**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #4 IMP NOTE on page 151 - Page 21

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FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART-23

before geet could say anything...they heard a loud knock on the door...geet got scared as she knew it must be her mom...she clutched his shoulder...whispering...

"mom"

"geet puttar darwaza khol...papaji wants his mobile urgently"

both looked at eachother shocked as they heard rano spoke...

"yeh sab aapke wajah se...ab aap hi sought out karo...mom and dad ko bhi toh pata chale unke maan kaise hai...aur iss wakt mere kamre mai kya kar rahe hai" and she left to open her door...leaving a shocked maan behind...

geet looked at her mom standing infront of her as she opened her bedroom door...

"beta kitni der darwaza kholane mai...waha papaji mobile ke liye chilla rahe hai" her mom said while entering her room...

"woh mom inke wajah se mai late ho gayi...dekho kitna pareshan karte..."she turned around saying this...then abruptly stopped looking at her mom's confused looks...

"kinke wajah se beta...yaha toh koi nahi hai" rano said looking around...

geet hurriedly looked here and there checking for him...

"yaha toh the...kaha gaye" she murmed...

"kisse dhoond rahi ho"

"woh mumma unko..."

"geet please beta, stop this childish behaviour of yours...ab badi ho gayi ho tum...kal ko tumhari shadi hogi...maan kya sochega"

rano said concernly as geet made a big O face...she turned around cribbing to her babaji...

"firse daant mujhe hi mili...babaji aap har baar mujhe hi fasa dete ho"

rano turned her around holding her shoulders...

"kya hua bache...tum aise koi sapna dekhati ho aur fir wahi sab imagine karti rehti ho"

"nahi mumma...aisa nahi hai...woh yaha the...puri raat mere saath"

"kaun" now rano was litle suspicious...

"woh maa..." geet was about to take maan's name...when mohinder entered geet's room...

"rano I needed that phone urgently...aur dekho tum dono yaha gappe maar rahi ho...this is highly irresponsible"

rano eyed geet to check for the mobile...geet hurriedly searched it on her bed...clumsily pulling the spread, throwing the pillow here and there...she searched it under the bed sheet also...rano and mohinder where shocked looking at her childlike acts...shaking there heads...thinking...kya hoga iss ladki ka...

finally geet managed to find that mobile...and crawled on the bed coming down...she handed the phone to papaji...smiling cutely...saying good morning...

mohinder sighed giving up on his irritation looking at her cute smiling face...he kissed her forehead and left from there...not before angrily eyeing rano...

as soon as mohinder left, rano pinched her ear lightly...making geet look at her...

"ahhhaaa maa...dukhata hai"

"geet ab bohat ho gaya...stop behaving like a small kid...else I have to act strict with you from now on"

"maine kya kiya" she made a baby crying face...this made rano abruptly leave her ear...sighing..."kya karu mai tumhara geet"

geet looked down with big pearls of tears dropping from her hazels...hurt with her mom's words...

rano cupped her face feeling guilty to have hurt her only child...

"I am sorry beta...lekin dekho tumne kya haal kar diya hai apne room ka...har cheez yaha waha padi hai...pillows zameen pe hai...aise koi karta hai kya"

"woh pillow zameen pe maine nahi feke" she said meekly looking down...

"geet now stop lieing...i am not expecting an sorry...but atleast try to act litle responsible"

"lekin mumma sach mai..."

"geet stop it...papaji ko late ho raha hai office ke liye...you get ready and come down for breakfast"

as soon as rano left, geet searched every nook and corner of her room...cribbing, cursing maan...with every possible galiyas she learned till now...she was so raged that she could have bit him up...then finding him no where...she stomped her foot...and went to change her cloths...

uff maan sighed a breath of relief as soon as he came down safely clibbing down from her balcony...he looked around if anyone have seen him...

