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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyArwen

i'm just scared for Geet and her sister Rajji... just wish that they be safe and sound at all times... i wish Maan had a younger brother and a very lovely and doting elder sister who has a very helping and doting family of her own... and the sister knows her brothers inside-out...



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awesome, beautiful part
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awesome, beautiful part
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hiii dearies.. here is new surprise for u, specially for non-Hindi readers friends who was having problem in understanding Hindi words. so from now i ll make two versions of this FF. one is mixed as i hv been giving and another one is in complete English (i hv given both versions separately. first Hindi and then below this u can find in English ). m soory my English is not very good but i still tried to make it readable. hope now you all will enjoy. Thank You 😊

(slowly i ll make all previous parts too in English)

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Part 12


Maan was in geet room, on her bed, still awake. He was feeling her angel in everywhere of room. It was magical. Her books, her toys, her every belonging had her smell. He looked at her photo which was hanging on front wall.

He looked her face. "You are so beautiful geet, so innocent. Mann karta hai tumhe duniya ke nazaro se bacha ke aapni baaho me rakhlu. Kisi ko bhi tumhe chune na du geet"


He looked her eyes. It was big, light shaded yet deep. " kya chupa ke rakhti ho geet apni aankho me. Mai jitna inhe jaane ki koshish karta hu ye utni hi gahri hoti jati hai."


Then he looked her lips " geet tumhare ye nazuk hoth mai mahsoos karna chahta hu, inhe choona chahta hu, isnhe apna banana chahta hu. "


he closed his eyes. Imagined her in his arm, sleeping beside him. He looked her below him. Her glowing face, twinkling eyes, trembling lips everything was just perfect, anyone could imagine. He kissed her forehead and then lips lovingly.

" my princess.. only mine" he whispered and slept.


Geet woke up in morning, smiling, thinking her previous night meet with maan, her stranger. She was happy when rano entered in room and sat on floor" geet beta".

Haa maa" geet kept her head on her mother lap. Rano lovingly caressed her hair. " aaj tu badi khush lag rahi hai, kya baat hai ?? " rano asked smiling.


" nahi maa, bas ase hi. Geet replied closing her eyes, feeling relaxed.

" geet, ek baat puchu. Sach sach batayegi.

"hmm

'wo tujhe pasand to hai na geet" rano asked

Kon maa"


Wahi, tera hone wala pati" rano asked.

Geet flicked open her eyes and sat up hurriedly. She had totally forgotten about her fianc, that her marriage is already fixed. Her eyes got moisture. "hey baabji ..ye mai kya kar rhi thi. Mujhse kitni badi galti ho gayi babaji. Ab mai kya karungi" she thought. She was in total shock.

"geet..kya hua beta. " rano got confused her sudden act. But she brushed it thinking may be her daughter needs more time. She again took her on her lap . " geet, mai janti h uteri shaadi bahut jaldi me thik hui. Tuje mauka bhi nahi mila kuch sochne ka, samjhne ka. Mai janti hu kaisa lagta hai jab apni puri zeendgi jiske sath beetani ho , use jaanti bhi nahi. per beta , per baad me deere dheere sab thik ho jata hai. Aur phir ye to bahut achha ladka hai geet. mujhe pura yakin hai , wo tujhe hamesha, bahut khush rakhega. Wo bahut accha hai geet. Bahut pyara. Tere raajkumar jesa."

Rano was in her talk as dint know geet was not hearing anything. She was still in her trauma thinking what she was going to do. It was true she strated feeling for her stranger. She was dreaming him. But now she knew it was only a dream, which couldn't be real. She was not even remembering her babaji this time as she knew it was all her mistake. Her baabji had chosen a boy for her but she refused him and started making her own world, her dreamworld. Where she wanted to live with her prince, her stranger, her maan. Yes her maan. She accepted it. She closed her eyes in pain and guilt. Her eyes were pouring its treasure.

Rano trance broke when she felt something wet on her lap. She saw and got shocked. Her daughter, her geet was crying, bitterly crying closing her eyes. " geet kya hua ..

"geet bolna kya hua beta. Tu ro kyu rahi hai. Please bol na beta" she pleaded.

