-Unforgettable Memories- THREAD 3 New Link Pg. 1 - Page 35

Don't u think Ur dragging a bit, she needs to move on.

Thanks guys for giving ur view on this update, and i am glad to know I am dragging this past thingy too much, so this is what I have thought of to do, coz i am just writing the next part of of reveling the truth to Maan, and honestly speaking her revelation right now is not making any sense, I know its not of a big deal as she was not rap**but For Geet and in my way of taking this story is a big deal, coz she is not thinking about herself but about her family honor. and u all know being a girl even a slight, or false accusation on u can just make ur life hell, and that is what she is afraid of, she know she was saved before being r****, but still she was forcefully touched by another men which neither society accept it nor anyone else, they will always make a big blunder out of small thing, and this is the solo reason why she doesn't want anyone to know about it, and as far of her being in depression and she is not willing to let Maan know about it coz she is thinking she will leave KM very soon so why bother to tell him about something like her health issue when she will not be staying with them, but as per my story she doesn't leave KM and with help of Khushi and VIcky she does get out of depression so DM and Kiran also let it go without telling Maan about it, So what I have decided to do now is I will take a leap of few months showing Geet little happy and bubbly like she used to be but not fully, she will be working in KC will surly show the starting of love between MaanEet too.
and if anyone wants to read the part of how I thought of revealing the truth in the next update is here it is, to me its not making any sense and is not even going with my concept i had written which was this:



plz guys reread the prologue and the revelations part of Geet past to Maan and then make the decision if u all still want the revelation now or later

Revelations Part:Flash back

Maan looked at the time removing the pillow from his head and said "her she come, aab sara gussa mujh pe hi nikale gi, uff Maan beta be ready to take all her anger on u...OUCHHH" Maan fakely screamed when he felt Khushi sitting on his back with a thud, "Khushi what are u doing, get off of me" Maan said as he turned facing her, but all Khushi did was gave a tight slap on his cheek and then pulled his hair in her small fist. "Mama ka gussa mujh pe kyun nikal rahi ho" Maan said getting a hold on her hand. "She didn't wished me" Khushi said as fat tears rolled down her cheeks.

Maan- she might have forgot beta, why don't u go and tell her

Khushi- Mama ko khushi ki har baat yaad rahti Khushi don't tell Mama, she knows everything.

Maan- haan but she forgot that today is ur B-day.

Khushi- Mama don't love khushi" Khushi said as she once again started hitting Maan with her tiny fist. "Bacha Mama ko yaad nahi hoga, go tell her she will wish u"

"Mama doesn't love Khushi" Saying that she went a laid beside Maan sobbing, and then eventually falls asleep crying as she had slept very late last waiting for Geet to come and wish her but she never came at night. Maan looked at her face where the tears marks were still visible, he kissed it away and said "Geet be ready to pay for making my Khushi tears" Maan said with a evil smirk and then he slowly got up without disturbing her and tucked duvet around her and left to freshen up.

"Maaan I am telling u for the last time stop chasing me, nahi tu aap ke liye acha nahi hoga" Geet said running around the couch, while Maan after.

Maan- Geet don't forget ur talking to MSK and MSK is not scared of ur bejan threatens

Geet- Maan sachi don't take me bejan threatens so lightly agar kuch kar diya na tu don't tell me later I didn't warn" But before she could say further Maan came from front and caught her. "haan tu Miss Geet Handa kya bol rahi thi" Maan said as he twisted her hand behind her back. "Ouch Maan ur hurting me"

Maan- and waht about Khushi, u know she came to my room in the morning crying, why didn't u wished her.

Geet- kis baat ki wish" hearing that Maan twisted her hand more and said "Geet stop acting and go and wish her"

Geet- Main nahi karungi and dare u tell her I know that today is her Birthday

Maan- why not

Geet- I have planned a surprise party for her, Dar ji Veer Ji, Mama papa ji sab a rahe hai.

Maan- But Geet she was crying thinking u didn't remember it's her b-day today.

Geet- I know Maan she was waiting for me to wish her first but i wanted to give her a surprise, Plz na aap use batna mat.

"Hmm, but u better make it up for her tears later" Maan said and left her hand.

Geet- pakka promise" saying that she left from there, while Maan stood still their watching her go, thinking few years ago she was lifeless person but today He got his old Geet that he had met for the first time in HP. He still remember the day when he found out the real reason behind her sudden change, her aloofness, and why she had concealed herself and her emotions from everyone. (Note some of these scene will be in upcoming update If u all choose to now revel the truth in the next update)

2years back:

Thought Geet had shut herself from showing any of her emotions or fears to anyone and presented herself in front of everyone like she was happy trying to make Maan believe that there was nothing wrong with her but it only made Maan to go and find the depth of her sudden change, and in this reason he himself had gone to HP, to find any clue, any small clue that could give the answer to his question and his going to HP was not a waste for him as from one of Brij bodyguard who had witnessed everything, and in drunk state he just blurted out that some guys name VISHAL tried to rape Geet, and Maan had happened to hear his talk with another person who was with him in the bar. He was so angry hearing this that at first he didn't believe on his words and when that bodyguard kept saying the same thing, he got more angry and in result Maan started beating him, The same night he returned to Delhi and as soon as he reached Delhi he straight went to KC and Made a call at Handa Haveli and told them to be in KM before noon, making sure Brij was present their also.

