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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a fab update...

Lovely and happy ending...

Family got together after a long span ... Loved this completely
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Posted: 12 years ago
Will be updating epilogue By Evening... 😃😃
The only part of my favorite FF and my first FF...
Epilogue will be super long... 😊
wait for it... going for exam will be back in the evening and will post the epilogue 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

Will be updating epilogue By Evening... 😃😃
The only part of my favorite FF and my first FF...
Epilogue will be super long... 😊
wait for it... going for exam will be back in the evening and will post the epilogue 😃😃


wil be waitng darling:-)
u rock in exam i knw
as i said i bribed god lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
Epilogue (A)



Maan-geet, karthik-shanti are back from their honeymoon. Maan again joined office and its almost 3 months, maan didn't got to office. So much work is there for him. And on top of that when maan goes to office maanvi use to cry for him. Sometimes she use to go to office to meet her dada. Most probably everyday maan, geet and their princess have lunch together.

Days passed, now maanvi is 3 years old. Today maan's and maanvi's birthday. Whole KM is busy decorating and arranging every thing for the princess birthday. Maan didn't celebrate maanvi's birthday for 2 years so this year there is a huge celebration. Maan pampered his princess to the core. Its 12'o clock, maan and geet wished maanvi but our princess is sleeping.

Happy birthday princess wished both maan and geet and kissed her forehead. Maanvi smiled in her sleep and held maan's hand tight. Maan smiled and hugged her close to his heart. Geet smiled at them. Geet went close to maan and kissed his cheek.

Happy Birthday maan wished geet.

Maan smiled and kissed her cheek and thanked her.

Where is my gift geet? Asked maan.

Geet made a sad face and told you have to wait for that jaan.

No no I want to see it now told maan stubbornly.

Its not possible maan told geet.

Why?? Pouted maan. Geet rested her head on maan's shoulder and told some one will come to play with mannu.

No one can play with mannu other than me told maan possessively.

But you will be happy maan told geet.

No way geet told maan stubbornly. Geet smiled and asked you wont allow your son to play with his sister?

Who is my son??? Asked maan and thought for a second. Geet what you told come again?? Asked maan smiling widely understanding what geet is saying.

Geet blushed and nodded in a no.

Geet look at me told maan and geet looked at him shyly.

Really geet?? Asked maan cupping her face. geet nodded for a yes and blushed. Omg.. geet I am very very happy. Thanku so much geet. This is the best gift I love you geet told maan and hugged geet tight. Geet too hugged him. Tears rolled down their cheeks. They are so happy, maan is over the moon. Maan and geet slept hugging each other happily.

Next day morning:

Maan got up and saw maanvi and geet are sleeping cuddling in each other. He smiled and and kissed their forehead. He caressed geet stomach and wished the kid too good morning baby. He went to have shower. When he came out geet stirred a little and slowly opened her eyes. He saw maan and smiled.

Good morning maan wished geet. Maan came near geet and kissed her forehead and smiled. Geet got up and sat on the bed. She pecked maan's lips and wished him happy birthday. Maan asked her get ready. Geet nodded and got up. He looked at his princess who is still sleeping and kissed her forehead. She stirred a little and opened her eyes. Maan smiled at her, she smiled widely and called him.

Dada'

Maan took her in his arms and wished her Happy Birthday baby'


Maavni smiled widely and kissed his cheek. He hugged her close. His princess, his baby.

Princess a small brother or sister of you is coming soon told maan happily.

Maanvi looked at him and asked sachiii.

Yes princess told maan.

I want to see him now told maanvi making baby face.

Maan smiled and told its not possible now princess after few months you can see him.

Maanvi is very happy. Her cute little brother will be coming soon. Though she is just 3 years but she is very understanding. Geet came out and smiled at them. Maan made maanvi ready and all the 3 went down to see their family is waiting for them. When they saw maan and maanvi wished them.

Maanvi is very happy and excited seeing all of them wishing her and giving her toys. Vijaya and Pooja made all favorite dishes of maan and maanvi. Later in the evening they arranged a huge party and maan and maanvi together cut the cake. Maan took maanvi in his arms who is not looking less than angel in her while frock. Maan wore black suit looking dashing and geet is wearing a cream color saree.



All of them enjoyed the party and whole family is there for dinner. All of them settled for dinner when maan got up. All of them looked at him confused.

I have a good news for you all told maan. Geet blushed.

A new member is coming in our family told maan and looked lovingly towards geet. Main phir se papa banne wala hu told maan.

All the family members are happy and hugged geet and maan. From that day no one allowed geet to do work. Karthik, vinod and shilpa are doctors so they took care of everything. Some times maanvi, rupa and sanjay (vinod's 1 year old son) sit with geet and talk to baby. Geet use to enjoy their cute little talks.