"maa, I am sorry maa, m sorry.. mujhe maaf kardo maa. " geet was in total distress as she was feeling extreamly guilt. " mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi maa." Sobbing, crying she asked for forgiveness.

" geet, hua kya beta, boltoh.. dekh mera jee bahut ghabra raha hai'. Please bolna beta, tu kyu ro rahi hai.. kya Maanji tujhe pasand nahi.

Geet was shocked " Maan ???

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ENGLISH VERSION

Maan was in geet room, on her bed, still awake. He was feeling her angel in everywhere of room. It was magical. Her books, her toys, her every belonging had her smell. He looked at her photo which was hanging on front wall.

He looked her face. "you are so beautiful geet, so innocent. I want you to keep away from whole world in my embrace. Don't let anyone touch you geet.


He looked her eyes. It was big, light shaded yet deep. "What you hide in your eyes geet. How much I try to know it , it became more deep and mysterious '

Then he looked her lips "geet, your soft lips, I want to feel it, touch it geet. I want to make it only mine'


he closed his eyes. Imagined her in his arm, sleeping beside him. He looked her below him. Her glowing face, twinkling eyes, trembling lips everything was just perfect, anyone could imagine. He kissed her forehead and lips lovingly.

" my princess.. only mine" he whispered and slept.


Geet woke up in morning, smiling, thinking her previous night meet with maan, her stranger. She was happy when rano entered in room and sat on floor" geet beta".

Yes maa" geet kept her head on her mother lap. Rano lovingly caressed her hair. "geet, you looking very happy today, what happened?? " rano asked smiling.

no maa, nothing like that' Geet replied closing her eyes, feeling relaxed.

geet, can I ask one thing. Promise you wont lie?

"hmm

'you like him na , geet " rano asked

Who maa"


your would be husband geet" rano asked.

Geet flicked open her eyes and sat up hurriedly. She had totally forgotten about her fianc, that her marriage is already fixed. Her eyes got moisture. "hey baabji ..what I was going to do. Its sin sin babaji. Now what I will do " she thought. She was in total shock.

"geet..what happened " rano got confused her sudden act. But she brushed it thinking may be her daughter needs more time. She again took her on her lap . "Geet I know your marriage is fixed in no time. You didn't get any time to even think about it.i know beta how it feels when you have to spend your whole life with someone you don't even know. But slowly everything be fine and you adjust in your new life beta. And this boy is very nice geet. I trust him, you will always be happy with him. he is very nice, same as your prince charming."

Rano was in her talk as dint know geet was not hearing anything. She was still in her trauma thinking what she was going to do. It was true she strated feeling for her stanger. She was dreaming him. But now she knew it was only a dream, which couldn't be real. She was not even remembering her babaji this time as she knew it was all her mistake. Her baabji had chosen a boy for her but she refused him and started making her own world, her dreamworld. Where she wanted to live with her prince, her stranger, her maan. Yes her maan. She accepted it. She closed her eyes in pain and guilt. Her eyes were pouring its treasure.

Rano trance broke when she felt something wet on her lap. She saw and got shocked. Her daughter, her geet was crying, bitterly crying closing her eyes. " geet what happened ..

" geet please tell what happened beta. Why you crying, please beta tell me" she pleaded.

"maa, I am sorry maa, m sorry.. please forgive me maa. " geet was in total distress as she was feeling extremely guilt. " I did big mistake maa, biggest sin." Sobbing, crying she asked for forgiveness.

" Geet, beta wats the problem.. m worried for u dear.. please dont make me more scared, please tell me why are you crying beta. Don't you like maanji'.

Geet was shocked " Maan ???



Precap : " hey babaji ye kya haal bana diya hai mere kamre kaa." 😲😡


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Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12
lovely...
Maan has fallen for Geet?
so her confusion is over...
the precap looks too good...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely and awsome part...
Maan is very naughty
seeking for next part:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
woderful update😊...per lovu tu isbar bhi dream mein di😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
and thank you for the english version
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raingurti

woderful update😊...per lovu tu isbar bhi dream mein di😡




tu nahi sudhregi ...


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