MG Love???Revenge??? link to thread2 pg 1 - Page 31

Originally posted by: love2_soma

maan kyun nafrat karti hai geet se...pyar kardo inn dono mein...

beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

lovly update.. Geet is too good...

Maan kids & Geet ke chakkar mein airport jana bhul gaya ...yippii...👏

Originally posted by: monikaseth

aww i love kids they will give maan some brain i am sure awesome

Originally posted by: niki02

Your ff is amazing i just started reading love it way to go

Originally posted by: anmirza

Awesome update! I am really liking the story!

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

@harika..yo yo yo.:)

Donno how i missed the before update... i re read the last 3 again...

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Part 10:

SKUL'S AUDI:

Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..

The song began'''. Krathi,karthi started running wildly

Krathi: Aahhh karthi practice has started

Maan: guys relax no need to hurry don't run like that

Karthi: chachu we are late

Maan: both of u woke up late so kids it wasn't my fault now stop running

Maan was still on the corridor of the skul wen the two children left him behind, entered the audi room

Jazba aa..

Asusual clad in her trademark wardrobe now-a-days her fav causuals tshirt and jeans geet was watching the children attentively. She bent down forward tugging her hair strands all together and raised up tying them with the head scarf bt not leaving a glace at the children who were practicing the moves for the song to present at the annual function

Kaante rehne de
Gulaab todh le
Neendo ki tehniyon se
Khwaab todh le
Ho..

She started doing the signature step along with the children and they were almost mimicking her with her moves that's wen two of her devils entered. She looked at them with anger in her eyes for being late to which they held their ears and she laughed dragging them to the dance practice

Kaante rehne de
Gulaab todh le
Neendo ki tehniyon se
Khwaab todh le

Khwahishon ki hai
Kahaniyaan padhi
Chun le kahaniya
Kitaab jod le

Just then maan was passing through the audi deciding to meet gayatri mom(prem's mother), he stopped in his tracks wen geet was tying her hari with attitude(uff maan is dead) mesmirised by her beauty, her moves the way she was dancing was only making him go mad. He just stared at her not even blinking his eyes for once'.. he had to wait till the two devils complete their practice session. Though he hates waiting he is enjoying. He had seen girls bt this girl is different from all the others

Pheeki hai zindagi toh yaara
Padh le dil ka ishaara
Saara badal de nazara

Jagale tu jagale jazba hoye
Jagale tu jagale jazba
Jazba jazba
Jagale tu jagale jazba hoye
Jagale tu jagale jazba
Jazba jazba

Geet: oye patakon(fire crackers) tum log waise toh bohut jyada energy mein rehte ho wats with u now? C'on buck up She shouted louder than the song that was playing and started with her count of the steps 1.2.3.4.5.6.7''''''''''. maan laughed listening to her talks and then suddenly her previous encounters came to his mind. He took out the payal of geet from his pocket looking at intently he spoke to himself

Maan: mujhe ulta jawab de rahi thi na tum main bhi dekhta hoon yeh payal tumhe kaise milegi. He slipped the payal into his pocket (payal ko har jagah kyon leke jaate ho maan? Aisa kya hai?)

Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Jazba aa..

The patake were in their own dhun and this girl is doing her own steps enjoying the sight of a bunch of children trying to cope up with her moves. She cudnt hold herself from laughing watching their plight.

She started moving her hips sensually. Maan wondered can he compare Barbie with this innocent beauty? (geet is maan ki Barbie right???😉) No doubt She was a gorgeous women with a sex appeal and by the way she was behaving he was sure she was not aware of it guess no one eva told her wat killing features she has

Zara sa zara sa jagale jazba
Zara sa zara sa jagale jazba

Geet made chotu sit at the corner of the room so that she doesn't intervenes with their practice and moreover once she enters kids will not listen to her and will start playing with chotu. She couldnt hold herself and stood beside geet. Geet bent down and started crawling along with chotu, taking the chance all the children moved away from their places and surrounded chotu. Geet gave all of them an angry glare and made chotu to sit at the corner again came back doing the steps.

