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Posted: 13 years ago


PART 4:


BESHARMI KI HADH NO.1


STATUS: PAAR😳


Geet entered maan's room. It was a breathtaking view . It had king size bed with grey color satin bedsheets, a separate parlour for entertaining or private meetings, the collection of artworks by masters showed that he is fond of art. A mini bar was attached to the room and she understood that he drinks!!!


Geet: babji yeh peethe bhi hai? Koi baat nahi hai geet kaun nahi peetha aaj kal she looked at the level of liquid in the bottle it was half filled and understood that it was maan who might have drunk it


Geet maan ka jhoota!!! Main bhi thoda peelon toh? Toh kya hoga? And she got drunk, she compeleted the remaining drink in the bottle. She cud hardly stand on her legs now bt her sight fell on the huge portrait of maan in the mini bar. She rubbed her eyes to get a clear view. She blushed looking at his portrait. As she was drunk she started to hallucinate him around her. She climbed onto the slab of the bar and started singing


Aa...

Kyun dooriyan a aa hai darmiyaan

Badh jaane de e ae nazdeeqiyan

Har saans mein e ae mehsoos karun

Inn saanson ki madhoshiyan



she bent down and started crawling on her knees on the slab of the minibar sensually wen maan entered his room. As he was drunk too he watched her mesmirised he was also not in his senses. He was drinking her beauty. She was a perfect beauty in every aspect clad in a half saree, her hair was open no ornaments at all except the glass bangles, his sight fell on her hands and legs adorned with mehendi


Mera nasha aise chadhe

Mera nasha zidd pe ade

Mera nasha aise naa jaaye

Jhoom jhoom jhoomta jaa


geet looked up to find maan at the door leaning onto the wall who was watching her intently. As she was feeling him around her in her tipsy state cudnt make out that he was actually present there. She elegantly got down the slab and moved towards him


Mera nasha tujhko huaa

Mera nasha hai khwab saa

Mera nasha aise naa jaaye

Jhoom jhoom jhoom jhoomta tu jaa


she tripped on the carpet as her heel got stuck onto it bt before she cud fall on the ground maan held her through waist giving goosebumps to her. He made her stand, bt she wanted to feel his touch again on her body. She held his collar and dragged him towards her and started to sing


Jis aag mein ye badan jal raha hai mera

Aye hum-safar

Tu bhi usee mein jal jaayega.. Jayega

Parwaane kyun shamaa pe machalte hain

Mujhko aaj iss ka pata bhi chal Jayega

Main hi shehad, main hi zehar

Mujhme teri shaam--sheher

Meri inn panaaho mein

Jhoom jhoom jhoomta ja


she kissed him on his forehead and then his nose she stopped at his lips teasing him finally pushing him onto the bed she towered him almost leaning on him. She opened few of his shirt buttons ran her hand on his naked torso feeling his presence


Main bhi hoon tanha

Tu bhi akela hai

Mauqa bhi haseen

Milne ka hone de silsila

Silsila bin kuch kahe, kuch sune, kuch kiye

Kab main tujh pe mar gayi

Mujhko pata bhi naa ye chala

Lo mar gaye hum bekasoor

Woh jee gaye jinka kasoor

Aankhon se meri jaan le par

Jhoom jhoom jhoomta ja



she got up and stood on the bed, her half saree pallo slipped from her shoulder maan turned to look at her. His gaze travelled from her face to neck and then her curves god he was loosing himself and then his sight caught her navel. She jumped on the bed falling on him again, this time he cudnt balance and both of them fell rolling onto the bed reached the floor


Mera nasha aise chadhe

Mera nasha zidd pe ade

Mera nasha aise naa jaaye

Jhoom jhoom jhoomta tu ja



maan lifted her in his arms carried her to bed laying her on it he too joined hugging her close almost crushing her back onto his chest. After a whole 7months he had a peaceful sleep. He felt an unknown satisfaction being in her arms as if his world got centered in this serene beauty


haila subah ko kya hoga??


yes that was a short one indeed i told u already that ill only give short updates here and will not give precaps too


PREVIOUS PART:

PART 3

NEXT PART:

PART 5



Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay me first...
Awesome update...
Talli Maan aur Geet...
Yeh kya ho raha hai?? 😉
continue soon
Edited by mansi.tripathi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... nice update
Geet also drunk like Maan.. & both slept peacefully ... gr8
waiting for next update.. plz do it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
ye to pura besharmi ki had hogayi...lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
hawww superb update.
love it.
plz make it a ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was very nice... but too short... 😕

me eagerly waiting for more updates

SS or FF - its up to you... decide as per what suits story the most!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for not commentung earlier
awsome update
geet wid maan dadi
interesting
one req let it be ss only
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part a lot...
omg!joota khane se pyar badthi hain...
and geet practically did that..woh bhi drinks ke saath.. 😆
yaar..she s a unique piece...
Talli geet and talli maan was a gr8 combination...
Nw their meeting was also a unique one...
harika..which guess was not fully correct..
meine bahut kuch kaha na.. 😆

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