"ab aur kya kya karwaogi geet...thank god my tai-chi skills are helping me in carrying out this adventurous...warna geet toh marwa hi deti"

with this he left to mansion...driving off as quickly as possible...

finally it was breakfast time...as geet lazily carried herself down in her shorts and mickey mouse t-shirt...not wanting to go to khurana mansion...to face that devil again...she made up her mind to have her breakfast with her parents here itself...after having her long baby steps she finally reached the dinning table, pulling her usual chair she sat on it grumpily...as she was angry on her parents, to have behaved with her so rudely...she mentally made all her plans to do all type of nakhara's and nautanki...and make them manofy her big time...

"good morning geet"...her trance was broken with an intense voice coming right from her opposite side...she looked up meeting his penetrating gaze...blinking her eyes couple of times getting hell shocked with his presence at this hour at her home...and that to on her dinning table...

"maan" she whispered...looking at him up and down...he was well dressed in his sexy office wear...looking dashing as always...hot to be precise...she thought...then saw him smirking deviliously...she made an baby angry face, mentally cursing herself for drooling over this devil yet again...she looked down pouting, as he continued to sip his coffee...smirking...controlling his laughter...

there cute moment got broke, as rano came out from kitchen holding a tray in her hand...

"I am so happy beta...you pleasantly surprised us with your visit at this hour" rano exclaimed cheerfully...looking at her future son-in-law lovingly...

"finally our family looks so complete with maan here with us" mohinder said keeping his arm around maan's shoulder...

geet looked up as she saw mohinder and rano's smiling happy faces seeing maan...and maan too smiling wholeheartedly...

she looked down hiding her smile...yet sad, feeling left out...

rano served everyone...geet still pouted looking down as nobody pampered her till now...

"yeh maan kya aa gaye breakfast pe...mere mom and dad mujhe hi bhool gaye"

she looked up, seeing rano standing beside maan...making him eat properly and mohinder also too involved in chating with him...

she sadly cupped her cheek in her one hand...leaning forward...pouting she kept looking at this melodramatic scene having no other choice...yet boiling with anger from inside...

"wow maa...this is so tasty...yummy pasta" maan said chirpily, as he really loved her cooking...

"I have prepared this pasta specially for you beta" rano spoke...

"infact maan rano has prepared all your favorites today...she got so much excited when you informed us that you are coming for breakfast" mohinder said smiling...

"thanks maa" maan smiled genuinely...

On the other side geet continued her staring at them...in her heart she was happy looking at them...but then her cute devil mind poked her to control her angelself...she coughed loudly in order to gain their attention...then stomped her foot...still failing terribly to gain there attention...then with no other option she smacked her spoon hard on the table...

rano and mohinder looked at her in shock...eyeing her to behave properly...while maan just smirked...grinning at her antics...

"geet kya kar rahi ho yeh...have your breakfast quietly" rano said controlling her anger...

"mujhe nahi khana pasta vasta...mujhe nahi pasand"...she looked away still folding her hands together...

"geet now have this...later rano will prepare something of your taste"

mohinder tried calming her...

"no...i wont have this" she said pushing the dish away...poor girl was admant and hurt badly...

mohinder looked at rano...eyeing her to sought this out...

"geet what kind of behaviour is this" rano shouted...

maan sensed this is going too far...he interfered in between...

"maa please...i think geet is right...if she don't want to eat this...then its ok"

"but maan..." rano tried explaning...when maan interfered...

"maa please" he said pleading...making a baby face...

"ok will prepare something of her taste" rano smiled looking at his pleading face...

geet smiled cutely at her victory...but then when her gaze met his...she again made a baby angry face...

rano was leaving for kitchen when maan called her from back...he went to her...while geet looked at him suspiciously...

"maa can I prepare geet's breakfast today???????"

rano and mohinder where shocked hearing this...while geet looked at him with jaw dropped down...

"Par beta tum kaise..." rano spoke...

"maa please"

"ok" she lovingly caressed his face and then moved away...letting him enter the kitchen...

as soon as maan left...rano came to dining table...pulling geet up...

"what kind of behaviour was that geet...itni zidd" rano was hell angry...

"I am sorry" geet said looking down...

"lekin maan ke wajah se aap dono bhi mujhe ignore kar rahe the...and I was hurt...so galati ho gayi sorry" she said holding her ears...

"ok beta next time se aisa nahi hona chahiye" mohinder interfered eyeing rano to let go...

