MG SS Mr.Mars & Ms.Venus THREAD 1 - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
nice part...
cont soon dear...


Thank you Deepa😃
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Originally posted by: spvd

teaser
nice...
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Thank you Deepa!!😊
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011


don't be 😲
its faiza


I know he he!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

*Anu Peaking in*
*Thank God No one is there Whuuahahaha *evil laugh**
So Hullo Guys specially My Dhamki Beauty Queens *😛* and sweet and adorable Melopie 😊!!
Here's the update!!!!
Part 4
Past
"What the hell was that Geet?" Maan screamed running behind Geet.
"Oops! Mr.Fire awake!!" Geet muttered as she made herself invisible.
"GEET!! Come here right now!!" Maan was all angry ready to emanate fire.
"No no Maan" Geet appeared infront of him floating in the air.
"Let me see how you wont!!" Saying so Maan rushed towards her. Maan was annoyed. Geet disappeared in a moment.
"Appear right now... Or ELSE!!" Maan warned.
"Call for a battle darling!" Geet cooed.
"Bring it on Princess!!" Maan was all set.
'Let me see how you escape from my charm, Princess Venus' Maan smirked.
Geet appeared infront of Maan all in defending position.
Geet threw ice daggers at Maan flying high up in air. Maan flew over his surfboard.
Geet blinked in surprise.
"Maan! .." Geet looked around. He was nowhere to be found. As if he had vanished."Maan? Maan... Where are you? Maan!!!" She was getting worried.
Slowly she landed on ground.
As soon as she did Maan engulfed her in his arms from her back wounding his arms around her waist. He burried his face in her neck.
"Hmmm So what you were saying Princess Venus!" Maan said smelling her hair.
"I.. Maan.. I You" She leaned back closer to his face.
"Seems My princess has become naughty eh?" Maan teased.
She immediately opened her eyes.
"Oh Yes Prince Maan Mars!!!" She said with a naughty glint in her eyes.
She put her ice cold hands inside his shirt. Instantly Maan jumped back releasing her from his tight hold.
"GEET!!"
"Yes Maan" Geet replied cheekily moving away from him.
"Shoot!!" Geet again shooted the ice balls towards him.
Maan used his fire balls to melt them.
Geet was feeling now devoid of energy since she hadnt eaten anything since morning.
The room seemed squeezing upon her as she started shivering. Maan neared her.
He held her hand. He pulled her hand and twirled her around as she dashed her back into his chest.
He kissed the nape of her neck.
"Are you feeling now warm Princess?" His hands bit luke warm now touched her everywhere.
"Yes...!!" She moaned.
******
Present.
"Geet I always used to wonder why your every personal diary had this Ms.Venus tag along with it." Maan suddenly spoke after their so called embarrassing talk with Dr.R.
Geet went all silent coming out of her thoughts immediately.
"Because it had a link here!"
Maan realized.
"WHAT?" Geet screamed.
"Because it had a li.." Maan said.
"You read my PERSONAL DIARIES! Urrgghh Maan you are IMPOSSIBLE!!" Geet pouted.
"Calm down Geet Please!"
Geet turned her face the other side.
"Geet! I love you!" Maan made a puppy dog face. Geet melted immediately seeing his open confession.
"Now we need to think about this current problem?" Maan appeared tensed.
"But Maan in half an hour?" Geet was scared.
"Why you dont want to..."Maan trailed off winking.
"Maan!!" Geet closed his mouth blushing.
*******
Dr.R blushed like hell. "I am sorry guys but you have to actually bond and mate in like half an hour " He had turned all red with eyes closed.
As soon as he opened his eyes, two hands rather fists landed on his either cheek.
"How dare you?" Both screamed.
"Are you serious?" Maan was enraged. It was something they should do with time and affection not due to emergency.
"OR ELSE YOU HAE TO FACE D? Why the hell dont you agree to this? Last time also you didnt and we got our king at trouble.Just because he want wanted that you both should live.
Both sat their dumbstruck.
"It was due to you guys that our KV is in his custody." Raj aka Dr.R completed his outburst.
*****

Past

"Run Geet! Run Maan! Run away far from here! To Earth! Save your lives! Only when you are alive you can save your planets!!" Dr.R spoke with an urgency in his voice all panicked.

