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Posted: 13 years ago
sigh..fir mai uth ke padhing..abhi sone jaiing

bye..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

sigh..fir mai uth ke padhing..abhi sone jaiing


bye..

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 9:


KHURANA MANSION:

It was a Sunday mrng wen maan was relaxing lazily checking out the files that needed his attention that's wen daadi came into his room


Daadi: maan bete aapko aaj airport jaana hai parineeta london se wapas aarahi hai so go and pick her up


Maan: daadi wats the need for me to pick her up ? She will go to her house how can I receive her


Daadi: off oh maan drop her to home beta


Maan: home? Wat will she do coming all the way from london to our home?


Daadi: maan main aapko unhe unke ghar mein drop karne ko keh rahi hoon apni ghar mein nahi aur haan aap unhe apne ghar mein bhi laa sakte ho bahu banake saying this daadi smiled


Maan was getting annoyed now

Maan: plz daadi I am not her driver to do all these things


Daadi: ok u are her frnd atleast plz do this for me... daadi hit on maan's weak point he wud do it if she asks him its for her bechara he was left with no option


Maan: thik hai daadi


Dadi: pari ka flight abhi aane wali hi hogi so plz get ready and go fast


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KARTHI''..KARTHI''''''''.KARTHI''''' children were encouraging karthi as it was the ball which can fetch him a hundred


Uff geet was in a mess with the scarf tied on her head looking eva dirty with the casuals she wore fitted sleevless tshirt and three fouth pant. She was running all around the place to make sure that karthi completes his century and krathi was no less than geet with looks all untidy and tacky.


Geet: ok ok chalo chalo karthi one more ball now u can do it on the way to century whoaaa!!!


All the children including geet and krathi were cheering up karthi on the road side of her building and yes he getting ready to face the ball just then a car landed there from nowhere and maan stomped out of the car, stopped karthi at the last ball of century and shouted


Maan: krathi and karthi both of u IN THE CAR!!! NOW!!!


Karthi: bt I am abt to complete 100 just a ball chaachuu plz


Maan: I am telling u in the car now he was spitting fire looking at geet


Krathi and karthi knew their chachu's anger so both started walking into the car wen geet spoke


Geet: both of u arent going anywhere untill karthi plays the last ball geet looked into the eyes of maan and spoke determindly


Maan: how dare u? do u know which family these children hail from? U are making them to play galli cricket?


Geet: mister I only know they are my students and I want karthi to play his last ball she tried to move towards karthi. Maan stopped her and roared


Maan: dekho pagal ladki lagta hai tumhe normal insaan ki normal baatein samajh mein nahi aate tumhe toh doggy mein bhi isaan dikhta hai par ek baat kaan kholke sunlo stay away from these kids saying this maan dragged both of them into the car and drove back home


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All the three entered home wen naintara was shocked looking at her kids


Nt: krathi,karthi yeh kya haal bana rakhi hai tum dono ne apna? Where are u actually coming from? U ppl lied to me that u are going for frnds house?


Both were looking down coz they had nothing to speak wen maan said


Maan: bhabi dono galli cricket khel rahe the. These two kids have lost it completely agar cricket khelna hi tha toh mujhse keh dete I wud have joined u in a cricket club? He said looking at both the children


Karthi: mama se maine poocha tha she did not agree to this


Nt: wat else will I do? U are so much intrested in cricket that u are neglecting ur studies and maths? Uske baare mein baat karon toh? U have failed karthi last term mein and I am warning u no more cricket now


Both nt and maan started off with their lectures wen daadi came in between and shouted on maan


Daadi: maan agar aapko airport nahi jaana tha toh keh dete main khud chali jaati u know pari waited for u for almost an hr and then she had to hire a taxi to home? Y the hell are u shouting on kids this way?


Maan: daadi I forgot actually I started for airport bt on the way I saw krathi and karthi were'''''.before maan cud complete daadi stopped him from speaking


Dadi: enuf of ur excuses maan hame aapse yeh ummed nahi thi aap badal gaye ho u don't listen to me anymore saying this dadi left


Karthi: kya didu kal mom ne mera practice session kharab kara diya ab main kya karonga?


Krathi: don't worry we have geet miss with us its all bcoz of her that u cud complete 100 aur chachu ne sab spoil kar diya


Karthi: hai na? its all bcoz of geet miss and di u are coming with us tomorrow na I want u to cheer for me wen ill play my first cricket that too for a tournament


Krathi: are u mad y will I not be a part of it bt I am scared now coz after the meet we have annual function aur hame dance practice bhi toh karna padega na mom ko pata chal gaya ki we lied for playing cricket now she will not allow us to go for dance practice


Karthi: no didu this time chachu is in he was the one who had spoiled my cricket practice now he will be the one to help us for dance practice


Krathi: wat do u mean?


