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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: URME

Yeh MAAN kaab se shudher gaya ??😳
Kiss karne ke liye permission woh bhi MAAn Singh KHURANA 😲

& warning for u agar MAANAV ne GEET ko touch bhi kiya na to mai teri suparri dene wali hoon , or MAANAV ko to MAAN dekh lega



mumyyy bachaooo ...meri supari

nahiii
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Part 26


That shadow started to come close and closer. She clutched her dupatta tight in fear. She run to door tried to open it but couldn't. She started to sweat badly. Her eyes got wet and red. She wanted to run in balcony again but that shadow had already came there. She was trapped. She moved back and shadow coming closer. She collided to door as there was no place left. In fear she closed her eyes tight clutching her dupatta on her chest and waiting for worst of her life.

"geeet " maan was shaking her tight. "geettt" again . she opened her eyes. looked here and there with alien eyes. then she saw her maan who was very sacred looking her. She couldn't understand anything what happened and hugged him tight and cried. Maan was shocked seeing her. He held her tight in his embrace, patting her head, keeping his chin on her head. Tried hard to console her. But she was not in her sense, was hell afraid. After sometime she been little calm. She looked him with confused eyes which was still shedding tears. Maan smiled and kissed those pearls. She smiled. Maan peaked on her lips. She shied and looked down.

" geet" maan called her. " kya hua geet. koi sapna dekha .. hmm

geet looked him again remembering her nightmare and hugged him. he caressed her hair lovingly. she closed her eyes feeling secure. suddenly she moved back and made angery face. " ab yaad ayi hai aapko meri. itne din se koi khabar bhi nahi di. ek phone bhi nahi kiya. pata hai mai kitna dar gayi thi. kase kase khyal aa rahe thy. per aapko kya. aapto maze se, bare aaram se jee rahe honge. ye bhi nahi socha hoga ki yaha mera kya haal hai. mai kasi houngi. pata hai mai kitna pareshaan thi. kitne bure bure khyaal aa rahe thy. per nahi aapko kya ..aap toh..." shhh.. maan kept his hand on her mouth..

maan - geet kitna bolti ho tum. saare complain abhi karna hai kya. mai kitni dur se tumse milne aaya aur tum ho ki...


" aree haa maan, aap itni raat me kyu aaye. "

" mujhe meri mishty ki yaad aa rahi thi..toh chala aaya. " he made himself comfortable in bed resting on bed head" ab tumhe koi pareshani ho to boldo, mai chala jaata hu..maine to socha tha meri mishty mujhe dekhke khush hogi, per tum to ulte mujhi ko suna rahi ho" maan said making fake dissappounted face

geet- maan baate banana to koi aapse sikhe. mujhe khate hai ki mai jyada bolti hu aur aap kya kar rahe ho. "

maan - mai kya kar raha hu. mai to bas apni mishty ko dekh raha hu jo gussa karte hue bhi kitni cute lagti hai ' saying this he pulled her cheek

" ahh maan kya kar rahe ho. mujhe dard ho raha hai " geet patted his arm

" ohh " maan kissed his one cheek. " abhi bhi dard ho raha hai" geet blushed and nodded .

maan kissed her other cheek." ab " she nodded yes again. maan kissed her nose then chin " ab bhi? " hmm " maan came close to her lips, closer. his warm breath was touching her upper lip. .her lips were shivring. he was going to touch with his, geet run showing her tongue and then thumb. " geeet" maan followed her. they were running in whole room like kids laughing, giggling making cute, angry faces. geet run to balcony. maan caught her from behind and swing her in air. they were panting hard. maan kept her down on her feet and made her turn to him. they were still breathing fast. geet was still giggling. maan looked her with desire full eyes. he cupped her face. she looked in his eyes, those black eyes was pouring limitless love only for her.

