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hey buddies, i am coming up with my next Os, hope you will like it, keeping my finger crossed..😃


~Dil Se~

Sometime life is so uncertain, every human being wanted life to be easy and happy, to get what they desire and live a life of dream. But does it happen, we all know that life is neither bed of roses where a prince charming come to take away his lady love, nor it is like we will get what we dream of. People say that couple are made in heaven, and become one in lap of mother earth, but does it really happen??. No it doesn't. I am not at all discouraging you, and not saying it doesn't happen. But does it happen in every case? Does every person get his/her soulmate. People say that if we keep our hand on her heart than it will speak only truth, but we didn't do it with the fear of result, but somewhere deep inside we already knew the truth. We heard thousand of word said by lover like "I can do anything for you" , " I will die if I don't get you" , " I will love you like anything", "your happiness is my dream". But did they really meant it, did they really meant what they say and do. Today , I am standing in front of you all to share my story, I know thousand of you read thousand of story, but may be you find my story different.

It is simple story of a girl geet handa, like every girl she was born in middle class family, where her father go in morning and come back in night after long shift, where her mother was a house wife, does all the work and wait at the night for her husband to come back. But as you all know life is not a bed of roses, her father died with an heart attack, and she was broken, her mother was too broken but kept a brave face, after that incident her life changed, her mother took the responsibility of house, and she was left all alone in the house, but if god give pain, he also give a saviour. When she got new neighbor, new friend, maan. Slowly and slowly they became inseparable. Their friendship was different and special. After completing their college, their family thought, it would be best to tie knot. Both said yes, but suddenly the maan's family back out. Geet was broken as she know she is madly, crazily, selflessly in love with maan. A guy was selected for geet, they thought he is the best for her, but is that true? She was married, while maan was watching her go from his window, an year passed, geet was pregnant and soon a baby girl came in this world. One day geet got a news that maan was admitted in hospital. She ran like a mad to the hospital. She entered the hospital room, she saw his family crying, she was told maan was suffering from cancer. They left them alone, geet was carrying the baby girl. geet was continuously crying. Maan said " geet, ya tumhari baby hain?" I nodded. He signaled to take baby in his hand . he took the baby and kissed her forehead. She Is angle, he said. He played with her and angle was smiling. Geet said "maan tumne ye kyun kiya?". Maan said "geet mein janta huin tum kya kaha rahi huin, geet agar mein tumse shadi karta, tho tumhe kabhi kushi nah de pata, aur chaan se nah maar pata, but now I can die peacefully, I always wished that you remain happy, now I am leaving you in safe hand, but geet before going I want to say, I love you geet, I love you like anything, DIL SE dua hain geet ki tumhe haar khushi mila". Tears were flowing from her eyes. He gave the baby back, maan handed it to his mother. Maan said " geet like in childhood you used to sing for me to make me sleep, will you do it today, before I go to my final sleep". Tear was flowing like waterfall, no end.

Geet nodded. She kept his head in her lap and started to sing " la la la la, hm hm hm, hmmm,hmm lala lalla". She continued to sing, while maan had a peace and calm.she smiled and felt maan not responding. She know he left. She was blank. And went out. She carried the baby. And said " maan tumhe kya laga ki tum enti baari baat mujhse chupa sakta ho, main jaanti thi tumhe cancer tha, aur ye bhi ki tum humse bahut pyaar karte ho, aur esi liya tumne shadi se mana bhi kya, sirf tumheri khushi ke liya meina shadi ki, tumhari wish complete karne ke liya, meina sunn liya tha ki agar meina shadhi nahi kit ho tum apni medicines nahi laga, mera liya tho tumse badh kar kuch nahi, meina shadhi tho kar liya, par mera maan tho aphi ke saath tha, mera aur rahul ke rishta mein bahut darrar thi, family ne socha ki bacha hona ke baad sab thiek ho gaye ga, par nahi huin, sab badal gaya, usne apni bachi ko apna ne se hi mana kar diya. Mein tut gayi, par meina sabse kaha ki koi maan ko ye baat nahi bataya ga. Usne hume chor diya. Tumne mera khushi ke liya, uss insaan se shadhi karvai, par tum ye bhul gayi ki tum he meri kushi ho, god knew that we were made for each other, but lagta hain eis duiniya ko ya pasand nahi aya, par maan geet tho humsha se apki kit hi, ye bachi humari hain, humari maaneet, humara pyaar, tum humesha mera khushi ke liya sab karte rahe , aur mein, mein tumhari wish mein apni khushi search karti rahi, yahi humara pyaar hain,maan geet ke pyaar, ye bachi yahi jaane gi ki tum eska dad ho, maan. Voh insaan tho eska face bhi nahi dekhna chahata".

I said " I just wanted to say that I love you maan , your geet love you, she is yours, only ours, I don't know apko yr story achi lagi ya nahi, but ya geet ke kahani hain, maan ki geet ki kahani hain.yes I am geet, geet handa, DIL SE YE GEET MAAN KI HAIN, AUR MAAN KI HE RAHE GI". And she heard clap from audience , all were crying

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I know buddies it is emotional, but what to do, I promise you I will give one more Os, which will be happy one.

Hope you like it, it is very close to my heart, do comment

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Waiting for your replies..😕

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the touching story...
was that baby maaneet's..?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its simply awesome. touching one
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loved it . Every story cant b ended happily .
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wow beautiful os relii emotional buh luvd it x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesme os isha n well written!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was so touching and emotional dear...
now give one happy OS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its so touchy... awesome OS.. Thanx for sending me pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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emotional os dear:)

wonderful:)😊
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very very sensitive n full of emotions .Ur works r amazing dear...I hop to get such works in future too.

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