Days are passing and maan took care of geet and pampered her a lot. He is always with geet, she felt so blessed to have maan in her life. Geet's mood swings, her cravings at night and her ziddi, everything is fulfilled by maan and vinod.

9 months passed very soon, geet is in the labour room and maan is outside all tensed. Seeing maan so tensed maanvi started to cry. Maan took her in his arms and consoled her even himself. When they saw shilpa coming out of labour room. She smiled widely at maan and told congratulations maan, it's a baby boy.

Maan smiled widely and maanvi asked mami, my brother.

Shilpa nodded and maanvi asked I want to see him.

Can we meet geet, bhabhi? Asked maan.

Sure go maan, she is waiting for you told shilpa.

Maan with maanvi rushed inside and here outside all had tears in their eyes seeing their family happy again. Sudha hugged yash and told my geet is happy yash. I am so happy for her. vinod stood in front of the god's idol and holded his hands.

Babaji, aapko laakh laakh shukriya. My geet, my gudiya is happy with her family. Isse jyada aur kuch nahi chahiye. Always keep my geet happy babaji, main uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu. Shilpa is in tears hearing vinod. She never saw him this happy.

Maan and maanvi entered inside and saw geet is sleeping and her face is pale yet glowing. They both went near the bed and saw a cute baby. Maanvi went close to him and touched his cheek. Awww dada, he is so small smiled maanvi.

Seeing his son maan had tears in his eyes. He don't know how maanvi looked at that time and he was not there to take her in his arms. But all the pain vanished when he saw his son. Geet slowly opened her eyes to see maan and maanvi smiling at their son and maanvi is holding her brother's hand. And Jr. MSK is smiling at her.

Jr. MSK told geet and smiled. Maan sat beside geet and maanvi in the middle. They 3 took Jr. MSK in their arms at a time. Now their family is full. Happy tears rolled down their cheeks where as maanvi is smiling at her little brother.


After some time shilpa shifted geet to ward and all of them came to see the baby and geet. Jr. MSK's nana, nani, dada and dadi are not ready to leave him. Maanvi, rupa and sanjay are waiting for the little kid to play with them.

The next day geet got discharged and came back to KM. They named Jr. MSK as ARMAAN MAAN SINGH KHURANA. After an year shanti delivered twins Vijay Karthik Singh Khurana and Pari Karthik Singh Khurana.


GO TO NEXT PAGE FOR PART B OF EPILOGUE


Edited by jyothikrish - 12 years ago
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Epilogue (B)



After 22 years:

That day KM is very silent Pooja, Anand, Rishab and Vijaya are in the to see the drama which is about to begin in few minutes. A 21 years girl came to the hall angrily. She looked angrily at her grand parents and they are trying very hard to suppress their laugh.

Girl (st): Maan bade papa and Armaan bro what you did is not right, see what will happen now and smiled evilly at her super duper master plan.

That girl took her mobile and dialed a number. The person in the other side lifted the call.

Yes pari.. is there anything urgent, I am in a meeting now came from other side.

MAANVI di, where are you? Maan bade papa is not well, but also he went to office told pari and smiled widely at her grand parents.

All the 4 who are sitting there are shocked. Pooja (st): maan, you are gone.

WHAT?? Dad is not well what happened pari? Wait I am coming now told maanvi and cut the call. Maanvi is now working in KT. She is in other place for meeting which is 2 hours away from delhi.

Maanvi immediately cancelled the meeting and rushed to KT. The same attitude of maan when she is in office but sweet as geet.

Pari what you did?? Asked rishab.

Oh come on dadaji maan papa deserves this. He spoiled my whole plan told pari making baby face.

Here in KT, geet, maan, armaan and adi are discussing about a project. And maanvi reached KT. She rushed to maan's cabin and opened the door without knocking. She is hell angry on maan, what is the need of coming to office when he is not well. And she cant tolerate anything happen to her dad.

Dad… shouted maanvi.

Maan looked up thinking why she is angry. Mannu is everything alright? Why you are angry beta? Asked maan.

Di, did anyone tell you something. Tell me I wont leave them asked armaan angrily.

Armaan, I didn't expect this from you. When dad is not feeling well then why you allowed him to come to office. Mama even you too. For god sake we are here to work. Didn't we tell you that to take rest ? asked maanvi angrily.

Maan and Geet looked at each other confused.

Maanvi beta your dad is absolutely fine told geet.

When it comes to maan, maanvi is sure geet wont lie. Then why pari told her like that.

Then why did pari called me and told you are not feeling well asked maanvi.