maan came closer. kept his finger on her lip. feeling those soft roses below his skin. it wad warm and delicate. he slowly traced them with his thumb. she closed her eyes not able to handle those burning sensation. he kept his lip on corner of her mouth. she clutched his shoulder in response. his lip moved little more below caught her lower lip between his teeth . her body rose , shuddered a little feeling something in her stomach. . he bended his head little to fit his lips on hers. he was only touching, stroking her lip skin. she was drowning more in his untold desire. he was teasing her. she was wishing more. when he felt she was on high of her emotions he withdrawn and moved back. she was still in same position, standing, panting, wishing for his next movement. Her face was her inner mirror. after few seconds not getting what she was waiting , she opened her eyes. looked him standing, smiling, crossing his arm. she felt embarrassed. she turned hiding her face in her palm. maan came closer from behind, clutched her waist tight pulled her closer to him. he bend and said in her ear in husky voice " kya hua geet, sharma kyu gayi. kuch chahiye kya"

geet wanted to hide somewhere . she was not able to move as well. She was totally flushed.. she covered her face more tight

maan- bolo na geet " he asked again in other ear and kissed there. she moved back with this sudden act, making herself more fit in his embrace. he kissed her below ear and on neck. her heartbeat was racing. he was making it dance on his own rhythm.

maan turned her and removed her palm from her face. her face was rosy pink in blush, totally flushed. down eyes, shivering lips. he cupped her face and smiled seeing his effect on her. it was his effect which making her more his. he came closer and kissed her. This time he wanted to become her, as she wished . he kissed her hard making her realize he was only her. there was no space for embarrassment in their relation. geet clutched his shoulder tight and he her waist with one hand. his other hand was on her neck keeping her on right place, giving her support to match with his passion. she surrounded her arms around his neck and came closer squeezing herself more to him. she was feeling being burned in his blazing passion. She was feeling melt, not able to stand on her own. he held her more tight and lifted from ground. she was not touching floor anymore. She was in his arm flying above her dream. Both became two body one soul.


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ENGLISH VERSION


That shadow started to come close and closer. She clutched her dupatta tight in fear. She run to door tried to open it but couldn't. She started to sweat badly. Her eyes got wet and red. She wanted to run in balcony again but that shadow had already came there. She was trapped. She moved back and shadow coming closer. She collided to door as there was no place left. In fear she closed her eyes tight clutching her dupatta on her chest and waiting for worst of her life.

"geeet " maan was shaking her tight. "geettt" again . she opened her eyes. looked here and there with alien eyes. then she saw her maan who was very sacred looking her. She couldn't understand anything what happened and hugged him tight and cried. Maan was shocked seeing her. He held her tight in his embrace, patting her head, keeping his chin on her head. Tried hard to console her. But she was not in her sense, was hell afraid. After sometime she been little calm. She looked him with confused eyes which was still shedding tears. Maan smiled and kissed those pearls. She smiled. Maan peaked on her lips. She shied and looked down.

" geet" maan called her. " what happened geet, did u see any nightmare .. hmm

geet looked him again remembering her nightmare and hugged him. he caressed her hair lovingly. she closed her eyes feeling secure. suddenly she moved back and made angry face. "now you got time to remember me. Not any news, no any phone call. You know how much worried I was. How bad was coming in my mind .but why you will think. You were living very relax and enjoying your life there. Not once you thought how I am here , without you.but no.. why you will think about me .. who I am of yours...you are.." shhh.. maan kept his hand on her mouth..

maan ' geet..how much you speak dear. Have to empty your whole complain box right here.i came here to meet you.. at this time and here , you are making complains...

