**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #4 IMP NOTE on page 151 - Page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago
varshaaa i'll kill u now😡
u updated sooo much
n jnever bothered to pm me
goshh...i had missed sooo many parts!!!

and now am really not liking geet's childishness
kuch zyada hi ho rha h yaar
please do sumthing and make her more mature and understanding!!!!
yeah geet's innocence is what appeals him the most agreed...but innocense ke saath saath thodi si maturity bhi chahiye dun u think???
at sum points i am not at all liking this geet
hope u dun mind yaar but i want u to think on these lines😳


but loved all the parts..
their 1st kiss..their close moments
awesum!!!!
nxt time dun forget to pm me as i rely on that!!!!
warna teri khair nahi.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

varshaaa i'll kill u now😡
u updated sooo much
n jnever bothered to pm me
goshh...i had missed sooo many parts!!!

and now am really not liking geet's childishness
kuch zyada hi ho rha h yaar
please do sumthing and make her more mature and understanding!!!!
yeah geet's innocence is what appeals him the most agreed...but innocense ke saath saath thodi si maturity bhi chahiye dun u think???
at sum points i am not at all liking this geet
hope u dun mind yaar but i want u to think on these lines😳


but loved all the parts..
their 1st kiss..their close moments
awesum!!!!
nxt time dun forget to pm me as i rely on that!!!!
warna teri khair nahi.
😈

ohhh sorry...i thought u r busy n dats y u r not reading itOuch...n u where not in my buddies list so it didnt stuck me dat i dont send u pms😲... i am sorry...becoz of me u missed so many parts😭 ... ok now for update...i know geet's childishness is smtimes irritatingAngry...but its just this phase of her life...after few parts she wont be like this...she is more pampered n dats y she behaves this way...but after few twists her character will definately change n will be more mature... so for few updates u have to bear her dis way😆... n maine tujhe buddies request bheji hai...n will pm u after this...n teri bhi galati hai tune bhi mujhe kabhi nahi bataya ki i dont pm u...pehale hi bata deti toh itna late nahi hota na...so aadhi galati teri bhi hai😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear😃
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thank u so much sweeties for all the likes and comments😃

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FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART-25
(pls dont throw jootis n chappals at me after reading this)

Morning sunrays kissed her cheeks as she opened her droopy eyes...smiling welcoming this new day...she yawned sitting up, feeling sleepy again...but then took hold of her temptation as she didn't wanted to be late for her usual breakfast in khurana mansion...she had a quick shower and got ready in her pink suit...keeping her hair open with minimal make up...looking angelically beautiful...she took her bag and dashed out of her room...her parents where downstairs...she hurriedly bid them good bye saying she will have her breakfast at KM...and will be back after college...but suddenly rano stopped her...saying...

"geet kal ki packing kar li tune"

"nahi mumma...sorry" geet bit her tounge...making a baby face...to which rano nodded her head, like she expected this only...

"mumma please aap kar do na" she asked cutely...

"geet mai kar toh dungi...lekin bhagwan hi jane tu waha akeli rahegi kaise...sabko pagal kar degi...lekin yaad rakh geet no one will there to pamper you...toh soch le jana hai ki nahi" rano warned her...

"papaji dekho na maa ko, mujhe daant rahi hai" she cribbed...hugging her dad from back...

"rano jane do usse...kuch din waha reh legi toh mann behal jayega...aakhir who bhi toh uske apne hi hai" mohinder tried patching up...

"aap samjh nahi rahe ho...still she behaves like a small child...aur waha kaun usake nakhare sahega"

geet looked at her mom from corner of her eyes...pouting angrily...

"she will take care of herself...tum chinta kyu karti ho...aur waha beeji hai na...woh rakh legi iska khayal" mohinder patted geet's head asking her,

"tu rakh legi na khud ka khayal????"

"ofcourse papaji...ab mai badi ho gayi hu...aur bas 5 din ki toh baat hai" geet said it confidently...as rano looked away...

mohinder stood up and hugged rano sideways, as geet looked at them cutely with a teasing smile...seeing her father cutely hugging her mom...

"bas ek hafte ki baat hai rano jane de usse...brij ki shadi hai...dekhake aa jayegi"

"mujhe chinta ho rahi hai iski" rano looked away...as tears formed in her eyes...mohinder hugged, patting her back...

