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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: ana1411

Lovely

Continue soon

Originally posted by: 18mypride
🤗woww... its beautiful ... its so nice...❤️

Originally posted by: anupm04
Superb
Pls continue soon

Originally posted by: kirti0712
so u r not writer,liar! its awsum,waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: fatim30
haila mana its awesome ⭐️ ..😍

never knew that such an awesome writer ..

komal

Originally posted by: gurti227
nice...continue...painting is so beautiful

Thanx girls, you sooo rock, mwazzz😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: magyshah
wow ... There r already sparks flying between them... Waiting to read about their 'us' time

Next part😉

Originally posted by: Sarah08
Awesome...continue soon! :)

Originally posted by: dolly10
Awesome😊

Originally posted by: shah10
love it

Thank you sooo much🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Cloud9.
What you discontinued a FF of yours? 😲🤢
I think I got the right point at right time. *Evil Grin*😈😆
So anyway, coming to the story, Maan seems quite mysterious. I mean why in the hell he wants the painting at any cost? Why is it so special. And anyway it is not because of Geet as it is clear that he met her for the first time. Hmmm me making my poor brain cells work.
And should I mention his arrogance? I think I am going to have a good time bashing him in future (Possibly).
The last line was like hayyyeee😳
And you say you aren't a writer! Ha-ha, if it was a joke it isn't funny!😡
Because you write amazingly.

Thank you baby😃

Aur tu zyaada khush mat ho, remember you promised to complete it?😉

Originally posted by: SylvaniaLUX
awesome 😃

why did he want the painting first ??? His daadi asked him to marry him..as he is busy collecting paintings 🤓

Waise love Geet ..she hates parties just like me 😃

Aww one look at Lucifer Khurana ☺️..and the lady cannot paint ... what a bummer 😳

And can you blame the girl, Deeps? Who wouldn't be affected when you see a face (and body) like that, up close?😉

Originally posted by: swan20
Grrr Mana don't you ever say you can't write...😳 Beautiful start 👏Waiting to know why Maan is so desperate to buy the painting!!

Thanx Anu, I always thought I cannot write a story😕

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: -Manashi-

Sabse pehle tujhe hi bataya, tu daant todne mein busy thi😡

Aur waise bhi this was meant to be a surprise, so SHUT UP😡

mereko SUT UP Bola😲

Jaa kuch nahi bolti mai terse😡

Oh and sunday if u post without telling us u are dead meat😡

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Hi dear...beautiful OS! Loved part 1...well written! upadte soon n do pm! thanks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly
Interesting concept, already they r spellbounded by eachother, lets c y he wants that painting

Originally posted by: Cyberlife
Simply fabulous! Very well written. Looking forward to the next part.

Originally posted by: manesha76

Nice Part

Thank you girls😃🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
*takes the high road and gives chudail darshan*😳

Maan as usaul is a kutta..grade A kamina😡 with only one thing on his mind😉

dying to read the ONE thing😍

Geet ko dekhke acche ache fisal jayenge..ye khotta kya cheez hai😉

meri advice to khotta...

"painting ka kya acchar dalega😡 painting ko chod painting wali ko pakad"😳

Lubs ya🤗

BTWWW

when is the next update😃

waitingggg😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍g😍

and dont u DARE underestimate my chudail😡

Oyyy, mera Maan tere Maan se achcha hai (I sound like a detergent tikiya ad, mere kapre tumhare kapre se safed hai😆)

Painting wali ko bhi pakrega yaara, sabar karo😉

mwazzz😳

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#58

Originally posted by: euphoric
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#59

Originally posted by: WhitePearls
😆updated my bak bak...

replied baby😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: girlfriday
Uhwa!

That was some good writing M!

Now I get to do this *rubs hands evilly*

When are you going to update? It has been hours since you last updated. Please update. really.

*Evil laughter continues*

Thank you Sooks.😃

Words of appreciation coming from the best genuinely meanms a lot.😳

And stop your evil laughter😡

BTW, when are you updating ER and the new one?😉