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IGNORE THE YEAR ITS NOT IN PARTICULAR
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1995

" geet " rano called her 4 year old daughter to meet her new neighbors

Geet came with her small kitten wearng a baby pink frock

" oh u look so cute " the Mrs.ranjini Khuranna the neighbor lady exclaimed pulling geet's cheeks
" mommy can I have kitten " their 5 year old neighbor boy asked cutely

" maan u can ask geet to share kitten's playtime with u " ranjini said

Maan looked at geet hopefully

" geet go to park with maan and play with the kitten " rano said

Geet smiled cutely at maan took his hands while holding the kitten in other hand and ran to the garden ''''''' they both giggled and played whole heartedly perhaps they knew that that was the last time they were playing in peace '''''..

2000

" u moron how can u do this? " maan shouted
" u deserve this u idiot " geet shouted back

" geet do u realize this is my whole lifetime collection " maan said angrily
" I don't care '''''' " geet said turning to other side

" I m not gonna spare you " maan said before running behind geet

He finally managed to catch her ''''''.. he was about to catch pour mud water on her when ranjini stopped him

" maan what are u doing ? " ranjini asked shocked
" mom this idiot tore all my precious salman khan photos from my album " maan complained

Rano who came there hearing the noise looked at geet accusingly

" mom he started the fight first '''''''' he broke my DDLJ DVD " geet said to rano
" but mom she didn't allow me to watch sallu bhai's movie " maan complained making baby face

Rano and ranjini couldn't take anymore '''''. This is the story they face everyday for last 5 years '''''''''' maan is ardent salman follower and geet is shah rukh 's deewani '''''''''.they both end up fighting every day and the reason would be defo sallu and SRK ''''''''''..

2008

Geet threw a pizza party in her house to celebrate Om shanty Om's success '''''''' maan hated to go there coz he knew he will be insulted rather his sallu bai will be insulted by geet '''''''.. but was dragged to the part by his friend Arnav as he had secret crush on geet ''''''''..

Geet was dressed in a pink skirt and blue top ''''''''' arnav managed to get the dress which SRK wore in the movie to impress geet and guess what geet was really impressed '''''''''.. arnav was the only guy whom geet danced with ''''''''.

" maan what are u doing here ? isn't Saturday is meant to watch movies for u " geet asked

Maan gave a angry glare

" oh jeez how can I forget salma's film never released ''''''. Poor boy what will u do now " geet said with fake hurt

" every dog will have his day " maan said

" but mannu jannu i will have all good days I ain't a dog u know unlike'" she left the sentence incomplete and went away giving him a mean look

Maan wanted to just kill her that moment for making fun of him and his sallu bai'''''''.

2010

Maan really had best day '''''''. "WANTED" his sallu bai's movie was a huge success and maan couldn't be happier''''''''' he organized a party and made double sure that geet was invited ''''''

Geet had grumpy mood first SRK's movie didn't do well and next sallu's movie was a blockbuster ''''''''. Maan was indirectly teasing geet and it hurt her so much ''''''. She went out to the garden ''''''''. Maan was taken aback they always had this teasing section in each others party but never geet has reacted like this ''''''''.he rushed to garden '''''.

Geet was standing watching the moon ''''''' maan stood near her ''''''' she wasn't crying thank god but she was upset ''''''.

" geet " he called but she didn't turn

He put his arms around her

" don't worry Ra.one will be a huge hit I swear ''''''''.. we both can go together to watch that movie I ll buy u caramel popcorn and cold coffee " he said and she looked at him

" bade bade deshon mein aise choti choti baat hota reha ta hai " maan heard himself say and for a minute wondered if it was him or some booth went inside him

Geet burst into laughter and hugged him '''''''. Maan's world stopped to spin that moment ''''''' his hands were in air not sure if he shd hug her or not '''''''. But he convinced himself to hug her but alas it didn't last for long time as geet's frd called her ''''''''. Geet pulled out of the hug and looked at him ''''''''.. she smiled and he smiled uncertainly '''''''''.. she gave a quick peck on his cheeks before running into the house '''''..

Maan stood there rooted touching his cheeks which was just now been acknowledged by an angel ( wah wah ek kiss se dushman angel bangayi !!)

2011

It has been one year since maan head-over heels fell in love with geet ''''''''.. no one knows about this ''''''' maan started to love everything about geet ''''''.. her talk , he walk , her antics , her style everything '''''''' he even started to watch all SRK movies and interviews as he once heard geet tell her frd that she wants a BF like SRK''''''''..

Maan was searching for geet as he heard from rano that geet was upset from morning ''''''''. He finally found her in terrace '''''''''..

" geet what happened ? " he asked
" I hate everyone '''''.. no one is my true frd " geet said
" geet what happened ? I m ur frd u can tell me I can do anything for u " maan said

" I bought two tickets for KKR vs DD match in delhi but no one is ready to come with me " geet complained making a baby face

" geet why shd u go to stadium to watch match ''''''. U can watch in home comfortably in home theater , AC room , drinks , snacks etc " maan said

" ufff ho maan who wants to watch the match I want to see Shah rukh khan '''''. I have never seen him before this is best chance " geet said

How could maan forget that his geet can do anything for SRK '''''''..maan saw bright chance awaiting to get in geet's heart so he agreed to accompany her '''''''''''.

