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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: zohafarheen
superb update dear

Thank you Zoha😳🤗

Originally posted by: zohafarheen
grt update re
will see wat this d will do now

D ki hogi Tain tain phhsshhh🤣🤣

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88
nice story dear. waiting.😊

Thank you dear!!!😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
Anu, first of all 'no thanks' for letting me know about your replies to my comment on your work. Me enjoy that also.

Gosh, indeed a extra planetry love story. Never really expected such thing from you. Although, some events and lines are 'alien' to me as i am new to such concept but Sara is getting it. Haye, mera Maan kisi bhi roop mey extra handsome hi dikhega. God, me sounding like Anu and Ruchs from Nishu's work.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

😆😆😆😆😆 glad you enjoy that also Sara😳😛😉
He he Indeed Extra-planetary!!😃
Even I didnt expect that from me bas chalte chalte ho gaya😳
Eh le Aliens ko bhi iss concept ke barein main nahi pata hoga😆😉
HAILa *Anu rubbing her eyes vigorously!!* Kya yeh sach hai????? 😲Sara PINCH ME PINCH ME!! 😆😉Am I dreaming????😳 Yeh Sara ko kya ho gaya hai😛
Bilkul you are sounding like that thats why I am SHOCKED!!!🤣

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#694

Part 6

PRESENT

"They have done it Master D!" Raj informed his master.
D signalled him to come near him. As soon as Raj was near him he gave him a strong blow on his head with his wand.
"YOU FOOL!!! Do you take me as a fool too?? "
"Mm... Master I i..." Raj was shivering with fear.
"DID YOU VERIFY IT???" Dev roared.
"Nnnooo Master!" Raj nodded.
"Then GO and DO IT!!" Saying so Dev kicked him out of his Den.
************
"Master PMM!!!" Maan heard a meek voice.
He knew it from QV that people addressed him as PMM and Master but who was this crazy fellow calling him both he was wondering.
Again he heard the voice.
He saw a short plump bent fellow over a surfboard flying towards him as he sat on the terrace of Palace of Venus.
Maan saw the person coming towards him. He was surprised as he was again and calling him but in the same meek voice.
"Master Please give me your hand!"
"WHO ARE YOU?" Maan was skeptical about the person.
"Slow Master please! Come with me! You will know everything. Please Don't tell anyone."
Maan slowly placed his foot on the surfboard then standing over it.
He felt like as if he was flying with the speed of light with his hair flying back.
********
Maan entered a place which seemed like a palace much bigger than Palace of Venus.
He saw lots of people dressed like soldiers much alike the people on Earth. They saluted him as he walked by this crazy surfboard fellow.
He now entered a room much more bigger than the room of Geet in Palace of Venus.
"Welcome Master to the Palace of Mars." The guy said.
Maan was simply shocked and dumbstruck at the things happening around him.
"I am your servant Sordo Master PMM!" Sordo revealed his identity as many servants brought bars, fire glasses, wands, mirrors and a big glass ball inside the room.
"Why have you brought me here?" Maan questioned.
'May be he is one of the servants of D' Maan was bit intimidated but not scared.
"Before I answer any more of your questions you must see something Master!!" Saying so Sordo guided him to a glass screen.
KV's face appeared on the screen.
"Son you may not remember me. I am KV. King Venus, Father of Geet" Maan immediately got flashes of KV.
"I dont have much time left. This may be my last contact to you. Just my warning DONt physically scar her. She will become weak though you may become stronger."
"Dev is going to attack all the planets. He is trying to seize the Galaxy and only you two could save the Galaxy. It is in your hands now. It requires both of your powers FIRE and ICE equally to defeat him. Saviours like you take birth once in 15 billion years. So be careful while taking next step."
The screen whizzed off before Maan heard his last words, "STAY AWAY from your family and Dr.R"
"Now you have to trust us Master!" Sordo spoke while Maan nodded.
"Lets start it Master"
"Step on the surfboard and put your hands infront of you in a defending position stopping the person to directly attack you" Sordo directed him.
"Then Pronounce the words FLAME ON and try to control the intensity of your fire"
Maan did as Sordo directed him except he spoke the words little too loudly .
As a result he couldnt control the intensity and fell back.
The fire back tracked hitting the glass ball as it rushed inches above Maan's head.
'Wow ! That was a narrow escape' Maan thought.
"Its okay Master. It was your first time" Sordo helped him to get up and consoled him.
"Lets start it again" Maan said with determination.
*********
"Geet!" Maan had just returned from the practice session as he saw Raj trying to attack Geet in her room from her behind.
Geet came running into his arms hiding herself in his embrace.
"Maan!! Where were you?? I was scared!" Geet spoke almost weeping.
"I am here Geet!! Be strong" Maan tightened his hold on her.
'I must search and confirm about this Raj. He seems too risky now!' Maan thought.

