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Posted: 13 years ago
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update
story getting interesting
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Originally posted by: J.Rahman

Amazing os. update next part soon


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Originally posted by: kamiya

update

story getting interesting
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Part 3

Thanks for all ur comments and likes. I replied to all. Pls do check if needed. Here is the third part. Pardon me with my mistakes. Some of scenes are taken from some film I really don't know the name becoz I saw that long back ago. I have made some changes too. Pls do enjoy. I think it will take another 2 parts to complete. Pls bear with me.


After 6 months

One day dev called maan when he was at his office.

Dev: Hi maan. I am sorry to disturbed you. I need one help.

Maan: Sure Devi. What is it?

Dev: I am in Canada, came here for some job. You know geet right. Her parents came to know about our love and suddenly arranged for her marriage within a week time. I tried calling geet I couldn't reach her. Her engagement is today evening. Do something maan . I tried getting tickets but I can reach only tonite. Pls do something to stop it.

Maan: ok sure. Try calling geet and inform her that I am coming to take her.

Dev: Sure maan. I will send the message through my sister at any cost. Pls go and get her. I will meet you both tonight. Ok.
maan: ok dev. I am on my way but come soon.


At Shimla:

Geet got information from dev's sister that maan is coming to pick her but before that geet thought she has to speak with groom first. So went to meet him and told everything.

Groom: Thanks for sharing this with me before we get married. You don't worry I will speak with your parents.

Geet: Thank you very much. If you don't mind can I ask you something?

Groom: sure, why not?

Geet: why don't you marry my sister Meera? She is really a good girl and well educated.

Groom thought for a minute.

Groom: ok' I will speak with ur parents. you may go now.

Geet: Thank you very much.

Maan came to pick her from the house where geet was waiting for him. Maan with due respect took geet to meet dev who has now arrived to shimla.


Dev's house:

Dev brought geet and maan to his houseand introduced geet to his parents. Dev's parents started shouting at him that it will be a dishonor to their family if dev marries geet, it will put a stop to his sisters marriage too. They started crying and created a family drama. Maan and geet became a silent spectator, who was listening to all the family drama in front of them.

Dev's family finally said that he can marry her only after seeing their dead body and they took poison bottle in their hand and started blackmailing him. (Sorry guys, I know that it is too filmy but I can't help it out I didn't get any idea so bear with me)As dev saw his family in this condition he didn't even say anything. Without thinking of anything he said' he will not go against his family. Geet who was all the while standing there silently started laughing. Not because it is funny it is because of the person whom she loved was standing there silently and he didn't even care that she has left her family for him. She felt ashamed of herself for loving such a person in her life. She just went out. Maan who was standing there started to speak.

Maan: What's all this dev?

Dev: maan, understand me. I can't do anything against my family.

Maan: Then why the hell you loved her and brought her here?

Dev: maan. What shall I do? I can't see my family die.

Maan: Cut the crap dev. Then convince them. Think of her she has left everything behind just for you.

Dev: I am sorry maan.

Maan: sorry! Don't call me maan. Your no longer my friend. From now on our friendship comes to an end. Did you get it'

Maan came out saw geet standing all alone. Maan went near her to speak with her.

Maan: Geet '.

Geet: ya maan '

Maan: Geet what ur going to do. Shall I drop you at ur home?

Geet: I am thinking. I can't go to my family again as it will affect my sister's marriage. I don't know where to go.

Maan: Geet if you don't mistake me, shall I ask you something.

Geet: ya sure.

Maan: you can stay in my house as a friend. Only friend, nothing else. What do you say.

Geet thought for a minute and said

Geet: The man I loved left me and the man I don't know is helping me. Why not '.thank you very much.

Maan: It's ok' come let's go.


At Delhi

Maan took geet to KM. he asked his dad's permission first. His dad was surprised to see his son calling a girl , a friend that too bring her to his house was a bit strange for him. But he didn't say anything left everything to his son's wish. Geet stayed in KM as a friend. Maan made everything available to her and asked Nakul, his servant to take care of geet.

Day's passed. As geet was in his house maan never encouraged his friends to come home which was their favorite hangout place before. He changes himself for geet. His dad noticed this changes but he didn't voice it.

Precap: Geet joining maan's office

Maan friend's party.

Dev meeting maan and geet.


pls do press like button and do comment. It means a lot to me. silent readers pls do press like and comment.

part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57893732

Edited by sweetysaran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update 😊,may be Maan will start liking her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVEEED IT !
pleaseee do pm me when you update again !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
when did geet started loving dev as far as i remember geet liked dev she didnt loved dev
and there is a big difference between liking and loving
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part.
Precaps r interesting.
Add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -padma-

nice update 😊,may be Maan will start liking her.


thank you

sure maan will do

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