romancing..my wife!! completed!

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change12

@change12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

i like the story but some how i feel that in the end story was too fast and geet forgave maan too quick.

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nats0101

@nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: t_areeb
nice work

hope to see you soon with your new work

thnx

glad u liked it

new work? .. lets c!!

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nats0101

@nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: awesomepooja
Hey nuts,
fantastic dear...
Come soon wid another story...

thanx

glad u liked dis one

anthr one.. no promises.. lets c,,

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

Awesome update...finally they are together...lovely..

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nats0101

@nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: change12
i like the story but some how i feel that in the end story was too fast and geet forgave maan too quick.

abrupt.. a bit.. yes

bt dey had already suffered so long for dis

nw wht geet had 2 decide was whthr she cud give maan a second chance..

considering d way she is.. n tht fact tht she nvr doubted his love.. n his behavior in helpin dem out alwaz even wen he dint know d truth probably helped tilt d balance in his favor!!

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nats0101

@nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: bubblygal1711
Awesome update...finally they are together...lovely..

thanx

glad u liked it!!😃

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FanDeep

@Fandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

Loved this ending,i must say maaneet flavour of u is fantastic.i hope u will pen down another woderful maaneet ff in near future.

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nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: Fandeep
Loved this ending,i must say maaneet flavour of u is fantastic.i hope u will pen down another woderful maaneet ff in near future.

thanx

glad u liked it

i aint free till mid aug.. aftr tht.. lets c..!!