Then they heard the giggling sound from back. They all turned towards door to see a smiling pari. She came inside the cabin and told I am sorry maanvi di maine aapko jhoot bola. Di aap hi bolo, mujhe mere friends ke saath tour par jaana hain, this armaan bro and maan papa spoiled dad's mind. He told me not to go. Pls di atleast you tell them to send me to tour told pari making baby face.

Pari… shouted armaan and twisted her ears.

Veerji pls leave my ear its paining told pari.

Aha veerji, bro wow great. Agar tumko kuch chahiye tho veerji and bro, nahi tho yeh armaan idar aao teased armaan.

Pari made a baby face and looked at maanvi, who is giving her angry glares. She held her ears and told sorry di. Pari, karthik and shanti's daughter, the prankstar and very pampered girl. Maanvi and armaan loves her to the core and vijay never leaves a chance to tease her.

Maanvi went and side hugged maan. Pari beta, its my decision not dad's told maanvi. Pari made a grumpy face and told no one loves me.

Maan smiled at her antics and asked don't you want to be a part of your di's engagement?

Engagement??? Asked pari. Maanvi blushed.

Yes my dear, after one week your maanvi di's engagement told geet. Panditji called and finalized the date told maan. Pari jumped in joy and hugged maanvi tight.

Wow wow… congrats di, I am so happy… and I am sorry too for lying told pari.

Maanvi smiled and caressed her cheek. Shall we go home? Asked maanvi. Pari nodded and armaan, maanvi and pari left from there. Even adi too left from there as the meeting is completed. Only maan and geet are left in the cabin.

They both had tears in their eyes. Geet.. called maan.

Hmmm..

Hamari maanvi ki shaadi honewala hain told maan.

Geet hugged maan and cried. How can we live without her maan. You get worried if she is out for 1 day, then after marriage how??

Yeh tho duniya ka niyam hain geet, beti ko apne ghar jaana hi padega na told maan.

Here maanvi thought of having lunch with maan and geet and then go home. So they 3 came towards the maan's cabin and heard their talks.

That's why I told you I don't want any marriage told maanvi with tears. Pari and armaan hugged from either side. They broke the hug and turned towards maanvi. Maanvi came and hugged maan.

Dad mujhe kahi nahi jaana, mujhe yeh shaadi nahi karni cried maanvi.

Maan is having very hard time to control his tears. He cupped maanvi's face and told no dear, we want to see you happy in your life. How can we come in the middle of your happiness.

I am happy with you dad told maanvi.

Maan kissed her forehead and told we love you dear, and we will be in the same city. So don't worry we will be never away from you.

Oh come on stop this all emotional talks I am hungry told pari to change the atmosphere. Maan came towards pari and wiped her tears. Pari hugged maan.

Later they all had lunch in a restaurant. They even called Karthik, Shanti and vijay. They enjoyed their lunch and armaan told his shanti masi about pari's prank she played in the noon. Shanti scolded her. Pari fought with armaan asking him why he told to maa. Their fights are never ending.

That day night maan and maanvi are playing tennis. They are tired and sat near the pool. Maanvi rested her head on his shoulder.

Dad..

Hmmm…

I am sorry for afternoon..

Maan smiled and told its ok dear. You know when you entered in the cabin I remembered how you entered in my cabin in Banglore branch for the first time. You were taking baby steps and trying to reach me. And when you saw me you stopped crying. I still remember the day I saw you my princess.

Maanvi listened to maan and told from that day onwards I never left you dad. Mama told my first word was dad.

Maan nodded and told yes, it was your first word. You don't know how happy I was at that time. And that day I promised myself I will always keep you happy whatever may happen in our life. I guess I am successful in that.

You are the best dad in the world. I am very lucky told maanvi.

Maan smiled heartily and they continued talking for some more time. After an hour or so they retired to their respective rooms. When maan entered the room he saw armaan and geet are playing chess.

Hey, you are playing at this hour? Asked maan.

Ha, when you father and daughter are talking what should we do. So we are playing told armaan.

Maan nodded his head and told now sleep please.

Dad, whom you love more di or me asked armaan making maan irritated.

Armaan dude, you both are my life. Both are equal to me told maan.

Armaan smiled and told I know dad just kidding.

Mama, good night and he kissed her cheek and left to his room.

Maan smiled at geet and rested his head on her lap. She caressed his hair looking at him lovingly. She kissed his forehead and told maan you know what you are the best father in this world.

Maan smiled and told and you are the best mother.

What I am is because of you maan told geet and kissed his forehead.

Tum aaj kal bohot emotional ho rahi ho and cry baby told maan and chuckled.

Geet made a face and turned away her face. You love to irritate me na.