Maan was all excited because he had planned to propose to her after the match '''''''''.. the match started and geet 's eye was searching everywhere for her SRK ''''''''' when finally she found him she started to shout and jump in joy '''''''. Maan didn't mind as almost everyone in the ground was shouting '''''''.. he looked lovingly at geet ''''''''.. it was like to gain a lot of energy to see her smile ''''''

After the match maan and geet had dinner and went to have kulfi ''''''' the place was quiet no people maan felt that was the best place to express his feelings '''''''. He took chocolates and roses which he had kept in car ''''''..

Maan went on his knees before geet and proposed in the way she like '''''.

" geet I know we have fought almost all our life but from now on I ll fill ur life with love '''''.. no more fighting'''''''' I ll do whatever u like ''''''. I ll watch all SRK movies with u '''''''.. I ll never complain '''''.. I ll be romantic always '''''''. Please be with me forever ''''''.. I love you " he said

Geet's eye had glow and anyone could say that she was more than impressed with the proposal '''''''.maan stood on his legs

" maan I like u ''''''.. I like u more than my friend " geet said with shy
" but jaan this is not the answer I m expecting " maan said desperately

" but maan I ll tell you what u wish to hear when KKR wins IPL finals " geet said before running

Maan was impatiently following that year IPL but to his bad luck KKR didn't even enter finals ''''''''.

2012

Maan went to London to do a 6 months close ''''''''. He and geet used to chat everyday ''''''''''. Geet missed maan more than what she expected '''''''' she was dying to talk to him '''''''. She was keen on confessing her feelings when he come back ''''''..

Maan was planned to return to india on 27 may '''''''.. he wanted it to be a surprise but hearing his jaan cry in phone missing him he spilled out the date of his arrival '''''''.geet was happy

Geet went to the air port and was waiting for him impatiently '''''''''. When he saw him walking out she ran to him and wrapped her hands around him '''''''' he lifted her in air and spun around ''''''' she kissed his cheeks and he kissed her forehead ''''''''''

They began to walk geet had so much to tell but didn't know where to start ''''''''

" maan I ''''" she didn't feel his presence and turned to see him standing near a group of ppl

She went near him and found him staring at the TV like many others '''''''''. Match was on air in the TV'''''''' in these 6 months geet forgot herself all she could remember was maan and how could she think about shah rukh khan ''''''..

" maan letz go I have something important to tell you "' geet said
" hush geet ''''' KKR vs CSK IPL finals " he said pointing to the TV screen

Geet then remembered about how she told maan that she ll confess only if KKR win the finals ''''''''. She herself forgot that but he remembered geet was really touched by his small gesture '''''''. She understood how much she meant to him ''''''..not that she ll not confess if KKR loses but If they win the match it will extra-ordinary sign from god ''''''' it will be like god's blessings for them , their love ''''''

15 runs 6 balls
11 runs 5 balls
11 runs 4 balls
10 runs 3 balls
9 runs 2 balls
7 runs 1 ball

Now geet was sure that KKR will lose the match ''''''.. 7 runs is impossible in 1 ball is impossible ''''''''. But to her astonishment the next ball was a wide and the team was given one extra run along with free hit ''''''''. Geet looked at maan who had calm smile on his face '''''''does that mean god himself wishes them to be together geet wondered ''''''''..

The bowler delivered the ball '''. Geet crossed her finger '''''.. and It was a SIX '''''''. KKR won '''''''.. geet jumped in joy '''''. She immediately hugged maan

" now will u tell me jaan " he whispered huskily in her ears

Geet nodded her head with tears

" I love u maan''''''. I love u more than anything in this world''''''.." geet pressed her lips on his '''''. It was not perfect kiss but conveyed one's feelings to other '''''''''..

" we can watch salman's films " geet said pulling from him

Maan chuckled

" its ohk I like SRK though he does kinda same type movies " maan said

Geet hit his arms with fake anger

" ohk baba we ll watch amir khan movie " mana said pulling her into a hug

They happily went to their house to give one more surprise to their family along with maan's arrival
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BEFORE CLICKING THE LIKE BUTTON PRAY FOR

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
oh god!!!!!!!!!!!
its amazing
just superb yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!
something hatke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yes me too praying 4 KKR
defo KKR will win

awesome OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely os dear
but yaar sorry to say i m a fan of MSD
so automatically a CSK fan
CSK will win IPL for 3rd consecutive time😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was awesome..srk vs sallu..
maan n geet..
loved every line of urs..
sorry yaar..i want chennai team to win..
the place i belong..im favour to it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!that was simply awesum...
Geet's craziness for SRK was superb...Also maan's..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli22

that was awesome..srk vs sallu..

maan n geet..
loved every line of urs..
sorry yaar..i want chennai team to win..
the place i belong..im favour to it.


me also want CSK to win i live in orissa but i love DHONI😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow i loved it..nandy from were u get like tis track...im smiling from my heart...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os...
I have no grudges against KKR but i'm a southee so C . . S . . K...CSK
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the OS dear...
and about KKR & CSK...
😉😆😉
😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb one...Loved it

Thank u for the PM


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