Maan(st) : yaha bhi iss doggy no nahi chodti. She is even spoiling krathi and karthi

Kya karein kya nahi
Khali khayalo mein
Paseena kya bahana
Behtari hai yehi
Karke dikhane ke
Tareeke aazmana

Maan was in a fix he neva looked at girls coz he feels they are fit for nothing and he just cannot help himself from staring at geet. He was ogling at her cutey cutey antics. She was Cherishable, Beyond words, a beauty like no other, Angelic, Gorgeous, Delicate, a treasure, Sweetness, Pure, tickles his soul, Lovely, Enlightening, Dreamlike... Delightful, Eccentric, perfect (inna saare feelings maan toh gaya)

Jitne mooh utne hi
Baaton mein tu na jaana
Dil ki hi tu sunna
Dil ko apni sunwaana

Sapno ke pahiyon ko yaara
Speed limit na gawaara
Khuli udaano ne pukara

Geet again started with the count and soon she was centered among the children kneeling down to the level of kids guiding them. She took out the chocklet box and warned them to do well. Soon the kids started doing their steps in resonance with geet. It was a group dance of her with the children for the function

Prem who was also on a relaxing mode today as it was Sunday decided to pay a visit to his mother's skul as gayatri and geet were busy with the preparations for the function

Jagale tu jagale jazba hoye
Jagale tu jagale jazba
Jazba jazba
Jagale tu jagale jazba hoye
Jagale tu jagale jazba
Jazba jazba

Jagale jagale
Jazbaa aa'

Hey yeah..
Hey yeah..

Geet now climbed onto the table so that all the kids can have a clear view of her steps and started dancing singing the song enjoying this time with all the kids teasing them with the chocklet box she had with her

Thap thapa tu zara
Lazy iraado ki tu
Sustiyaan chhuda le
Dabdaba hai tera
Raahon ki mushkilon se
Kushtiyaan lada le
Jo hoga so hoga
Hone de na ghabrana

Geet was moving all around the table dancing and maan was watching her legs getting frightened all the while. His eyes were now glued on to her so much wen prem entered and found maan in the corridor he walked towards him.

Tu apni koshish mein
Kanjoosi na kar jaana

Kismat ki lehron pe yaara
Le ke nikal tu shikara
Chamkega tera bhi sitara

Jagale tu jagale jazba hoye
Jagale tu jagale jazba
Jazba jazba
Jagale tu jagale jazba hoye
Jagale tu jagale jazba
Jazba jazba

Prem called maan bt he was busy in staring the beauty infront of him. Prem smirked to himself looking at his frnd drooling over a girl for the first time in his life. He finally shook maan breaking his reverie he spoke

Prem: abbey maan kya dekh raha hai? Waise who meri behen hai geet maan was shocked now'he heard from prem abt this girl. Once prem starts with geet ka bhajan he neva ends it and he was eager to meet this girl since the time prem started praising her and here she is oh god he was baffled literally

Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Nana nannna..
Jazba aa'

Hey yeah..
Hey yeah..
Jagale jagale

Hey yeah..
Jagale jagale
Jagale jagale..

As the song reached the end she got engrossed so much into the beats that geet lost all her senses. She reached the edge of the table and was about to fall'''''.. Fiddlesticks!!!! She closed her eyes wen two strong pair of hands held her and the kids started clapping looking at the sight(naughty children😉)

Soon geet's ruffled nerves calmed and she slowly opened her eyes to look at her savior and aghast she fluttered her lashes couple of times making out the compromising postion she was in with the man and listening to the claps from kids geet tried pushing him off her and trembled unable to draw up herself bt again maan tried holding her and she shove his hand away and fell down all the children were abt to laugh but held their breaths as it would be embrassing to their teacher

Maan: dekha teri behen ko? Aisi hai she always does foolish things maan said this glaring geet. Prem tried defending her bt before he opened his mouth to say something geet started raving

Geet: yes I do foolish things bt I don't fool around ppl hiding my possessions(she was speaking abt chotu which maan hid under the dustbin)

Maan was hell shocked now, his hand went into the pocket he thought that geet was talking abt the anklet of her wondering how did she know abt it bt to his astonishment geet stood up and walked towards her chotu picking her in arms caressing her. Maan understood that geet was talking abt chotu and he let a sigh of relief bt prem was trying to understand the alien talks of maan and geet. He asked the children to practice themselves for sometime calling maaneet outside the audi.

Prem: wats with u two? Tum dono ek doosre ko pehle se jaante ho?

