanav- of cource darling. Do you have doubt

"no " and she surrendered herself to him smiling.

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Sun rises spreading his full colorful arm, witnessing world s most beautiful sight in front of him. maaneet were sleeping in each other arms peacefully. Maan opened his eyes. he felt some ticklish on his chest. looked down, saw his angel smiling and her soft lips touching his chest in her sleep. He smiled . kissed her cheek. She hided her face more in him. he kissed her forehead hugging her more tight. " geet.. you are most precious and beautiful gift of my life. i never imagined I will find life partner like you. You r so beautiful, so innocent , so pure. I won't go you away from my life geet, never " his face turned red in anger.' Nobody can dare to touch my geet with his filthy hannd. I will kill him. " his red face was getting more angry when geet opened her eyes feeling some weird. She looked him who was lost in his thought. She frowned thinking what happed to him. She touched his one cheek " maan ..what happed? Why are you this much angry "

Maan looked her sensing she is worrying. He smiled. "Nothing geet.. Nothing happened "

"then why your face is red " she innocently asked

"why..your s too get red sometimes" he cupped her chin saying

"haan..Because when you kiss the'." She instantly looked down , bit her tongue what she said

Maan felt ticklish in his body hearing her innocent yet sensuous talk " geet .." he said huskily "what you were saying ..what I do..hmm"

"nothing " she stood and run from there , not able to face him more.

"geettt" he run behind her. "geet ..you dint tell what I do'" he was more teasing her. They were laughing and running. Maan caught her waist and twisted her in his arm. She landed on his chest. her hair fell and covered her face fully. She was panting hard. He removed hairs from her face. It was like morning dew. Glowing with rosy shade. She was looking lavish.. He raised her face up to his level. Her trembling lips and closed eyes were inviting him He could not hold back more and kissed her.

Precap : (same) Maan going on business trip & Geet marriage
(in further parts would be sequence for this pracap)

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeah me first.awww how sweet Maan really cares for Geet.
loved the update con soon
Edited by mel420 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update

finally maan took channi wid him

waiting fr maenets reunion
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee kitna kissy missy ho rahi h..😉...kher lovu maan channi ko delhi leke gayi pata nehi manav iska kya faida uthayega...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED IT
please don't separate Maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update .
loved the way Maan cares for Geet 😍
precap 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update dear...😛
Love Maaneet's moments...😳
Love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i want geet to marry maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update
teh coming parts are going to be thrilling with maanav
i know maan will come back at the right time
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, nice part
loved it
continue soon
open new thread dear

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