MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 4 - Page 63

I'm happy with maan today.

mera dil tho garden garden hogaya yaar. loved da update

Wonderful update.
The way you started this FF with Maan not ready to move on and accept Geet as his wife as he is still in love with Poonam and slowly making him realise that he is ready to move on... hats off to you.

It is not easy to show how peoples feelings change. I read many stories, where people suddenly get struck by lightening and they fall in or out of love... luckily it is not hte case with VIVAH.

Every chapter contributes in some way to Geet's patient character and Maan's slow acceptance. He first got used to her but was still unsure. Then he got comfortable around her and now he is ready to move on.

But you also don't focus solemly on Maan and Geet. Dev, Meera, Vicky and Dadi along with Geet's family also get their share in the FF. It makes it all refreshing and keeps the interest.

I just wanted to let you know, that I am a great fan of your writing. Even Til Death Does Us Part was beautifully written. I wish you all the best and hope you continue giving us such wondefull FFs for a long time.

Sorry I do not always comment but I press the like button after every update...
Thanks for the pm. Hope you update soon...

Awesme update
just came across ths ff n loved it a lot..
Maaneet missing each other..
Waitng 4 next part

their increasing realization was superbly executed...loved it...

love it ..

wow di... awesome update..
loved it..
so maan thinking to move on and that is really a very good sign...
and poor them missing each other...
continue soon di...