Karthi: didu u know na chachu cant live without talking to us so now that he has spoiled my practice session we are angry on him and we will not talk to him then just wait and watch how will my plan work


After two days in the mrng,


Naintara: krathi, karthi wake up kids its late now u need to rush to skul uff wake up plz I cant shout on u ppl anymore now wake up


After after shouting and pleading them for long time both of them woke up '. Naintara got them ready for skul and made breakfast ' she was checking their homeworks


Naintara: karthi wat is this? U haven't completed ur homework?


Karthi: mom I feel asleep after doing the work


Naintara: this is not the way karthi just look at u sister she always does her work and u neva '. Ur teachers complain me abt u always this time u have failed in mathematics that's really bad


Karthi: mom it was last sem plz don't start with the maths subject this time just wait till the results to come


Naintara: (disinterested in karthi's talks)I am warning u karthi if u remain this way ill will be left with no option than sending u to tuitions after ur skul so just be careful and have ur breakfast soon


Karthi looked at his sister who was busy eating


Karthi: di y didn't u do my homework last night?


Krithi: sorry karthi who I was tired so just slept bt I promise kal se aisa nahi hoga sorry


Karthi: u know social sir he is a terror di and u didn't complete social ka homework


Krathi: don't worry ek hi din ki toh baat hai karthi manage ho jayega plz


Krathi and karthi left for the school after having their breakfast. They reached school. Just then geet also arrived to the school. Both of them ran towards her.


Krathi & karthi: good mrng miss(in unison) geet sat on her knees and addressed them


Geet: Good mrng my two little devils here take ur chocklets we will celebrate after the annual function together? For now manage with them I am proud of u karthi saying this geet kissed his cheek and both the two devils did the same with geet and left for the classes


GAYATRI'S CABIN:


Gayatri: geet I am actually proud of u this time karthi has scored great marks in maths


Geet: aunty u shud be proud of karthi for an other reason too


Gayatri: and the reason is?


Geet: we won the sports meet aunty and karthi was outstanding the way he played he was our savior in winning the cricket match and I want u to do me a favour


Gayatri: that's really great geet and wat is the favour abt?


Geet: I want u to invite the whole khurana family to the annual function unhe bhi toh pata chale ki karthi ne kya kiya


Gayatri: yes geet that's a great idea so u are planning a surprise


Geet: nahi aunty karthi ki mom uske galat samajhti hai she feels he is worth nothing and if she comes to the function all her insecurities for karthi will wash away this is wat I want


KHURANA MANSION:


Krathi and karthi were busy doing their homeworks wen maan entered their room. It had been a week both of them stopped talking to him


Maan: krathi and karthi look I have got chocklets for u both


Karthi looked at maan from the corner of his eyes bt still both pretended not listening to him and continued doing their works


Maan: c'on yaar u both were at fault and u ppl stopped talking to me its not right still both of them did not pay heed


Maan: ok chalo wat do u want me to do?


Karthi: tomorrow is Sunday chachu


Maan: oh so u want to go out tell me where do u want to go?


Karthi: we have annual function on Monday so its really imp for us to practice for it tomorrow (dance) and u are taking us, also u will get us back to home without mom's knowledge


Maan: toh dhamki peh utre ho tum log


Krathi: nahi chachu hame jaana hai mom will neva allow us to go for it plz plz both of them pleaded making baby faces and maan cudnt say no


Precap: jagale tu jagale jazabaa


U PPL DID NOT GIMME 50LIKES STILL I UPDATED

i know many of u are waiting for maaneet moments plz bear with me coz it will take time as maan is really tuff man to handle for geet and once their story starts i promise story wud get more intresting


i am thnkful to my all those who have commented on my last update aash(moi first frnd in IF),mona(darling sis),deepa,shurtheajay,impoojaverma and remya pillai(both are g8 girls),18mypride, abi, monikaseth,neelam


sorry if i missed anybody and also thankful to the bunch of ppl who commented atleast thankq frnds and plz silent readers hit a like i am asking u all the while bt u dont do it😭


for pms add me next update after 50 LIKES


previous part: part 8

next part: part10

Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoem update
wow two kids r mind blowing
maan was again rude with hsi words towards geet
continue soon
these kids r blackmailing MSK
good

waiting for net update
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Posted: 13 years ago
so chote shaitaan dhamki derahe hain woh bhi MSK ko
loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing update

so both of dem r giving dhamki to MSK!!!!!!!

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