PAST

Geet wriggled in her bed.
She was seeing the same dream again. She had already asked KV about this and he simply shrugged it off.
She was surrounded by fire as she tried to evade it off with ice daggers which went in vain.
Suddenly she saw a masked person flying on a surfboard coming towards her.
"Princess give me your hand. I am your PROTECTOR!!" The person forwarded her hand as she meekly gave hers in his.They both climbed over the surfboard and flew up over the fire.
Her ice daggers which till now laid lifeless on the ground suddenly gained momentum consuming up the fire evading it out.
Which went unnoticed to both.
Both hugged each other closely.
"Who are you ?" She whispered.
"Mars!" He whispered near her ear as she blushed.
'No Dreamy!' She thought.
"Cool" He said as he bit her earlobe.
Geet suddenly awoke from her dream. Her hands immediately reached her ear. She could feel the bite mark on her ear lobe.
'My Dreamy Mars' She blushed red from head to toe.
*******
Maan shooted fire balls vigorously across the enchanting mirror.
Everytime he missed the target.
He sat over his surfboard all tired as his drooping eyes closed.
His head felt heavy as his surfboard rotated heavily pulling him into

his daily enchanting dream.
He laid over the grass all wounded.
His eyes had almost given up.
He saw some light coming from far off distance. It gave him strength to

get up.
She came walking almost flying towards her.
She took his head in her lap. Her voice sounded as if she was singing a

lullaby.
"I am always here for you. To strengthen you. To support you. To love

you."
Maan smiled hearing his angel's voice.
'Beautiful'
"Who are you?" Maan asked all enchanted by her beauty.
"Venus!!"
She kissed on his cheek as he closed his eyes.
Maan suddenly awoke from his dream as his hands went too his cheek as
if feeling her lips. And there he could feel his cheek cold as well as
warm from the kiss and previous fire session.
He blushed.
********
PRESENT
Maan slapped Raj.
"How dare you think of even touching her?" He punched him again.
"Otherwise Dev wont spare my life!!" Raj spoke fearing his angry
punches.
"For God's sake dont behave like a coward Raj! Our planets are in
danger!!" Maan screamed.
"And for that you need to make out with Geet Venus!" Raj spoke meekly.
"We are ready to fight against Dev" Maan spoke with a smirking face.
Dr.R was shocked. 'That means they didnt. OMG D wont spare me!!'
**********
"I am sorry Venus. I really am"
"Mars Instead of repenting and asking me for forgiveness . Try to do
something for your Planets and children"KV snapped at Maan's father ,

King Mars.
'I have done!' KM thought with regret.
"YOU TRAITOR!!!" Dev roared freezing KM as KV looked towards them in

horror.

PRECAP:

PRESENT
Maan taking Geet to Mars
Past:
What is a D L BRIDGE????😉

Okay guys if you find the update not worth the wait then blame my fever and now my closed nose for it😆 DAMN!! I cant even smell anything😭 Eh lo I said I will never live update and now i am here to live update he he!!😆
So HOW WAS IT????????
Okay as many guesses are correct about what is a D L Bridge so sooner are you guys getting the next update.
So guys comment and press the like button faster and guess sooner😆
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As usual dedicated to my DQs Faiza and Prafulla My innocent Hottie Mel😉 My Stalking queen Ruchi and Ms.Bhootni Nishu!!!! And Devil Sissy No Mr.Earthling
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@ Ms.Pluto: Sorry for not giving more of D😆

Edited by Miss.Mars - 13 years ago