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PART-27

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Hiii friends'shocked hai na??wo kya hai na..Iam bored studying since morning so thoughT to update this😆

Well iam not at all happy with the response I got..😭seems it became boring one..anyways I'll wrap up this ff in 2 parts..



Maan who was so lost in his grief forgot totally the fact that he was trying hard to control himself in front of everyone'"geet I..I.."he was about to say his heart out but as if God n destiny wantned to play with him,he was intruded by his dad who just came there.."maan you here??When did u come back???"He came n hugged maan tight..



Geet's face fell n she got irritated with this not with dad but with the destiny's game..She found something in his eyes today and hoped to listen which she wished but to her dismay dad came there..



Even maan realiseD what he was doing..He mentally slapped himself for loosing himself.."what were u doing maan???What would had happened If u spit out that you love her..oh my god"he thought hugging his dad back..He quickly wiped his tears n straightened himself..



It's been almost 6 days After karan's accident..He started recovering slowly..He just have problem in walking as his leg is injured..Maan used to meet him everyday in hospital n so as geet..Maan became totally silent n maited distance from his friends which is so unusual..


Geet even when noticed this kept quite as she herself in dilemma n her inner turmoil is not letting her to speak to Maan as she was scared of facing him..As the engagement day is approaching her pain only increased killing her more..The thought that she will be someone else's is scaring her but she was left with no other option.


Maan's dad noticed behaviour of maan n even geet..He thought they fought again but nothing was like that..He knew maaneet very well n he is well aware that maaneet cannot stay away from each other..But now they almost stoped talking or say they became so formal with each other as if they are strangers..he decided to talk to him..



It was the day before geet's engagement..All the friends had get together as they left the college after exams..Maaneet though attended the party remained same..Aadi,romeo,harika n karan noticed their unusual behaviour which confused them'Even when they were asked the reason they just gave faint smile n tried to behave normal.



In the evening Maaneet,karan n harika along with aadi n romeo went to disc..Maan who was the first one to drag everyone parties is all silent there sitting alone at a corner when they were dancing..Geet was lost in her own grief so as maan..




"hey babaji ye kya ho raha hai mere saath..Why this is happening with me..Why You made me realise that I love Maan??kite kush the hum..ab aisa lagtha hai ki sab khatam hogaya..Kal ke baad maan se hamesha ke liye door hojaungi.."She finally let her tears to slip down as it became unbearable for her..



"geet!!!"She quickly wiped her tears n smiled at harika n karan who came back to their table..Karan glanced at maan Who stood at bar area with out having anything all lost in his thoughts.."yar geet kya hogaya hai maan ko??since the day he returned from london he became silent..Kisi se kuch baat nahi kartha..bas ha ya na mein jawaab detha hai..If I ask him he says nothing!!Do u know anything??"karan asked..



Geet nodded in no n looked at maan who seemed to be lost in his own thoughts..Karan went n dragged maan with him..He made him sit with them..




Karan:maan what happened to you???why you are behaving so weird these days??Kuch huwa hai kya??



Maan plastered a smile on his face nodding in no.."nothing yar..muje kya hona hai??"



Geet:jhoot mat bolo maan..mein bhi dekh rahi hu tumhe'You always seems to be lost in youself..Iam noticing that you are staying away from us..Seems u forgot ur friends(says sarcastically)



Maan didn't say anything looking down.."nothing like that geet!!I was just trying to make a habit to stay alone"


"alone???"three of them asked in unison..

Maan:kal geet ki engagement hogayegi aur wo apni fiance se busy hojayegi..aur tu 2 din ke baad harika ke saath uski village ja rahe ho..tab tum dono ki bhi shaadi hojayegi..you both will be busy!!tab toh mein akela pad jaunga na..Isliye abhi se practise kar raha hu..He said..




There was so much pain in his voice n three of them stared at maan sadly almost on verge to cry'Maan noticed this.."arey yar mein toh mazak kar raha tha..I was just teasing you guys'"he tried to enlighten them but he himself failed to control his tears while harika n karan were already in tears..He stormed out from there as he wanted to hide his pain as always..