"kis baat ki chinta...hamari geet haste hue jayegi aur waise hi wapas aa jayegi...hai na geet"

geet nodded her head on the verge of crying...as tears started feeling up her hazels...she ran hugged her parents...

"aap kaho toh mai nahi jaungi mumma" she cried...as rano instantly hugged her...caressing her back...

"sshhh bache...aise rote nahi...tujhe brij ki shadi dekhani hai na" rano said breaking the hug, cupping her face...

"umm" she nodded her head...

"ok toh jarur ja...lekin waha koi shaitani ya zidd mat karna" rano said pulling her cheeks...

geet smiled lightly nodding her head in no...

"chal ab ja...waha KM mai sab tera wait kar rahe honge"

geet's eyes grew big, as she looked at the time...

"uffo mumma aapne mujhe late kar diya" she cribbed, kissing rano's cheeks and hugging her dad. she moved out...

Today khurana mansion was in complete silence zone, everyone present on dinning table aet there breakfast in silence, as they knew maan was angry on geet and annie, after seeing their college cat fight...poor annie looked down scared shivering, as NT pressed her hand in her palm...asking her to calmdown, nothing will happen...annie looked up shivering, on the verge of crying...

"bhai...I am sorry" she said looking at maan...as maan didn't bother to even look at her...this was the nineth time she was seeking his forgiveness...but maan was admant this time...how could he tolerate such stupid behaviour from her very own sister and his would be wife...this was high time for them to understand khuarana's reputation...

"maan just forgive her...this is the nineth time she is saying sorry to you" dadi said calming him...

"dadi have you seen the pictures...what this two creatures where doing in it...my god I thought they are grown up's...and here look at them fighting like seven year olds...this is highly shameful dadi" he sighed with immense anger...

"maan calm down...ho jata hai...they are college going kids...samjh jayenge...aage aisa kuch nahi hoga"

"par dadi"

"par var kuch nahi maan...aap geet aur annie ko kuch nahi kahenge"

"dadi aapne hi inhe sar chadhaya hai"

"aap jo bhi samjh lijiye maan...par hum apni bachiyo ko aise daree hue nahi dekh sakte"

This is when geet entered in the mansion...chirpily saying good morning to everyone...then looked at annie, twisting her lips, giving her cute glare she went and sat beside maan...smiling at him...to which maan ignored making blank face..."is something wrong or is he angry" she thought...then looked at everyone, as they loked normal...she sighed, shrugging the thought of her mind...

nakul served everybody parathas and other dishes...as geet took the bite of her paratha...then leaned close to maan's ear...

"suniye...your paratha was more yummy then this one...mujhe woh chahiye" she said it blushing, remembering their intimate moments...while maan looked at her raising his eye brow, melting on his anger...he looked at her shying and then at everybody who were eyeing their hush hush talks...

"geet chup chap breakfast khatam karo" he ordered sternly...as geet pouted still looking at his lips...

maan followed her gaze and found her staring at his lips...he looked away as slight blush formed on his cheeks...he abruptly moved his hand to grab the hot coffee mug which nakul has just kept...and unknowningly burned his fingers as he dipped it, in that hot coffee...

"ahhhaaa" he screamed...and geet took hold of his hand, blowing her warm breath on it...

"maan sambhalke...aapka dhyan kaha rehta hai" dadi asked concernly...

and this made geet look at him teasingly, as she knew only she occupied his thoughts...

"aap mere baare mai soch rahe the na" she grinned foolishly...

to which maan looked away nodding his head...thinking kaha fas gaya....he removed his hand from her's...and started finishing his breakfast, attending some call...geet pouted and looked other way as dadi asked her...

"geet kaisi ho beta...kal tum aayi nahi yaha"

"woh dadi...mai inke wajah se nahi aa saki"

"kyu maan veer ji ne kya kiya" naintara asked...as maan got alerted, knowing she will blabber now everything...

"bhabi woh hamara jhaga..." maan immediatedly took hold of her hand, pressing it tightly, eyeing her not to speak anything...but poor geet didn't got his hint...and loudly said...