" ohh maan.. why u came , at this late night. "

" I was missing my mishty.so came " he made himself comfortable in bed resting on bed head" now if you having any problem then tell me..you know what I thought, I thought my mishty will be happy seeing me but no.. u r shouting , complaining me " maan said making fake disappointing face

geet- maan you said me no that I talk too much . now what you doing. "

maan ' what .. I am only looking my mishty that how cute she looks when gets angry ' saying this he pulled her cheek

" ahh maan what s doing . its hurting " geet patted his arm

" ohh " maan kissed his one cheek. " now is it paining ?" geet blushed and nodded .

maan kissed her other cheek." ab " she nodded yes again. maan kissed her nose then chin " still? " hmm " maan came close to her lips, closer. his warm breath was touching her upper lip. .her lips were shivering. he was going to touch with his, geet run showing her tongue and then thumb. " geeet" maan followed her. they were running in whole room like kids laughing, giggling making cute, angry faces. geet run to balcony. maan caught her from behind and swing her in air. they were panting hard. maan kept her down on her feet and made her turn to him. they were still breathing fast. geet was still giggling. maan looked her with desire full eyes. he cupped her face. she looked in his eyes, those black eyes was pouring limitless love only for her.

maan came closer. kept his finger on her lip. feeling those soft roses below his skin. it wad warm and delicate. he slowly traced them with his thumb. she closed her eyes not able to handle those burning sensation. he kept his lip on corner of her mouth. she clutched his shoulder in response. his lip moved little more below caught her lower lip between his teeth . her body rose , shuddered a little feeling something in her stomach. . he bended his head little to fit his lips on hers. he was only touching, stroking her lip skin. she was drowning more in his untold desire. he was teasing her. she was wishing more. when he felt she was on high of her emotions he withdrawn and moved back. she was still in same position, standing, panting, wishing for his next movement. Her face was her inner mirror. after few seconds not getting what she was waiting , she opened her eyes. looked him standing, smiling, crossing his arm. she felt embarrassed. she turned hiding her face in her palm. maan came closer from behind, clutched her waist tight pulled her closer to him. he bend and said in her ear in husky voice " what happened geet.. you want something"

geet wanted to hide somewhere . she was not able to move as well. She was totally flushed.. she covered her face more tight

maan- tell me geet " he asked again in other ear and kissed there. she moved back with this sudden act, making herself more fit in his embrace. he kissed her below ear and on neck. her heartbeat was racing. he was making it dance on his own rhythm.

maan turned her and removed her palm from her face. her face was rosy pink in blush, totally flushed. down eyes, shivering lips. he cupped her face and smiled seeing his effect on her. it was his effect which making her more his. he came closer and kissed her. This time he wanted to become her, as she wished . he kissed her hard making her realize he was only her. there was no space for embarrassment in their relation. geet clutched his shoulder tight and he her waist with one hand. his other hand was on her neck keeping her on right place, giving her support to match with his passion. she surrounded her arms around his neck and came closer squeezing herself more to him. she was feeling being burned in his blazing passion. She was feeling melt, not able to stand on her own. he held her more tight and lifted from ground. she was not touching floor anymore. She was in his arm flying, living above her dream. Both became two body one soul.


Precap : Geet Marriage & Maan going on business trip

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heyy please dont give me gaaliyaan for this precap

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
totally mindblowing update

part 25

superb and this yr just cute maaneet moments loved it
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
i liked the way u write geet s feelings

and ya the precap is so scary yaar
dont let geet marry to th jerk
plz

continue soon

and happy friendship day
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Posted: 12 years ago
marriage kis se better be maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy friendship day dear.
loved maaneet moments 😍
precap 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
chappal toh khani padegi agar geet ki haadi manav se hue toh...khair nehi dear...sambhal jao...ai na...he he he...

excellent update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update..
now ur precap is making me bit scared..
will geet get married to someone else
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya re lovu etna jada romantic scene ka dose de rahi h😉...btw mein toh khush hu😉...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh teri so it was maan thank god for that
kya yaar yeh maan jab dekho geet ko darate kyun rehete hain
chalo at least one whole update on the romance of our maneet
nooo geet's marriage without maan
not good not good at all
pls tell me he will be able to stop the wedding somehow
oh i dont have a good feeling about this pls tell me it will be all okay soon
cheers for pm

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