"karan..muje maan ke liye bahut bura lag raha hai..He might be thinking that everything gonna changed now..We should talk to him..we should make him understand him that our friendship wont change whatever may happen..we were best friends and reamin the same forever haina??"harika said..Karan nodded..




"mein ghar chalti hu"geet said and left from there before karan could say anything..


Karan was about to move out from there when maan's mobile which he forgot there rang.."arey ye toh maan ka mobile hai..seems he forgot it here.."ye meera koun hai?"he mumbled as meera's name flashed on the screen..



"hello Maan sir how are u??seems you forgot your friend..no call no message not fair ha"meera said with out a break as soon as karan received the call..



"hello miss this is karan,maan's friend..maan forgot his mobile "


Meera:oh sorry..btw I know you'Maan always used to speak about you n geet..how are you n geet??


Karan(smiled):hai meera iam fine..geet wo toh busy hai kal engagement hai na..



Maan(shocked):what engagement?and maan sir didn't even invite me..



Karan:I guess he forgot..

Meera:ok then bye karan..nice to hear you..



Karan(smiled):bye..



Maan came back to take his mobile n found karan and harika outside the disc..He didn't found geet there.."karan geet kaha hai?"



Karan:yar pata nahi use kya hogaya hai she left soon after you left the place..She left alone without even listening to me..


Maan(angrily):why you let her go alone??It's raining already(he looked at sky as it started raining..)I'll check whether she reached safely or not..He instantly took his car and headed towards geet's home..


He reached there and found geet sitting in the swing outside her home ..She was shivering badly but sat in the rain not even budging from there..



Maan ran to her angrily as she was totally wet n is shivering badly.."geet are u mad??yaha kya kar rahi ho?andar chalo otherwise you will catch cold"Maan ordered her but she didn't budge..




Geet..mein tumse baat kar raha hu..maan shook her by shoulder bringing her back to reality..She lit up her head to find maan'"chalo andar chalo abhi"Maan again ordered her but his every word went in to her deaf ears as she didn't listen anything..



She just stood on her feet and hugged him tight n started crying..

Maan(shocked):geet what happened???why you are crying??kisi ne kuch kaha hai kya??




But she continued crying like a kid hugging him more tight.."geet please kuch bolo..dont cry please"he pleaded..He tried to free her from the hug to talk to her but she clinged more in to him.."Kyun ho raha hai ye sab??why we have changed like this??why we are behaving like strangers??why cant we share every small thing like before??enough maan!!enough!Iam tired..Tired of fighting with myself,Iam tired of fighting with my heart..I cant imagine myself to be someone else's when I LOVE YOU!!!"



That's it!!It came like a shock to Maan!!what he was thinking and what's the reality??It took a minute for him to realise what he heard.."geet..wha'what did you say???"he asked with trembling voice as he still couldn't believe what he just heard!! "I LOVE YOU!!suna tumne I LOVE YOU"geet almost shouted holding his collar'She started sobbing hiding her face in his chest'


Precap:

Will god give maan a chance to confess his love or he fail to confess his love again???😕

Btw last part

-mona





Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part...
kitna bura hota hai na jab apne starnger ban jate hai...
bt finally geet ne bol he diya...
maan ab toh bol de...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update👏
Maaneet emotions are beautifully described⭐️👏..Heart touching moment👏
So emotionally geet confessed her love to maan😭😭
Waiting for maan confession
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally geet confessed waiting for maan to confess also



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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope maan bhi apne dil ke bath bata de
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan itna pagal toh nehi hai k iss maua ko kho de...agar aisa kiya toh uske jaise bewukulf koi nehi hoga...chhullu bhar pani mein doob marna chahiye...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was unexpected...
i thot maan will be the first one to confess..
when he said that he is making the habit of staying alone i felt so much pain.. those words were so touching..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
finally geet confessed her love
ab maan tum zyada time mat lagana
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wow geet told ILU
superb
loved it

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