MG FF: Journey of hate to love pt 19 pg 139 02/11 - Page 66

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Posted: 12 years ago
maans surprise is nice..
hmmm..
2nd option will be ok for her..lol..
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part

so sweet of maan

i think she will call him maan

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
loved it
beautiful amazing,
lovely and romantic date
loved it
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awesome update yar,eagerly waiting for next part
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want both...call him MAAN n kiss him as well...bt i think if maan will kiss her insanely she will automatically call him maan
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awesome part
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awesome part

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Part 18:


@sdlife19: Sorry for making you wait dear. Thanku so much... 😃 happy that you are liking the story so far.


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"I will leave you only on one condition. Call me maan".

Geet looked at him with wide eyes and nodded in a no. ok then I wont leave you told maan. We will be like this forever and I don't have any problem. Geet looked at maan with sad face. you have other option too geet told maan. Geet looked at him curiously. "Kiss me then I will leave you".

"Maanji, please we are getting late. Muskaan will be waiting for us told geet and wriggled to get out of his grip. But maan smirked "geet, don't worry about muskaan. I told her we will be late and we 3 will have dinner" told maan. "Babaji now what should I do" thought geet and looked up. Oops maan don't know this habit of geet. He looked at geet confused and asked "Geet why you are looking up?"

"I am talking with my babaji, you wont listen to me na" told geet and made a baby face. Awww, maan want to eat her then and there seeing her cute antics. How much he want to see her happy and he is successful in his steps. "Maanji" called geet. Maan closed his eyes acting like not listening to her. "Suniye.." tried geet again. "Ji boliye, geetji" asked maan innocently.

"Chi, maanji my name is Geet not geetji" told geet and made a face. "Exactly, my name is Maan singh Khurana not Maanji" told maan making a face. Oops geet is getting angry now. She made a angry face and looked at maan. But here maan babu is enjoying geet's plight. "Geet yaar, fast. Either call me maan or kiss me. I don't have any problem if you do both" told maan and grinned. Geet nodded in a no. "Ok your wish" told maan and relaxed but watching geet from corner of his eyes.

"M' " "No no geet, he is your husband na you should not call him like that, kiss karu chi chi babaji" thought geet. Finally she decided to call him by his name. "Ma.. M..." tried geet. "What happened geet?" asked maan innocently. "Nothing what will happen to me when you are here" told geet irritatingly. But maan is so happy listening to her. Unknowingly she told she trust him. Maan came on top of geet suddenly, pinned her to the bed. Geet looked at him nervously. "Geet, thanku very much. Indirectly you told me that you trust me. and I promise you will be happy in your life. I wont force you in any matter. Treat me as your friend and you can tell me what ever you want to. Call me in which ever way you want" told maan and kissed her forehead. Maan got up and smiled at her. Geet too got up, she is overwhelmed with maan's love on her. She is feeling blessed.

"You change and come geet, I will be waiting in the hall" told maan. When he was about to leave the room geet hugged him from back. Tears are coming out of her eyes wetting his shirt. Maan is first shocked with her sudden hug and now she is crying. The first thought came in his mind is that did he hurt her in any way?

He turned back and cupped geet's face. "Geet, jaan I am sorry if I hurted you. Please jaan don't cry. Dekho, I wont force you to do anything again" apologized maan. Geet nodded in a no. "I am very happy to have you in my life. I don't know and never thought you love me so much, if I would have known I would never left you" told geet in between her sobs. Maan hugged her saying soothing words.

"Shh jaan, nothing happened now. See we are together again and I will never leave you" told maan. Geet came out of the hug, she looked at him lovingly. She tip toed and kissed his cheek and called "MAAN". Oyy teri double dhamaka to maan. He smiled widely at geet, where as she shied and hid her face in his chest. Maan is over the moon, then he heard her saying something. "You asked me something for the first time and how can I not do that" told geet still hiding in his chest.

"Thanku jaan, you don't know how happy I am today" told maan and kissed her cheek. Geet smiled but not looking at him. Maan went out and geet changed her saree. Both of them went to their house and saw muskaan is playing with anjali (maan's sister). When she saw them smiling, she felt guilty for hating geet before. She supported sam always and hated geet for her attitude, but she don't know her sufferings. But when she came to know about her she fel so bad and is now guilty for misunderstanding her. But till now she don't know the reason why geet left her.

Geet and maan entered into the house, anjali got up and wished them.

"Hii Bro, Hii bhabhi". They both smiled at her and maan took muskaan in his arms. Anjali went to geet and hugged her. "I am so sorry bhabhi, I am so sorry for hurting you. I thought you don't love us, but I was wrong. I never tried to talk to you bhabhi, please forgive me" cried anjali. Maan smiled at them knowing now everything will be fine between them.

"No anjali, please don't think like that. I was so scared and lost in my past that I was not able to understand anyone. Its my mistake too, I am also sorry anjali" told geet and came out of hug. Anjali smiled through tears whereas geet wiped them. "From today onwards we are friends bhabhi" told anjali and they both shook their hands. Maan smiled at them heartily. Anjali came to maan and apologized to him also.

"I am sorry bro". maan nodded in a no and told "don't anjali, now everything is fine and there is no place for our past. We will forget everything and start a fresh again." Anjali nodded and hugged maan. In the evening, everyone is at home. Yash and Meer too came back from office. They all are talking in the hall.

"Yash and Meer, we are thinking to leave tomorrow evening" told maan. Meer's face fell, she don't want them to go early. "Veerji you just came a week before" told meer. She don't want geet to go anywhere, they just met few days before and again she is going away from her. Geet too is sad hearing to maan, but she too want a start everything a fresh.

Maan saw both the sisters. "When I am taking geet away from you meer, WE all are going to India. And I don't want you to be alone here meer. We all will be there in Delhi and you don't feel alone too that too in this condition. What say yash?" asked maan smiing.

Meer and Geet got delighted listening to maan and hugged each other. "Thanku veerji, thanku so much" told meer. All of them smiled at them. For maan and yash its like a dream, they never saw their respective spouse so happy, but today they are behaving like a small kids. How their life changed in just not less than a week.

Geet hugged muskaan tight, "Beta we are going to our home, tomorrow only" told geet smiling at her daughter. "We are going back mama?" asked muskaan excited and happy that she is going back this time with her mother. "Yes dear we are going" told geet and kissed her forehead. "Hey, we all will go out for dinner what say?" asked yash. "Chachu, icecream for me" asked muskaan making cute face. yash took and told "how can I say no to my princess". Muskaan smiled widely and kissed his cheek.

After some time all of them got ready and went to restaurant. Muskaan and meer are very happy to be with geet. She is enjoying with her mama, geet is feeding muskaan and she is eating silently. Maan adored their cute relation and smiled. Both are like kids but one is a grown up kid thought maan.

Precap: India..


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Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE
story is going fab
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Loved the way story s developing..
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