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Posted: 13 years ago
abhi update kar rahi hoon😆
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Part 5:

DELHI RAILWAY STATION:

Meera: geet' geet.. uthna suddenly geet woke up looking for chotu she started shouting coz it was the habit of chotu to wake her every day

Geet: Chotu.. meera mera chotu god how will l live withot her meera? Nothing was registering in geet's mind she was literally going mad for chotu wen meera held her tight started speaking.

Meera: Chotu yash ke paas hai tu pehle train toh utar jaa geet yash dedega station mein hain hume receive karna aaya hai

Geet sighed listening to meera both took the luggage and got down the train where yash was waiting with chotu in his hands. Chotu jumped off the hands of yash and ran towards geet in no time she reached geet and started dragging her dupatta with her mouth dancing all the while with joy.. geet left the luggage and hugged chotu with all her might getting scared to loose her and started crying where meera and yash started laughing at geet and chotu's PDA(personal display of affection)*winks*.

Geet: meera how did yash managed getting chotu?

Meera: mama ne kal teri saari luggage aur chotu ko mujhe dediya aur waise bhi yash toh mujhse pehle delhi aane waala tha apni car mein toh chotu ko maine yash ko dediya aur teri halat kharab thi toh main kuch keh nahi paayi saying this meera hugged geet

Yash: yaar tum dono bhi na kahi bhi shuru ho jaate ho

''JHALLI GEET I HATE U'' all the three turned around to find the owner of the voice

Geet: HEER DI!!!!

Heer: chalo tumhe meri naam toh yaad raha hai mujhe laga ki tu bhool gayi hogi KIDDO it has been a week since we talked on phone

Geet: heer di plz stop calling me kiddo I am grown up now I missed u so much di

Heer: ya ya I can see that tumhe kya lagta hai geet?? meera ke saath rehke tu bhi humare age ki ho gayi? Oh god she failed for three years I just cant believe how cud she manage failing THREE TIMES wen we used to get promoted to next year she used to remain in the same class

Meera: stop taunting me heer warna ill have to talk abt LOVE

Geet: love??

Meera: kyun heer boldoon?

Heer: chup kar baad mein geet se kehdoongi usse kya chupana for now we have to leave for office we are getting late

Yash: haan heer we will drop these two in their flat and then leave for office and yes I am thinking geet was a surprise to us for she landed here in the last minute y not suggest her name to prem for job as she will need it now

Geet: NO ill try for a job on my own I don't like these software jobs

Heer: toh? Wat kind of jobs u need kiddo?

Geet: di plz lemme try to get a job on my own capabilities if u don't then ill do wateva u say

Heer: uff baby u are really grown up girl now ok??? I am giving u a time of two weeks if u don't get a job then ull have to do as I ask for coz u know how much protective I am for u.

Heer knows how bad geet's family is that's the reason y she is so loving and caring for geet even after moving to delhi she neva failed talking to geet secretly on rano's phone and meera's phone. She has lost her sister in an accident since then heer started treating geet with even more love and protectiveness.

Heer,meera and yash were class mates and geet was their junior in skul by three years where heer and yash used to excel with the results while meera used to fail that's how geet and meera became classmates and its bcoz of the age difference heer calls her as kiddo. Yash and meera were in love since their skul time' wen heer and yash completed their studies both of them moved to delhi to work in juneja industries where heer fell in love with her boss prem (love) thats the reason y always meera teases her as love yet they did not tell geet coz they feel she is a kid nobody knew that this kid has grown beyond her age actually the situations made her so. Heer recommended prem to give a job to meera so he had no option as he cudnt say no to his lady love bt not before asking her a promise that this girl will have to give her best for the job.

Soon all the four reached the apartment were geet and meera were to live. The houseowner checked out the two girls she was quite impressed with their dressing

Houseowner: dekho waise toh I don't like to give mah house on rent to singles be it boys or girls bt I know yash personally and more over both of u don't hail from here so I am letting u in as u are new to this city '.. I don't want any prblms I am warning u don't blame me if u both do anything wrong I will not think twice before asking u to leave.

Meera : no aunty we promise that we will not cross our limits

Yash: don't worry aunty koi bhi prblm ho plz let me know ill fix these two girls'. And meera take rest for a day from tomorrow u are going to join us in the office

Saying this yash left with heer to the office

Geet: aunty can I get todays newspaper?

Houseowner: haan u can get it check it out and return it to me back otherwise ull have to pay for the newspaper

Meera(st): yaar kaisi aurat hai she wants money for a paper yuck kanjoos kahi ki' kal se office? Uff how will I manage??

Both of them entered the house and found out that it was spacious enuf for both the girls. Meera started cleaning the house while geet was busy looking into wanted columns

She found a relevant teacher job and the walk in date was the same day so she had to start for it soon. She got ready in no time and started rushing for the interview carrying all the necessary credentials for it asking meera to take care of her chotu.

GAYATRI VIDYA MANDIR SCHOOL, DELHI:

Geet had to wait for 3hrs wen finally she was called for the interview inside the cabin of the principal, Gayatri juneja.