"aap samjh nahi rahe ho...maan beta kya sochega" rano was admant...

geet looked down...murmuring...

"woh toh bade khush ho rahe honge...sab unki wajah se toh ho raha hai"

"geet...geet...are you listening" mohinder broke her trance...

"ji papaji"

"chalo now go and help maan in kitchen"

"ji jati hu" she lazily entered kitchen...as maan looked at her...smiling lovingly...

"how was my surprise" he said winking as she stood beside him...eyeing what he was preparing...while geet ignored his teasing...

"suniye...you know my taste so prepare accordingly" she comanded...

"yes your highness...as you say" he leaned bending down infront of her...

she snorted her nose and looked away...grabbing an apple she sat on the kitchen slab...chewing on it...maan smiled and started preparing her favorite aalu parathas...

geet kept her eyes on him...staring intently...as she was getting so excited looking at him preparing for her...uff she loved all this manofying session of his...and thought to extend her gussa as much as possible...thinking all this she was smiling...when maan moved towards her looking at her teasingly...she was having her apple in her trance...as he stood infront, leaning on her...taking a bite of apple from opposite side...geet looked at him surprised...

there gaze met...leading to a long mahi moment...

"I am very eager to know...what where you thinking now" he said circling his arms around her waist...

"aapko kya" she said rudely...

"I have every right to known everything about you" he said possessively...squeezing her waist...

"maan" she moaned feeling hypnotised with his gaze...

he pulled that apple away in his hand...leaning on her lips...intending to kiss, but then backed away looking other way...taking another bite from the apple...leaving her yearning lips to crib behind him...

he smiled teasingly...as she twisted her lips looking away...

finally he was done preparing the dough and stuffing material...geet came close leaning in...poking her finger in the soft velvetty dough...as maan grabbed her waist, pulling her close...gluing her to his body...he looked at her shocked face, smiling, finally taking her lips in his...relishing her sweet flavour...she grabbed his shirt tightly...as he imediatelyprobed his tounge in her mouth...tracing every nook and corner...chewing her pulm lips, feasting on it...geet hugged him tight around his waist...as maan moved his other hand to her face...brushing her curls away...caressing her cheeks...rubbing his thumb on her soft skin near her lips...kissing her passionately yet longingly...

he pushed the plates away and grabbed her waist with his hands...pulling her up...still keeping their lips locked...he made her sit on the slab, holding her buttocks firmly...standing between her legs...as she unknowingly circled her legs around his waist...maan smiled in the kiss, looking at her giving in so much passionately...

"ohh jaan" he moaned leaving her lips as he found her gasping for breath...

then again took them in his mouth, as he saw her willingly leaning in for another one..."love you jaan" he spoke in her mouth...as she pulled him closer with her legs around his waist and arms snacking his shoulders...he hugged her dearly as they kissed for eternity...he felt he could never stop falling in love with her...

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Precap:- geet flaunting her payal gifted by maan to everyone😳

hello sweeties...i am back...and here is my first update...enjoy this one...will be back wid my another update of flavour of love...

guys in few updates there is a twist lined up...so u have to wait for that...may be 2 updates more...

give me some awesome comments and lots of likes...and dis time i am setting a target here...i want 225 likes this time...n pls this is not at all hard...as i we have an average of 200 likes already n i pm around 207 people...so i can atleast expect this much na...

see u in flavour of love...enjoy this one till then...

love u lots

varsha😃

Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Me first

Very Nice

looking fwd for the next one

Edited by Arsheela - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update, continue to update them regularly now...
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
I can't press the like button. Consider it as 'like'
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Posted: 13 years ago

geet aur uski nakhde...maan k siva koi nehi sambhal sakte usse...maan geet k liye aloo paratha bana raha hai...amazing...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG ... Geet is so cute ... Aww ... Man i love her ...and the precap sounds even more cute.

Lovely update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was a beautiful update. loved all the manofying sessions.
waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantstic update
Maan is in Mission to Manofy Geet but he always land up to explore her😆
ROLF!! Precap she is flaunt off her payal that would more interesting😳☺️
plz update soon

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