That night Maan sat in his office all night in the dark, his heart was still no where believing on that bodyguard word, but somewhere his hopes were dying as he remembered all those night when he found Geet scared, her pleading murmurings in her sleep, her helplessness that he saw in her eyes.

There was pin drop silence covered in KM, the only sound u could hear was to tic-tock of the clock, with each passing second all the Handa present their were getting scared as to why all of a sudden Maan had called them at midnight and had asked them come to KM, but none said or asked anything to him seeing his eyes fixed on the door, as if waiting for someone VIP.

"Maan bete" Dadi Ma finally said breaking the silence, but was instantly silenced with one look of Maan, which was enough to let her know the moment has not arrived to break this pin drop silence.

On the other hand Geet stood all the way in the back watching Maan and her family member in KM, not understanding the reason behind why was her family here. whenever their eyes met Geet tired to find the reason behind his anger filled eyes, why was his eyes showed only disgusts and hatred toward her. Yes his eyes were looking at her as if she had done the biggest sin, and she was to be punished severely but was she to be punished was the question he was asking himself. Maan looked at her thinking was she really to be punished for what happened with her or the person who had done this sinful deed, making an innocent girl turn into a stone heart girl. He broke his gaze with her when he heard the sound of door and his wait came to an end seeing Brij standing there.

Brij came in and stood face to face to Maan, and the next moment Maan gave a tight slap across his face, making his lips to bleed and then he gave another tight slap, making Brij to fumble back.

Geet- Darji- Veer Ji, Brij"

"Maan ye kya batamizi hai" Dadima said pushing Maan away from Brij.

Maan- How dare u hid all this" Just as those word left from Maan mouth Geet felt her breath caught in her throat, understanding the reason behind all this, while Brij instantly looked at Geet, who stood there like a dead body.

"Mr. Khurana, hum akele main chal kar baat kare" Brij said staring at Geet, he knew she can never bear this pain, and he can't see his gudiya going through anymore pain.

Maan- Just shut up Mr.Brij Handa, what did u think ke I won't find out the truth huh, yeahi socha tha na ke Maan Singh Khurana will never get to learn the real truth behind her"( he turns and pointed his finger at Geet) "Her this state"

DarJi- Mr. Khurana what are u talking about and what have Brij and Geet hid from u.

Maan- oh so u also don't know the truth" he turns to Geet, for a sec his heart ached to see her like this, but his anger once again took control over him and he angrily went to her and held her roughly by her shoulder and brought her in the middle and said "Tum khud batogi ya should I tell them" Geet just looked at him with teary eyes pleading him to not say anything, but he paid no attention to her plead."Ms. Geet Handa I asked u something, are u going to say the truth or should I tell them" Maan shouts gritting his teeth making Geet jumps back in fear. Brij at once came in between Maan and Geet seeing Geet scared and shouted saying "enough Mr. Khurana, u have no right to talk to my gudiya like this"

"Don't u raise ur voice Mr. Brij, coz ur also the solo reason for her this condition" Maan said as he once again harshly held her and pulled her in between them.

"What the hell is going on here" Dar Ji said sternly making all the three look at him. but the next set of word by Maan made the earth slipped away from the Handa as well as everyone present there.

"Sahi suna Dar Ji aap ne, ur Geet was forced, she was tried rappp" Before Maan could say that word again Brij punched him shouting "how dare u say that" he once again punched him saying "No she wasn't, suna tum ne she wasn't, Meri gudiya bulkul seeta ka tarha pavitr hai"

On the other hand for Geet, she felt as if her life came to an end and moment her breath will be snatched from her, and she falls on her knees, tears rolling down her eyes, thinking for those she was still living this painful life got to learn the bitter truth of her life, she sat their thinking what will happen to her Dar Ji, will he hate her for putting his honor on stalk, will her papa ji and Mama ever forgive her for the sin she didn't do. But the next moment she heard her papa ji screaming for Dar ji and as she looked up to see why all of a sudden her Papa ji cried for Dar ji she found her Dar Ji half laying on the couch holding on his left side chest. "Dar Jiii" Both Geet and Brij cried and ran toward him.

Now its all up to u guys to decided how u want it, coz from my point of view the parts I have wrote of Geet revelations is making more sense then the one i just gave u.

PS: And I am really very sorry for giving all those boring parts, I just wrote it what I felt was going with the story flow, but I guess it wasn't not instead it was all boring and stretching it, so once again sorry for that guys

Mariam

superb update
Maan shld know the truth abt Geet.. & hope it will soon.. i want Maan Geet falling for each other😊

waiting for next update

Thanx for pm

Nice waiting 4 disclose the truth

Dear carry on with ur way of thinking then only it makes story perfect

carry on i loved the story u wrote in previous page

Go with the track which u think the best for the story, but pls don't drag it.