Geet: haan bhai he is Mr.khadoos meri chotu ko dustbin mein daal diya

Maan: toh kya karta main? It was licking my leg

Geet: oh babji kaise insaan ko mere gale latkadiya jo hamesha meri chotu ko kosta rehta hai? She said looking up and then gave cast to maan saying yeh chotu ka nature hai and we cant change it hugging her chotu tight

Maan: wat? Ek baat main tumhe saaf saaf keh raha hoon if ur chotu licks me again toh zabaan keench loonga tumhara chotu ka nahi balki tumhara(maan sir aap geeet ka zubaan toh keench lenge lekin apni zubaan ka kya karenge? Zubaan peh kuch dil mein kuch dimaag mein kuch )

That's it prem intervened and spoke

Prem: maan behave urself is this a way u talk to a girl? Geet iski taraf se main sorry kehta hoon plz don't mind his words gusse mein kuch bhi bolta rehta hai

Geet: kyun khud nahi keh sakte? Ek sorry kehne se kya jayega bhai?

Prem: yeh kisi ko sorry nahi kehta?

Geet: kyun koi bhagwan hai ki sorry nahi keh sakte?

Prem: geet yeh maan singh khurana hai and sorry word is not found in his dictionary

Geet was dumbfound..yicks!!!!... The way prem has described abt this man is nowhere the one she expected him to be. She was completely taken aback,stunned. How cud prem and maan be frnds that too from childhood he is just too tuff to handle

Geet: yeh maan singh khurana hai? How can that be?

Prem: jab tum geet ho sakti hoon toh yeh maan kyun nahi ho sakta?

Geet: (reframing from the shock she spoke) haan ho sakte hain kyun nahi ho sakte saying this she looked at her chotu who was now petrified with maan's continuous yelling and said mere chotu ko wapas dara diya inhone bhai admitting geet's words chotu jumped off geet's arm and ran to the kids followed by geet

Maan: yeh geet hai? I thot of her to be nave and innocent bt

Prem: bt wat maan? Kabhi kabhi bahar se insaan jo lagta hai asal mein aisa nahi hota

Maan: haan bahar dikhti thik hai lekin dimag toh''. bhagwan ne diya hi nahi isse she is a unique piece kuch karne ya kehne pehle sochti nahi hai

Prem: plz maan tum bhi gusse mein kuch bhi bol dete ho geet kya hai aur kya nahi yeh baat tumhe jaldi pata chalega.

Maan: prem plz can we talk something else?

Prem: kiske baare mein? Pari ke baare mein baat karon?

Maan: god not again I guess u came to know abt the airport fiasco? That was not my fault and daadi she doesn't believe me

Prem: baat jo bhi hai I felt happy that u did not go to the airport waise daadi chahe kitna bhi koshish karle pari can neva be a match of u it wud be better if she understands this soon

Maan: prem I don't care a hoot abt parineeta neither any other girl u know I can neva love

Prem: Things are not the way they used to be dev ne shaadi kiya he has two kids and annie uski bhi shaadi hogi lekin tumhara? Think abt ur life hating the past is ok bt don't let it ruin ur present maan move on

Maan: u have started it again prem u know I hate all this still u try to make me understand things which mean nothing to me saying this maan walked towards the audi where the kids were practicing

Prem(st): mujhe pata hai maan tum pyar nahi karsakte lekin pyar karte nahi hota hai aur bachu time aagaya ki tumhe pyar ho. GEET!!! Geet hi who ladki hai jo tumhe ek pathar se insaan bana sakti hai for the first time I have seen appreciation for a girl in ur eyes be it her beauty bt still it started on I don't mind being a cupid for u my frnd and it wud be intresting for me to watch as to how u wud resist her coz she is too hard to do it. The moment I found u both holding on to each other I guessed u are made for each other and it will happen soon yeh mera waada hai khud se

Here geet was in an other world practice ko maaro goli ab its bread pakoda time she was sitting on a couch having her breakfast holding onto chotu nibbling the pakoda wildly as if she hadn't eaten for days and her patake who were busy eating the chocklets joined geet in eating cuddled with her on the couch. Maan who was walking in looked at them they were in full on masti mood. He just cudnt make out that geet was an adult among these children. Prem who was checking out maan since the time he came decided to start of his mission soon.

SO THE CUPID'S CONSPIRACY IS ABOUT TO BEGIN

precap: GEET CLEANING MAAN KA LIMO🤣 DETAILS NAHI DOONGI YAAR U ARENT FILLING MY QUOTA😭

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