Geet:may I come in mam?

Gayatri: yes

Geet: good mrng mam

Gayatri: good mrng miss?

Geet: geet!!! Geet handa

Gayatri: beta wat subjects can u deal with?

Geet: anything u say maam

Gayatri was observing this girl since she entered the cabin, her simple way of dressing and the way she carried herself gracefully'...were all the things she was impressed with and was laughing internally looking at this childish yet mature girl who looked very cute she was in a dilemma as to how this girl will cope up with all the chota shaitans of her skul

Gayatri: ok then go for mathmatics geet as per ur certificates I am satisfied with the marks u have secured. I mean u are really good

Geet: thanks maam(smiling)

Gayatri: beta how will u manage the children u are just 18 as per ur bio data

Geet: don't worry maam I can handle them I can understand them well

Gayatri: ok wat makes u opt for this job coz u can go for a software job easily

Geet: mam I love the job of a teacher who can pass on knowledge and also values to children as they are really needed. I wud feel glad if I can atleast help few children to lead on to a path of success coz I suppose teacher is no less than a mother saying this geet started crying remembering her mama.

Gayatri who saw her crying was worried bt decided not to ask her as she felt she wud be interfering in her personal life bt something was bugging her that's all she cud make out watching geet and yes she was highly impressed with this nave girl who is as beautiful as her appearance

Gayatri: I am proud of ur answer beta welcome to gayatri vidya mandir'' u can join from tomorrow

Geet: thanks so much maam

Geet was so happy for getting this job that too so easily she came back home all tired and told meera abt the job and she felt happy for her geet just then geet's cell rang

Geet: hello??

Arjun: toh where is my gudiya? Wat is she doing?

Geet: bhai? Aap?

Arjun: haan main koi shak? Seems like u r so happy

Geet: woh sab chodo bhai mama kaisi hai? Ghar mein sab mama ko kuch keh toh nahi rahe na? I wanted to call her bt I cudnt as she told me not to call her I am waiting for her call bhai

Arjun: maine baat ki hai she is all fine trust me I am talking to her just wait till she calls u

((Geet was unaware of all the happenings in handa haweli so arjun thot that it wud be better hiding it from her for he was sure that he will rescue his mother from that living hell soon. If he tries telling her anything he knows she wud not be able to hold herself and Arjun has this time decided to play smart and save his mother so he sent gurvinder to handa haweli the moment darji has asked the servents of his house to send a person who will take care of rano with all her needs as he wanted to make sure that she doesn't step out of the house bechare darji he didn't know wat blunder he was doing as gurvinder was paid high by arjun to keep his mouth shut while darji has employed him to spy on rano and also he was paying him high amount too bt this fellow is being loyal to arjun coz he is a nice man basically and he knew wat darji's real face is))

Geet: haan I am happy par bhai why didn't she call me till now?

Arjun: she will gudiya as she doesn't want ppl there to suspect abt ur whereabouts to distract geet he continued toh tell me now kaha ho? Wat are u doing? U are fine na?

Geet started telling him everything that has happen since she left the house to the job she got. Arjun was overwhelmed with his sister

Arjun: I am very very happy for u gudiya remember if u need anything I am there for u just a call

Geet: haan bhai pakka

precap: maan's entry and small sketch of characters😉

ok i thot ill give tomorrow bt then i got free time so typed it in 15 mins donno how it is bt yes plz like and comment if u can silent readers atleast hit a like

my next update is for maan deewani's especially @maa_ki_jaan and @maneetlover1

@maan_ki_jaan yaar i only find waiting for hotty's entry nothing else in your comment so i guess next update will soothe u

@maneetlover1 i just loved ur comment sis

@Remya_pillai,@maaniqra,@18mypride,@monikaseth@-Neelam- thanks newbies for commenting

@World-of-Dreams i cant say how much i loved ur comment

@URME thnks to u too😆

@nehakapoor7 thanks thanks

and yes if i get enuf likes soon ill update the next part probably on saturday full of maan if not then will update on sunday after my exam so get to work if u want maan's entry soon😃

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previous part: part4

next part: part6

Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.. now Geet is ready for job.. 😊


good going

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

nice update.. now Geet is ready for job.. 😊



good going

yaar i forgot mentioning u maaf kardo thanks for commenting 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I m Not a newbie
Loved the part a lot..
Geet s really cute and innocent...
Heer s really a wonderful sis..just like mine...
Even after suffering so much she handled the situation wonderfully with the help of her friends..
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buhuhahaha 😆 so here goes my comment, again.. 😳 "waiting for my hero maan's entry" 😆
i write dt coz am missing him a lot in d story😃 anywy i tnk my wait wud end by d next update 😳
baaki ka kya hai, nice to c geet settled wid a job😳

ps : hey i jzt checkd how mny times i'v many times i've annoyed u wid dt comment but ders only one such comment hawww 😕
but its ok, koi gal nai 😳😊
waiting for satday😳
Edited by maan_ki_jaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update yaar...

just cant wait for MSK entry!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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