As The Destroyer threw the final blow of cosmic energy on Venus, KV pushed Maan and Geet out of the battle vehicle. They drifted down and down still in each others arms never to break away irrespective of time and space.

****

Well well KV ha ha Very funny fact! D never goes alone! Its his assistants that go first to conquer a battle!"
KV was shocked to see the familiar face infront of him.
"Traitor!!" KV screamed.
"Uh huh tsk tsk Worry about your children!" Is all KV heard before everything went black.

**********

Present

Geet remembered Dr.R's words, "Geet you go and visit your room before you both get ready for eh you know what!!".
Geet entered her so called room.
Geet examined each and every corner of the room as she could feel her finger tips turning cold. As if the molecules were rushing in high speed inside her body changing the chemical combination in her body.
"Touch the buds!" Geet heard the voice out of nowhere.She involuntarily went and touched them.
Hazy images started appearing in her head. About her past. Her past with Maan Mars.
Maan entered her room all disturbed.
QV had told him about their life and he was shocked.
How can people be so cruel?
Geet immediately withdrew her fingers from the buds . She stood their numb.

*****
He engulfed her passionately in a hug burring his head in the nape of her neck lightly kissing it.
"We will pass this phase too" Maan murmured.
"If our love is strong enough to surpass it" Geet sighed.
******

PRECAP:
Maan laid awkwardly over Geet. Geet squirmed under him due to her uncomfortable position.
Dr.R knocked on the door "20 minutes left.!"
****
"Let me see Venus how wont Maan bring Geet out. How much will he hide her and him?" D laughed while his most trusted person stood there grim faced and head hung low.
*****
The mystery of Magical buds.

again a big wala thank you to all for commenting and liking this story!!
I am in heaven seeing the comments😉
And special thanks to my dhamki beauty queens Faiza, Prafulla and Mel!!!
@rsroopali: Oye devil sissy where are you?
@ruchs: Mujhe saare ke saare monkey pics pm kar abhi ke abhi
Puff!! Nevertheless if you liked it press the like button

@Faiza& Frankie:: Ok since my mind got jammed about the update I have posted a disastrous poem on fb in "My Notes". Do check ok!!
If you didnt like also press the button (since there is no dislike button🤣 )
Comments n dhamkis and jootis all welcome
Love
Ananya

Edited by Miss.Mars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Janam dekhlo mit gayi dooriyan Main yahaan hoon yahan hoon yahan!!
Tune change
Kiska hai yeh tumko intezaar Main hoon na
Dekhlo idhar toh ek baar main hoon na

Oyyee mujhe akela chodke kahan sab bhag gaye?????😔
Mujhe update karne ke liye dhamki deke bhaag gaye!!
@Faiza& Prafulla: Eh lo otherwise bol ke bhaag gaye!! Dhamki queen ko dhamki de ke bhaag gaye!!
@Mel: Kamini you better comment as soon as possible.btw kidding do take rest ok!!
@ruchs:oh my confusion queen jaldi aaopls
Love ya guys!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww you think I am sweet and adorable 🤣
Mel is 😳
Mr. fire😆 good on Geet
He read her diary😲
loved it con soon
and BTW Ms. Lazy why couldn't you color code now. I don't like reading without color coding😡🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420

Awww you think I am sweet and adorable🤣
Mel is 😳
Mr. fire😆 good on Geet
He read her diary😲
loved it con soon
and BTW Ms. Lazy why couldn't you color code now. I don't like reading without color coding😡🤣
🤣


AarRRGGGHHH Kaminiii!! Mel I am so not gonna leave you kal dikh toh zara phir batati hoon who am i hmmmpphh!!
btw Mel i said Hottie beauty queen check ur eyes🤣
Bas itna hi? No blushing?😉
No thanks😔
🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MG2011AA


AarRRGGGHHH Kaminiii!! Mel I am so not gonna leave you kal dikh toh zara phir batati hoon who am i hmmmpphh!!
btw Mel i said Hottie beauty queen check ur eyes🤣
Bas itna hi? No blushing?😉
No thanks😔
🤣


Nope it's still sweet and adorable you check poor Ananya can't read anymore
of course no thx where friends remember I blushed na when you called me sweet and adorable why should I blush when Geet get's compliments😆😛
btw why are you angry and calling me kamini meine kya kiya hmmmp


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