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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Appy

ok...
pr hme thodi der me jana pdega...

kab wapas aaogi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

ruko just adding pics aur ho gaya

ok...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

ruko just adding pics aur ho gaya

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
😳😳😳waiting...😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar varsha how long 😭 since aftnoon waiting for FOD or dis update 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u so much for all d likes and comments...love u guys😃...

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Posted: 13 years ago
intehaa ho gai intezaar ki aai na koi khabar ek bhi update ki...(😡)
ye hme hai yakeen bevafaa tu nai fir wajah kya hui intezaar ki(posting pics)...
waiting sweety...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~

PART-14
(chalo now we have reached 195 likes...now lets hope next update wud cross 200 likes😃...and this update is specially dedicated to SANA MAANEET, TANVI NANGIA n PAYAL AGARWAL for their cribbing for an update)
"abhi i said" he shouted...making her jump in fear...she closed the door, leaning her forehead on it...smiling, blushing for the moments they shared...she heard his car screeching away...then went to her room and thumped herself on bed...blushing at her luck to have him just for her...

Sleep was far away from her hazel, as she kept rolling on the bed...smiling, blushing at her thoughts...finally giving up she took her diary, and started pouring out her feelings...

"diary, i was so scared the whole day...i thought i have ruined it all...i have hurted my parents badly, aur agar papaji ko kuch ho jata toh...how on earth i would have faced myself..."
"i was alone burning in my own guilt...but now i have maan with me...unhone kaha woh sab thik kar denge...and i belive him and his every word" she smiled...
"ab kal woh mere saath papaji ko milane aayenge..." she blushed...with the thought of how will she introduce him to her father...Shied with her own anxiety, she slept clutching her diary close to her heart...
Maan kept on smiling throughout his drive back home, still wondering if she would be ok staying alone...but then they had no option...he reached khurana mansion...and sighed in relief, seeing all the lights where turned off...he softly tip toed, walking through the hall area...then smiled victoriously, as he reached the staircase without making any noise...

"uff dadi ne toh kitna dara diya tha" he calmly climbed the stairs...as he knew everyone is sleeping...when a loud voice halted his moves..."maan stop right there"

he closed his eyes, shaking his head...knowing dadi must be very angry...he turned around, as lights went on...dadi was sitting on the couch waiting for him...he meekly walked towards dadi and stood infront of her bending his head down...

"maan aapne khana khaya" came her cold voice, surprising maan...as he thought his dadi would blast him for his lie...but here she was concern...maan nodded his head in no...and dadi got up and left for the kitchen...not before commanding him to get fresh-n-up and come down...

Maan ran to his room, had a quick shower and came down after changing into black vest and 3/4 baggy pants...he sat on the dining table quietly, playing with the spoons...when dadi came in with food...she served him and sat beside...maan like an obedient child aet his food, as he didnt wanted to get into any conversation...as he knew dadi would ask many questions of his where about...and then it would be difficult to lie...finally when he was done...he kept fidgeting with nervousness, tapping his fingers..."woh dadi...woh good night...aap so jayiye abhi bohat raat ho gayi hai" and he hurriedly started leaving for his room...

"maan " she called out, making him tremble with nervousness...

"ji dadi" he softly said...

dadi walked upto him smiling and caressed his face..."aapko jabhi bhi hamari jarurat ho...i will be always there" maan smiled with delight and kissed her cheek...

He walked in his room...and lied on the bed, contemplating the idea to call geet...he looked at the time it was past 2 o clock...then thought she must be sleeping and it wont be right to disturb her, as she must be very tired...so he slept hugging his pillow, smiling with this contended feeling to have her all for himself...

It was morning, and geet got up yawning, stretching her hands...she got up and went towards the window, looking at the bright sunny day...she closed her eyes, inhaling the soothing fragrance of the warm light breeze...she smiled with her closed eyes, as the images of their last night togetherness flashed infront...

...Last night I fell in love with you...

...All over again...

...More deeply in love...

...Than ever before...

...No one has ever expressed their love for me...

...With such beautiful and kind words...

She opened her hazels, blushing furiously...then bit her lower lips with excitement...she walked to her wardrobe and started looking in for a suitable dress...then pouted getting confused with what to wear...finally arguing a lot with herself she finally picked her light pink colour anarkali suit...she stood infront of the mirror, keeping the dress hanging on her torso...judging her choice...when suddenly her eyes caught maan's image in the mirror...he was gesturing her, giving his thumps up for her choice...she hurriedly looked behind, but there was no maan..."uff i already started day dreaming about him" she smacked her head...then remebered how geniunely he assured her, that he will be always there...

...Last night I fell in love with you...

...All over again...

...With such stronger faith...

...Than ever before...

...Knowing that you will always be there for me...

...When dark shadows enter my life...

Geet rushed towards her washroom...shedding her cloths, she stood under the cold shower...moving her face up, feeling the chilling water droplets, washing away every bit of her shyness...she remembered how easily he comforted her with his tender touch, cocooning her in his warm embrace...

...Last night I fell in love with you...

...All over again...

...With a stronger friendship...

...Than ever before...

...When ever I need a tender shoulder to cry on...

...I know you will wipe away the tears...

