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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
congrats on the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

dear...😛.
4 PMing me..😊..
4 ur good job..👏👏..
ur updates..⭐️⭐️⭐️..
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Congrats for new thread..
update sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Congrats on the new thread...

update soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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UPDATING...
ANYONE IS HERE??
GUYS I TYPED HALF OF THE UPDATE NOW AND POSTING IT..AS I DONT WANT U GUYS TO WAIT FOR SO LONG..WILL POST NEXT HALF IN A WHILE..TILL THEN ENJOY THIS..
-MONA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LAGTHA HAI NO ONE IS HERE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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MY SOUL MATE


part-12

When she was cursing herself and destiny and god who wrote her fate nakul entered the room and handovers phone to her..she absent mindedly took it and kept near her ear..the call is from her college..they informed her to meet princi and ask for the leave if she want..she cant sit at home without informing to anyone..she nodded still absent mindedly..eventhough she is weak and cant able to take a step she got up as she want to got to college..atleast she could forget the pain not completely but little…as her mom and devil sis is not there at home nakul requested her to take the car..she silently went and sat in the car..

she reached college and had talk with princi..she came out lost in her thoughts and she reached the place where notice board will be hanged she found many students standing there and gossipping something…she just shrugged it and about to move from there..meanwhile,a student moved from the place where he was standing and now geet have access to read the notice…she unknowingly looked at notice board and next moment her eyes widened in shock…


her breath caught inside her thought due to shock…the only file which she was holding till now landed on floor as geet's hands became too feeble to hold it..she stood in shock looking at notice board continuosly…after few minutes finally she managed to utter "ye..ye kese"…it took few minutes for her to digest the fact…she ran to one of the girl standing there…her answer shocked geet more…she said that it all happened three days back…as he was the student of the college they kept his pic on notice board… geet sat in one of the chair in shock…"itna sab kuch hogaya but I don't know..how it happened???vicky is dead!!!!kisi ne muje bataya bhi nahi..why??"she thought..many questions roamed in her mind…how she didn't realise that vicky didn't call her…she recollected how vicky threatened her to stay away from maan…"maan"geet said ;the moment she remember him confessing love n how she refused to accept…she closed her eyes in pain n cried her heart out..



"muje maan se milna hai"she said n got up to leave.."ha I have to meet him..i have to ask for forgiveness..god has given me the chance to get back my love…ha I'll tell maan today that how much I love him n I cant live without him…ha maan I'll tell u today what u are to me…aapki geet aarahi hai apni maan aapke paas…"geet said wiping her tears.."but where is he??i didn't even talk to him since that day…kya karu???ha pinky se pooch lethi hoon…"she then searched for pinky in the whole college n came to know that she too didn't attend the college since three days…"pinky clg nahi aayi..kyun???kahi maan ko kuch …nahi nahi…aisa kuch nahi hoga..she must be busy..i'll meet her at home..she might be there at home"geet thought n rushed out from there almost running..




Here pinky returned back her home even when there are 4 days left for aadi to return back…she requested maan to let her go as she cant lie to daadi maa anymore n she also has fear that she may spit out truth anytime..she is in very bad state first of all n secondly she is very tensed for maan …maan understood her dilemma n allowed her to go…so both entered the home n settled themselves in a couch..maan noticed some tears in pinky's eyes..he sat beside her n hugged her.."pinky plz don't cry now..rone se kuch badal toh nahi jayega na…I allowed u to come here that doesn't mean that u sit like this n start crying..i don't want my sis to cry like this..samji…I want my brave sis back"he said wiping her tears…"kese bhai..kese??how can I smile when my bhai is in such a serious condition n he is suferring from a dangerous disease…u want me to smile…bhai I controlled my tears in front of daadi but how can I control my fear…"



"pinky plz don't do like that..warna aadi,daadi maa sab ko pata chal jayega and they cant digest this..plz pinky"maan pleaded her…maan who also is in deep melancholy,who is not able to digest the fact that he is suffering from cancer ;showed her that he is brave and he is indeed brave..he never showed his pain to anyone n doing the same now…




