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Posted: 13 years ago

Part4:

Rano reached home and saw geet holding onto a bottle she did not understand wat was it bt geet sensed rano entering the room so she hid the bottle' rano grabbed the bottle from her hands and found out that it was poison she slapped tight cross her cheek

Rano: toh tu marne jaa rahi hai ek kaam kar thoda main bhi peeloongi tere saath raji chali gayi ab tu bhi chali jayegi toh main jinda rehke kya karongi? saying this rano opened the cap of the bottle geet took it away from her mothers mouth and broke down crying

Geet: mama kyun aise kar rahe hai sab mere saath? Kya ladki hoke paida hona itna bada sazaa hai mama? Plz mujhe marne do mama

Rano: geet!!! Meri bachi tu dekh nahi paa rahi hai? Har din main tere saath mar rahi hoon kyun apni maa ko chodke jaa rahi hai isse toh acha hai hum dono mar jaate hai

Geet: nahi mama aise mat kaho

Rano: geet tu yeh shaadi nahi karegi tera bhai, tere papa aur tere darji kitna bhi koshish karle yeh shaadi main hone nahi doongi I have already made so many compromises not anymore I have decided u are leaving this house. Soon rano told her that she has made all arrangements for her travel to delhi.

Geet: magar mama main aapko chodke kaise chali jaon?

Rano: tujhe jaana padega geet raji ke saath jo hua main nahi chahti ki wahi sab tere saath bhi ho mere liye chali ja tujhe duniya dekhni hain I want u to be independent in ur life' Ill manage somehow the things here so don't worry abt me now I am strong enuf' ur father has moved away in his guilt doesn't mean ill let u sacrifice ur life u have a right to lead it in ur own way and I want u to be strong too'. wat will they do? Just kill us? Wat more can they do geet? They can no more bind u in any monopolies so just leave

Geet cudnt refuse her mother's plea she agreed to it and rano made her sleep for a while as she was dead tired crying all night then she had sent her luggage to meera's house without anyone knowing it coz it will be difficult for geet to escape with the luggage she packed her khandani ornaments and also money in the bag for geet.

Later at night channi came to geets room and both of them slowly made their way out through the back door of the house where rano led them to their garden which had a small exit which nobody cares to look at in their house. Rano bid final bye''. Geet hugged her mother tight kissed her madly bt rano pushed her begging to leave soon with a stone heart geet left and jugnu who was ready for both of them to arrive rescued them and all the three reached the railway station where meera was waiting for geet she was getting worried coz the train has arrived already and is ready to leave anytime. Finding geet meera sighed in relief and both of them boarded the train. Geet thanked jugnu maama and channi for helping her' jugnu handed her cell phone which was given to her by her mother.. she hugged the phone tightly listening to the word mother. Train started and soon jugnu and channi were out of the sight of geet.. both of them settled themselves when geet's mother called her.

Rano: kaisa hai mera bacha? Geet did not say anything bt started crying even more '..rano didn't know how to console her daughter.

Rano: geet rona mat beta main hoon tere saath tu bas apna khayal rakhna aur yeh phone maine rone ke liye nahi diya tu mujhe call mat karna main khud karongi warna kisi ko shak ho jayega

Geet: MAMA!!! I LOVE YOU agar wapas jindagi mile toh babji se yehi maangongi ki aap har janam meri mama hi bano kisi aur ki nahi

Rano: haan beta har janam mein tu hi meri beti banegi ab meri baat maan so jaa bacha main wapas phone karongi

With this rano cut the call bt geet is not where to stop her crying. She started missing her mother already so much but soon she she slept weeping while meera started at geet helplessly.

HANDA HAWELI:

Mohinder and arjun reached home late night for the function the next day '.arjun thought of talking to geet as he was missing her like hell coz it had been ages since he saw her bt it was already very late so he thought of giving her a watch so he entered her room and was shocked to core'. geet wasn't in her room just then rano entered geet's room and found arjun' she went near him

Arjun: maa geet kaha hai?

Rano: geet nahi hai

Arjun: matlab kahi aapne geet ko ghar se'

Rano: haan arjun maine geet ko ghar se bhagadiya' I want her to be happy arjun and I can tell this only to u coz I only trust u this time

Arjun: maa u know wat u are talking abt? I mean wat will darji and brij bhai do if they get to know all this

Rano: I know wat will be the consequences and I am ready to face anything arjun I always wanted geet to lead an independent life like u bt that neva happened and now its high time for her to leave this house so I did wat I felt was right I sent her away I know u are shocked bt plz arjun I want u to help me as I already told u I can only trust u no one else I don't want geet to get married to rahul that's it I don't want her to compromise

Arjun: maa I am happy for my gudiya still I am scared u know wat brij bhai and darji can do

Rano: I know arjun wat they can do bt right now listen to me and do as I say

Arjun: tell me maa anything for mah sister

Rano handed arjun geet's phone no

Rano: this is her number arjun I want u to keep this with u call her everyday and make sure that she is safe and sound I will not be able to call her all the time coz once everyone gets to know that geet left the house they'll doubt me and yes ull not tell this to ur papa u know once he knows this knowingly or unknowingly he can spill the beans so plz arjun this wud be a secret between us aur kal chahe koi bhi kitna bhi mujhe bhala bura kahe ull not react '.this is wat I want u to do I am doing all this to save geet I don't want geet to become another raji will u do this to me?

Arjun: maa plz don't request me so much u know how much I love geet trust me ill make sure that ill keep a track abt her whereabouts and howabouts and will neva say anything to papa even I don't want this marriage to happen maa she is just 18 and I just cant see my sister getting married at such tender age trust me on this.

Rano: thanks beta I cudnt save raji neither I cud save brij from the evil clutches bt I am happy for u and geet.