"haath chodiye na mera...its hurting" she cribbed...

everybody looked at them first with shock and then gave them teasing look, as geet tried to free her hand from his iron grip...maan left her hand but glared her dangerously making her move back on her chair...fearing his worth...then looked other way avoiding his gaze...maan was highly pissed off but didn't wanted to leave her side, as he feared she would give away all there secrets...

Maan kept looking at the newspaper in his hand, pretending to be engrossed in it...but then he heard some giggles and knew geet is upto something...he looked up and found her showing something to naintara...

"bhabi isn't it beautiful...maan bought this for me from london" she shook her feat, making the payal's sound more clear...

"wow geet this looks so beautiful...maan veer ji is so romantic" she sighed looking at dev..."dev you didn't bought any such gifts for me ever" naintara complained...

"let the baby come...i will buy you as many gifts you want" he said caressing naintara's now big 6 months old tummy...to which naintara blushed...

"geet hume bhi dikhayiye maan ne aapke liye kya laya hai" dadi gestured geet to come her side...as geet hurriedly went towards her jumping making the sound of payal more prominent...she was flaunting her payal to everyone, telling them how maan gifted her this, in their date...unknow to the fact that, all this was pushing maan's anger beyond its limits...

He heard his family teasing geet, making her blush...but this time he didn't fell for it...rather her blushing and antics provoked his anger like anything...he abruptly stood from his chair and moved towards geet...he took hold of her hand and literally dragged her upstairs to his room...geet had no clue of his anger...she thought he wants to spend some time alone with her...and so the whole family thought, but they didn't see the frustration written on his face...maan harshly pushed her in his room, closing the door behind...while geet just stood rooted at her spot, blushing, playing with her duppatta...maan looked at her with his eyes spitting fire, then tried to calm himself, closing his eyes...his face showed immense pain as he was trying to subside his anger...but then could not control and he pulled geet harshly towards his chest...holding her firmly from her shoulders...geet loked at him surprised, then shocked as his face showed only immense anger...she got scared and trembled to get out of his grip...wriggling in his arms she tried to look away from him...but maan was admant, he harshly pushed her to the near by wall...glueing her completely between his taut body and wall...
"maan" she whimpered fearing his anger...but he was raged, he pressed himself more harshly on her petite form, making her moan with immense pain...

"maan chodiye mujhe" she cried hitting his chest with her small fist...as he dangerously took hold of her hands pinning them above her head...

"I am fed up of you geet" he gritted his teeth...making her look at him with pain...she trembled and pushed him more vigruously...as she knew he is hell angry and will be harsh on her...she was in panic state...and started crying loudly, asking him to leave her...but maan was in his trance, a state where he forgot that however he tries to hurt her...but at the end he would be the one regretting...and this time a big one...

Suddenly geet screamed loudly...as his nails digged right into her flesh, letting the blood ooze out of it...he still pressed himself closer, holding her hands firm above her head...and slammed his rough lips on her's...

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Precap:- maan forcing geet😲

Hello ji...how are you guys...i know have not replied u yet on my previous update...but still i want to finish with this update...as tommorow i have important meeting in office n wont be able to update...thats y updated both my ff's today itself...will reply all ur comments together after my this update...

i know this part is saddie saddie...but please bear wid me as v r moving towards our first twist, n u will see transition happening in geet's character here after...so if any one have any suggestions or queries, then let me know now itself...

this update is specially dedicated to my dearest frnd NISHITA JAIN...as she has her birthday today...please wish her and also her mom is not well...so please pray for her mom, to get well soon...

now i will back wid last update of DO NOT DISTURB...till them keep commenting...

please press the like button and give me long comments...

love u lots,

varsha😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

bechari geet... itni innocent hai k usse pata hi nehi k kya bolna chahiye aur kya chhupana chahiye...jhalli hai puri k puri...maan ko toh samajhna chahiye na...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
Edited by love2_soma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update !! :) !!

OMG !! The Precap !! 😲 !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update

but omg yeh kya ho gaya😕😕😕😕😕

maan is not in sense and poor geet did not know😕😕😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
update geet innocency and maan anger



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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...😊
Uff Maan ka Gussa...😡
Abhi gussa kr rha hai but baad main regret bhi krega...😕
Plzz continue soon...😊

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