"ok bhai then u should start ur treatment..i already had a talk with doctor and he said they should start treatment before it's too late..bhai u have chronic leukamia n it takes time for the cancer cells to spread through out the body..before that we should start ur treatment..plz bhai"pinky pleaded…



"ha pinky I will but promise me that u will not cry now..not anymore…I don't want anyone to know about my disease….if they come to know they'll break down completely..kya pata kal mein rahu ya na.."bhai"pinky shouted before maan could complete…pinky looked at him angrily for which maan just gave her a weak smile…"pinky I already told u but again iam repeating it..plz mere bhare mein geet ko kuch mat kehna plz..she cant take it pinky..plz..promise me that u'll take care of her n u are not going to tell anything to her"maan took promise from her n pinky did un willingly…maan caressed her hair who sat with sad face n moved in to the kitchen to bring some water for her..


Pinky also got up to go inside but stopped hearing the knock at the door…she opened the door n is shocked to see geet standing there panting,her face looking very pale,her eyes were red,and tears are rolling down her cheeks continuosly…"geet"pinky said in shocked tone…maan who already felt her presence n coming out unknowingly stood shocked hearing geet's name…




"pinky"geet said in tears…maan quickly went inside the kitchen again n hid himself as geet entered inside…maan stood behind the wall n peeped from there.."pinky…wo..vicky"geet said while panting..she is trying to say something but failed to do…she suddenly felt maan's presence there…"maan"geet said n looked here n there..maan instantly hid himself again…he felt like taking geet in a brone crushing hug,wipe her tears n scream I love u geet…but he cant…he want to give all the hapiness to her but he cant…he some where know that geet's happiness is only with him but destiny played it's game again..maan don't know whether he is gonna get cured or not but if anything happens to him..that thought made him run away from her..if she comes to know that her maan is suffering from a dangerous disease which even may cause death then what???he know she cant take it…he stood there like a lifeless soul not able to do anything…



Here geet is looking here n there like a mad taking his name again n again…maan closed his eyes in pain n tigtened his fists to control himself…pinky who already was in tears wiped them quickly n stopped geet holding her arm.."geet maan bhai is not here"





Geet nodded in no…..but thought again why pinky would lie to her…"pinky wo…mein clg gayi thi…muje pata chala ki vicky…mein wo..maan"she said whatever came in her mouth..she is not able to form even a single sentence due to restlessness..she wants to see maan at that second,ask for forgiveness,hug him tight n say I love u maan but where is her maan??why she is feeling his presence there?? Geet still saying something or the other but pinky understood that geet came to know about vicky's death n now she want to meet maan n express her love…oh god!she cant help her now..how can she say her that her maan is suffering from cancer n he took promise from her saying not to utter anything to geet….she controlled her tears n made geet face her who is looking here n there with a hope to see maan…her heart is no where to listen that maan is not there…how could she fail to feel his presence??





"geet maan bhai is not here."pinky said sternly….geet looked at her with teary eyes…"toh kaha hai??bolo na pinky..i want to meet him..muje maan se maafi maangni hogi…pinky mujse bahut badi galti hogayi hai..u were asking na why iam not accepting maan's love.."and geet started narrating about vicky n his threats which pinky know very earlier..she just stood listening to her…maan just stood like a lifeless soul who cant do anything…he cant take her in his embrace n console her,he cant say geet iam there for u..no need to fear now…but he cant…he felt very helpless…




Geet:pinky muje maan se maafi maangni hogi…I cant loose him..plz plz bolo na maan kaha hai..