She wiped her body dry and came out in her bathrobe...wiping her curly hair, she stood infront of the mirror...admiring herself...even though there was no physical change in her, but still she could not deny the new feelings maan developed in her...making her glow with the shade of his love...he was always her strength...may it be his absence or now his presence...he always gave her this courage to move on and aspire...

...Last night I fell in love with you...

...All over again...

...With more respect...

...Than ever before...

...I look up to you and admire your strength...

...In turn you have strengthen me...

She wore her cloths, then tide the dori of her kurti...moved towards her bag, and checked if she took her fathers reports and required money for hospital fees...she remebered how depressed she was till last night when she came home, feeling dejected with her life...how she rolled on her bed, crying bitterly for this helplessness...and then feeling suffocated in her own room, she opened her balcony door, only to meet his drenched structure...she remembered how concerned he was with her tears...how his every touch, his every word screamed his care and love for her...

...Last night I fell in love with you...

...All over again...

...With such care...

...Than ever before...

...Now I truly believe how much you care for me...

...You have given me life...

She got ready, tying her long silky hair in a perfect plait...then applied black koel to enhance the beauty of her hazels...and lastly flavoured her plum lips with light pink gloss...now she was ready to face her prince charming...

...Last night I fell in love with you...

...All over again...

...With more happiness...

...Than ever before...

...You have brought back to me smiles and laughter...

...Through your loving eyes...

Geet kept looking at herself in the mirror...blushing at her thoughts...blushing for the moments they shared last night...blushing for his silent confession...blushing for her dreams, that would soon turn into reality...

...Last night I fell in love with you...

...All over again...

...With more love...

...Than ever before...

...For the first time in a long time...

...I have really felt love...

Her loose curly strand kept teasing her red cheek...as she kept pushing them behind her ear...niharofying herself in the mirror...checking if she was looking nice...her duppatta kept falling her torso, irritating her...she pouted keeping it around her neck...but the silky cloth kept teasing her sliding off her smooth velvetty skin...

"babaji aaj yeh kya ho raha hai...my hair looks messed up...and this duppatta, uff yeh ek jagah pe kyu nahi rehta..." then she looked closely at her self..." my lips are looking too glossy...woh dekhenge toh kya sochenge...ki maine unke liye yeh sab make up kiya hai..."

she hurriedly wiped off her extra gloss...maintaning the natural colour of her lips..."umm ab thik hai" she smiled...

After satisfying herself with her look, she sat on her bed, anticipating him to come any moment...she was nervous yet excited...last night what they shared was there emotional out burst...but today they will be in there right senses...the mere thought of this, sent shivers down her spine...she got up abruptly from her seat, and started pacing back and forth, fidgeting with her duppatta...suddenly she heard her doorbell ringing...making her tremble with anxiety...she some how managed to compose herself, and went down to open the door...she bit her lower lips, subsiding the urge to moan in nervousness...her heart was frantically beating...as she stood infront of the close door, with her trembling sweaty hands daring to open it...

Then giving up on her own anxiety, she opened her main door...getting stunned with the person standing infront of her...

"dadi aap" was all she could say...then saw ranbir and dev coming from behind...dev gave her a sweet smile, while ranbir kept his straight face...she looked behind them for maan...but he was not there...getting disappointed with her own expectations...composing herself she gave a meek smile to all of them...inviting them in...

"geet hum aapse bohat naraz hai...aapne ek baar bhi nahi bataya aapke papaji ki tabiyat ke baare mai" dadi caressed her cheeks, feeling concern...while geet just looked down...she didn't knew what bothered her, hurting dadi and ranbir or maan's absence...

"hume khabar toh kar di hoti beta" ranbir could not hold back the hurt and disappointment he felt for not being there for her...

geet just felt miserable looking at those hurt faces..."woh mai dar gayi thi...kuch samjh nahi aaya kya karu" she whimpered...

"koi baat nahi beta...ab hum hai aapke saath" dadi comforted her...

"mujhe lagta hai hume nikalana chahiye, mohinder uncle ko dekhane...lekin yeh maan kaha reh gaya" dev said...gaining geet's attention...as she abruptly looked at dev, with her glittering eyes...did she heard it right, was he here...suddenly she could feel his presence all around her...his intoxicating aroma filled in the air...making her breathless...

"dad I think we are getting late for the hospital" she heard maan's commanding voice...making her shiver with its intensity...she looked behind, meeting his gaze...then stood up, and abruptly started walking towards him...getting lost in the moment...
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Precap:- meeting the inlaws😳😉

Sorry guys for keep u waiting...but I was really held up...so could not update...here is another update for FOL, n that to a bigger one...i known it is devoid of maneet scenes, but no worries will give you more in my next update...i hope u will like it...

Just one request...today is my fathers 1st death anniversary...and I want u to pray for his soul to rest in peace...
pls press the like button and comment...
will see u in FOD n SBL threads...as will update both of them now...
love u lots

varsha😊

Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
May ur dad's soul rest in peace

now coming to the update, awesome part again, maan meeting in-laws 😳 hmmm waiting for their interaction 😳
Edited by maan_ki_jaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
itna bada bada res krne k chakkar me second ho gai
koi nai...
beautiful part dear...
loved it...
to finally inlaws se mil hi lenge maan ji...😳
nd sorry abt ur dad bt i m sure he'll be proud of you...
or pta hai frnds k sath apni khushi baaton ya na baaton par dukh jarur batna chahie..
Edited by Appy - 13 years ago

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