Early in the mrng all the arrangements for the engagement cermony kick started that is wen the whole family realised that geet left the house''.. brij and darji were shocked they didn't know wat to do. Mohinder was left shattered he seriously wanted geet to get married to rahul. But then he doubted rano he went to her to room question her abt geet

Mohinder: rano geet kaha hai?

Rano: mujhe nahi pata

Mohinder: I can make out it was u who has helped geet's escape tell me rano where did u send geet?

Rano: I donno

By now both darji and brij reached rano and overheard mohinder and rano's talk ' darji dragged rano out of them room and slapped her tight

Darji: bolo sach bolo where is geet?

Rano: I donno

Darji: do u have any idea as to wat u did? Geet left the house wat will ppl think abt us? How cud u do this? Tell me where is geet? With this darji started slapping rano again and again

Mohinder cudnt tolerate anymore he came in between rano,darji and stopped him this was wen darji lost his last bit of control

Darji: so my guess goes right u left the house bcoz of raji's death in the pretence of checking out the work in gujrat

Mohinder: right papaji that is the reason I left the house bt wat u are doing is just immoral u cant just beat up rano like this its wrong and I will not allow u to do this I am taking rano and arjun with me coz I cant tolerate anymore.. I am dying everyday with the guilt of not saving my daughter ill atleast save my wife and children now

Darji: how dare u raise ur voice and how dare u go against me? Brij go lock ur maa in geet's room make sure she doesn't step out of the house I know she does know abt geet's track

Mohinder: no papji u cant do this i just cant agree to this

Darji: u lost ur right to speak the moment u raised ur voice against my decision and if u still want to take ur wife with u yes u can take her dead body if u wish this go ahead

Mohinder: papji don't do this plz

Darji: yes I can!!! I can do anything dare u raise ur voice again just leave the house main bhi dekhta hoon mere ghar ka izzat uchaal ke geet kaha tak bhagegi aur jab tak geet nahi mil jaati rano uss kamre mein rahegi koi tension mat lena usse koi kuch nahi karega coz she knows where geet is so she will be safe

Arjun who was witnessing all this had nothing to say he was looking at his mother helplessly bt rano indicated him not to say anything assuring him that she will be safe.

Arjun(st): maa I promise my sister will be safe and happy don't worry I know wat is going on ur mind not saving raji didi was my fault too I cudnt do anything then bt now I am grown up enuf to take care of my gudiya.. I also understand y u did not allow me to say anything to papaji once if he gets to know the truth abt geet it will make easy for darji and brij to reach her as papji will definitely try to meet her.

Arjun and mohinder left the house as they were bonded with shackles of helplessness.

Mohinder: this is the reason for me arjun I was worried abt their safety I knew something of this sort will happen if I speak against papji I just hope rano and geet will be fine'. beta u are my only hope make sure that rano and geet are safe ill not ask u abt geet coz I know rano told u abt geet'. I lost my right the day I backed off from geet's life in my guilt only rano has complete rights on her bt plz have a check on geet and also rano coz papaji will not allow me to talk to rano bt do tell me if things go out of control

Arjun: I know papa don't worry will tell u if things go wrong.

precap: none coz ill update soon

i donno how many of u are liking my updates and yes wanna say this maan's entry will be after the next update and i am sure ull like it plz tell me if arent liking the pace of the story or anything else will mould the stroy according to u and yes plot will be the same

@maneetlover1 i have replied u on pg 16 sis 🤗

thanks to @radha.nandini she has shared my story's link on fb as i don have it coz i dont like using fb for reasons anyways plz like and comment that will help me to write more this sunday i have an other exam bt will sure try to update if i get enuf likes and a request to the silent readers atleast hit the like button its the only way for me to know that u are liking the story plz😭


previous part: part3

next part: part5

Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
darji is a 🤬 person
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Edited by dolly10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hate this darji chi gaaliya bhi kam hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Harika that was an amazing update...I loved it!!
I'm happy that Rano took a very daring step by sending Geet out of the hell ,she wants Geet to be independent and strong!!
I can't even understand the mentality of people like Daarji!! Who gave him the right to slap and beat the women of the house! 😕
Brij was told to lock his own mother ?? That's disgusting!!🤢
Oh So finally Geet's dad spoke something!!
I'm sure these people will surely trace out Geet very soon!
Continue soon!!
All the best for your Exams!!

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update !! waiting for maan's entry 😳 !
well written 😳😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update di
thankgod rano sent geet away frm that hell bt iam scared as daarji may trace her whch i dnt wish to hapn..
And how cheapu geet's daarji is how rediculous he is hw can he slap women..chi shame on hm..i hate hm bt ths is hapng in reality n many r there like daarji..they r just wild animals who r treatng women brutally n makng them slaves..they dnt even realise that women is the one who bring such idiots to ths world..
And wah brij was told to lock hs mom kese insaan hai..wat a disgustng family geet hav n thankgod finally spoke out smethng..n lovd jugnu mama n chani they helpd geet a lot..
Waitng 4 next part di
update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
NAHIII
GEET ki Shaddi woh bhi KISI or se ..NAHIII
yeh kya kiya ???
AAB GEET MEHRA..Grrr...
GEET ki sath sirf Khurna hona acahiye
yaar tum to shayed mujhe mar hi daloge
calo abhi abhi mila to jakar sare update pad leti hoon
plz Save MY MAANEET
scaring prolouge
All the best for new FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.. hats off to Rano maa.. Darji acts r so evil.. no doubt Geet scares of him & his bhai brij

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahhh.. I know its really sad that MAANEET is seperated but somewhere i am feeling good that the Marriage is a DRAMA
superb update👏

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