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Posted: 13 years ago
i really didnt want it to come to an end lool
i enjoyed every single part of it!!
congrats!! and keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear loved it so much though i was leaving the comments as short want to give the long comment now becoz u r worth it...first of all my apologies for not giving long comments and not commenting for some parts.Now coming to all the parts u've shown the couples love dear though they were abt to be divorced but they realised their love at last and they came back to their normal life with love and trust on each other.Loved the way u showed and portrayed the monlogues of maan and geet when they were in the verge of seperation.But they moved one and made a beautiful family for themselves.And loved the epilogue dear u've shown that one man can do nothing if his family will not be there for his support.It is a beautiful story u've given us and am happy to hear that u got inspiration from some authors story was s fabulous.Dear be writing the stories like this and am sure u'll bcome the author too...loved it dear..and pls a request..start another story after ur exams am sure u'll get the likes and appreciation so much.Lastly awesome,fantabulous,mindblowing...and not getting the praises now but thos good praises r for u only dear...👏
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

loved the epilogue...

loved geets pov when she tells maan y she forgives him...

congrats for this awesome ff...

all the best for ur future works...



thanx a ton!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Shai..

i really didnt want it to come to an end lool

i enjoyed every single part of it!!
congrats!! and keep up the good work 👏


thanx..
bt dint wanna drag it too much!!
glad u liked it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

awesome update dear loved it so much though i was leaving the comments as short want to give the long comment now becoz u r worth it...first of all my apologies for not giving long comments and not commenting for some parts.Now coming to all the parts u've shown the couples love dear though they were abt to be divorced but they realised their love at last and they came back to their normal life with love and trust on each other.Loved the way u showed and portrayed the monlogues of maan and geet when they were in the verge of seperation.But they moved one and made a beautiful family for themselves.And loved the epilogue dear u've shown that one man can do nothing if his family will not be there for his support.It is a beautiful story u've given us and am happy to hear that u got inspiration from some authors story was s fabulous.Dear be writing the stories like this and am sure u'll bcome the author too...loved it dear..and pls a request..start another story after ur exams am sure u'll get the likes and appreciation so much.Lastly awesome,fantabulous,mindblowing...and not getting the praises now but thos good praises r for u only dear...👏



thank u so much..
it feels grt to see a read a compliment like this..
makes my day!! m so over whelmed reading ur response tht i really dont know wht to say!!
dont know whthr i ll write smthng again or nor bt m truly grateful for all d encouragement i ve receivd!!!
n i m a big fan of ur ffs esp do sapne n jeevan sangini!!
nywaz thnx once again n tc!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
read all the 34 and epi in one go. excellent ff. superb writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sridevi_n

read all the 34 and epi in one go. excellent ff. superb writing.


thanx
glad u liked it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I liked the initial built up of the story but I was not happy with the epilouge that geet forgave maan he deserved punishment but anyways all is well that ends well but I am disappointed with the ending
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya291188

I liked the initial built up of the story but I was not happy with the epilouge that geet forgave maan he deserved punishment but anyways all is well that ends well but I am disappointed with the ending


i respect ur views
bt i think dey already suffered enuf even though 'twas maan's mistake though nt entirely..
gettin an ego in n settling scores or moving on.. smhw i think love aint abt it
dey loved each odr n still do..
thts y he got another chance!!
n thts hw geet was.. n is.. she put love b4 ego alwaz whn it came to her loved ones!!

a different end. sorry cudnt perceive it ny odr way..
wht wud u hv done?
let geet move on widout maan
or make him suffer n mk him realise his folly in sm harsh way?
or smthng else?

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Posted: 13 years ago
Owsumestic update yaar sorry for being such a late commer 😭 was deadly stuck with studies and family
read whole in one go
and must say the fab job it is luvd it too core 😳
Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago

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