Maan(st):nahi geet tum nahi muje mangni chahiye maafi…ha geet I promised that I'll be there for u always I'll give all the hapiness of this world but never thought that I'll be the reason for ur tears…muje maaf kardo geet mein chahkar bhi tumhare saamne nahi aasaktha…



Pinky didn't say anything but kept mum looking down…"pinky bolo na maan kaha hai"geet shouted now…but pinky still kept mum actually she is gathering strength to speak out.."pinky mein tujse kuch pooch rahi hoon..bolo maan kaha hai"geet asked again…."muje nahi pata"pinky said closing her eyes…"nahi pata??matlab…pinky tu jhoot mat bol…tu mujse naraz hai na..i didn't say anything when u asked me n maan was hurt becoz of me…iam sorry pinky but mein kya karti mein dar gayi thi…mein dar gayi thi ki kahi vicky maan ko kuch kar na baite…o sab chodo plz muje batao maan kaha hai..plz bolo plz"geet asked in tears..she is totally out of control now…she is crying very badly covering her mouth with her palm..


pinky lifted her head which was dipped till now..she is about to say some thing but maan stopped her nodding in no…she looked at him helplessly at the same time signalling to look at geet..tears continously rolled down her cheeks..maan who also is in tears nodded in no n signalled her not to tell anything about his disease and pinched his neck as if reminding her about promise….pinky closed her eyes in pain n took a sigh…"pinky plz batao na maan kaha hai"geet said in trembling voice..she is still crying …."muje nahi pata geet…maan bhai chale gaye aur pata nahi kaha chale gaye..tumhi ne toh kaha na maan bhai se tumse door rehne ke liye..toh chale gaye wo…muje bhi nahi bataya bus chale gaye"pinky spoke out finally gathereing her strength…..




Geet stood there shocked.."chale gaye"she mumbled..she felt like earth slipped down from her feet…she felt like her head is spinning..she already is very weak as she didn't ate anything since a week n now this made her legs more feeble..she is about to fall but pinky held her..maan extended his hand n about to shout her name but some how stopped himself…he felt very helpless…he is hating himself for giving her pain but what he can do when he is helpless…




"chale gaye…ek baar bhi nahi poocha ki geet tum aisa kyun kar rahi ho..kyun kaha aisa tumne aisa..ek baar bhi nahi..bas chale gaye"geet mumbled in tears…maan who listened this felt like some one is stabbing him with a sharp knife..he closed his eyes tight not able to bear her tears…meanwhile,he felt dizzy again…he tried to control himself..he stood there with the support of the wall…



Geet freed herself from pinky's hold n walked out like a lifeless soul..she thought that it's her mistake..she is the one who said she don't love him n stay away from her..he did what she said then why she is angry on him,why she is expecting him to ask for her explanation..may be she knows that her maan understands her very well n can read her eyes….but why he left today??Why???she cursed her fate again…she thought that she got achance to win back her beloved one for thr first time in her life but she was wrong..her maan left already..her maan who she loved the most..maan is her life now…she is just a lifeless soul now as her life,her maan left her no no actually she lost her life…she walked n walked n walked don't know for how long n where??but just walked recollecting pinky's words,maan's confession,her refusal….



next part coming soon...

guys i typed this much n posting it a si dont want u guys to wait..give me little time..i'll type next part too..tab tak read this..

-mona😳



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Posted: 13 years ago
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edited~~

u know what u r very bad...
i hate seeing maan in pain and u r giving him pain... ofcourse thats needed for the story...
well coming to the update...
its awesome.. finally geet came to know that vicky is dead... all her tensions gone and she want to meet maan and confess her love...
so she rushed to maan;s house...
pinky-maan convo was emotional... he dont want to know any one about his disease... oh god.. u made me cry here...
and again maneet felt each other presense but maan dont want to meet geet and geet wants to meet maan... and pinky told to geet that she dont know where is geet and geet's dialogue chale gaye bina bataye chale gaye... oh god maan in tears and geet went like a lifeless soul...
man, its so painful...

continue soon mona...
love u for the wonderful update...
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Beautiful part..i mean first half..
Destiny really played a cruel game..
But maan s not understanding only geet's love can make him cure...
but when will geet cum to noe that?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
nice part...
oh plz end the flashback asap...

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