Nai jaan I love you told maan and got up. Before geet reply maan pinned her to the bed and kissed her lips. He left her after some time.

Maan, sharam karo tumari beti ki shaadi hona wali hain told geet.

So what?? You know i look hot and handsome at this age too. Even now girls will droll over me told maan raising his collar.

Stop dreaming and sleep, its getting late told geet.

Maan smiled and they slept hugging each other.

Finally the day has come, here maan is taking care of all the arrangements and maanvi is getting ready. Geet is in kitchen asking about the food arrangements. She came out and saw maan still not ready.

Maan first you go and get ready told geet.

Just 5 min geet told maan.

Go maan, I will take care told geet. Maan nodded and came close to her. he kissed her cheek and told you are looking sexy in this saree.

Papa and mama stop your romance in public told pari. They immediately parted and pari gave a teasing smile.

Tum hamesha kyun galat time par aati ho? Asked maan.

Aap kyun hamesha public mein romance karte ho? Asked pari.

Meri biwi meri marzi told maan.

You both stop now told geet and ran from there all shy. Maan too left from there and got ready. Pari, Armaan and vijay got busy in preparations. Shanti, sudha are in maanvi's room doing makeup for her.

You are looking just like your mama told sudha and kissed her forehead.

Badi mama where is rupa di and jiju?? Asked maanvi.

I am here darling told rupa and came in. maanvi hugged her and smiled widely.

Jiju?? Asked maanvi.

He is talking with armaan and vijay told rupa.

Later the guests started arriving and the engagement took place and maanvi and her fianc Prithvi exchanged rings. They took blessings from the elders. And the marriage date is fixed after a month.

Maan, Armaan and Geet pampered maanvi to the core, and made arrangements for the marriage. Days passed and Maanvi got married to Prithvi, the wedding was so grand. The marriage of the princess of Khurana family. The bidaai was so emotional. Maanvi hugged maan and geet and cried her heart out. It was so emotional whole family is in tears. The girl who never left her parents even for a second is going to her family now. Pari, Vijay and Armaan stood there in the garden not able to see their sister going away from them.

Maan wiped maanvi's tears and blessed her. Be happy my princess. He turned to Prithvi and told prithvi keep my princess happy, I should not see tears in her eyes. She is very precious to us.

Agar use kuch galti hogayi tho very sorry beta told geet caressing her hair.

Aunty, uncle I promise I will take care of maanvi, she is my world told prithvi. And they left from there. Armaan, vijay and pari too bid good bye to her and retired to their rooms.

In maneet's room:

They both lied on the bed. Geet rested her head on maan's chest.

I am very happy maan, our maanvi is very happy told geet.

Yes geet, she got her life partner who will take care of her told maan.

Just like you told geet and kissed his cheek. Maan hugged geet tight and the both slept peacefully.

And they lived a happy life ever after with their children and grand children.

~~ THE END ~~

Hiii friends this is the epilogue of my first FF DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER. Though I am sad that it ended but I am very happy for your love and support through out the story.I dont know how the epilogue turned out.. i tried something different... 😃

Pls like and comment for the last time of this FF. Give me your comments and likes and tell me what you most liked in this FF.

Love u all…

Jyothi.


Edited by jyothikrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mindblowing epilouge and it literelly made me cry hats off to u jyoti
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this is such a cute epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago

wonderful epilogue

will surely miss DBUC

thanx for writing an awesome story 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
it armaan born maanvi marriage



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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome update darling..
i really had tears in my eyes sacchi😭
awww geet was pregnant n that was best for maan really😃 he could enjoy all moments which he missed...iam so happy for them..
the way he was taking care of her mood swings was awww😊
finally ami i mean armaan singh khurana came in to this world..

hayeee kya family haichooo chweet na




hawww mannu papa ki princess badi bhi hogayi n angry toh bilkul papa ki tarah
she is papa's princess n ami maa ka laadla hayee soo cute n sweet family

pari u shaitan apni trip ke liye itna natak😆 par ye lo khud bade papa ne red signal diya trip ke liye😆

ami n pari's fight was chooo cute😃
haila mannu ki shaadi😲kitni badi hogayi maanvi sacchi😛
maan loves pari a lot n dont want to go away from her...
sach yar kyun girls ko jaana padtha hai hamesha😭
maan n maanvi's talk was so heart touching...maanu loves his mannu a lot..
ha ha maaneet public romance😆ye pari toh shaitaan hai sacchi but choo cute😛
finally wo moment aa hi gayi n all ended well..
i so loved it darling...aur bada hota😳koi nai adjust karliya mein ne😆
love u soo much for awesome story darling..muahhhs
love u loads🤗

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