SOUND OF MUSIC-UPDATED PT 07 PG 26

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loved the prologue...
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loved the concept...superb PROLOGUE
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prologue and CS
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Ruchi

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The prologue is simple musical!!😆

Loved how you gave the vivid description of the sounds…😳

Very interesting Character sketch…👏

Would love to see Maaneet as dancers…😳

Waiting for the story to start dear!!😳

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Loved d concept dear!!!

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PART 01

The building called Jnanajyothi arts school stood in front of a big building called Arkagnana arts school.Jnanajyothi arts school had the big fame in whole world but it has been closed since one decade.A boy stood in front of that building with his father Mr. Lakshya Singh Khurana.Lakshya saw that building with immense love as if he had owned it which the boy noticed.

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Maan's father

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Maan's mother

This boy was Maan Singh khurana who asked his father curiously,"Papa...kya yeh aapka ghar hai?????"Lakshya answered with immense love towards the building,"Haan beta...yeh mera ghar tha..lekin ab nahin...tumhaare maa ke ilaaj ke liye yeh ghar girvi rakha tha...lekin tumhaari maa ko mein apna paas nahin rakh paaya...!!!!!!"

That's man's eyes welled up & tears poured down from his eyes.Maan wiped those eyes from his tiny palm & said,"Aap chinta mat keejiye papa...jab mein bada hoonga na tab mein is ghar ko khareedoonga...aur mein isme ek arts school bhi open karoonga...maa ke naam par...!!!!!!!"Maan's father saw his son's determined face & smiled at him & walked past it.

Here in Handa mansion Tiruvaiyyar...a small girl of age 10 yrs is running shouting at her mom,"Maa...mein mandir jaa rahi hoon naachne ke liye...aap bhi aajayiyega...!!!!!!"This was Geet Handa who ran to lord vishnu temple wearing her bharatanatyam dress.Geet started her dance standing in first row...

The song started in Raaga Malahari & Taala Aadi...and its lyrics was like this..."Jhem...jhem...tanana...tajhem...jhem tanana...takundari...kitataka...kukundari..."(It is the song of Lord Ganesha)Geet held her hands folded & opened upwards with some flowers & came forward shaking her leg & banging it to the ground with grip.She danced to the rhythm...but before that she proceed...someone was shouting & crying which she noticed still dancing.

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Geet's father

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Geet's mother

Geet's eyes widened with shock seeing the scene...her father has lifted her mother & took her to the stage & everyone stood seeing the scene with shock.Geet's mother Rano's mouth was stained with blood & she was wincing with some pain.Geet whimpered seeing her mother,"Maa...!!!!!!!"

Geet's father made Rano to lie on the floor while Geet sat beside her & was crying loudly.Rano said to Geet,"Geet...kya tum mujhe ek waada karoge???????"Geet nodded cutely still her eyes were glistened with tears.Rano said,"Beta...tum apne papa ko kabhi niraash nahin karogi...tum is field mein unka naam roshan karoge...!!!!!!"Geet nodded & held her palm on her mother's palm as a promise.

Rano smiled at her sweetly but she clutched her chest immediately with pain & more blood oozed out from her mouth & her eye lid didn't move after that...Geet was shocked & shouted,"Maa...!!!!!!!"Mohinder was crying silently seeing Rano's face.

After Rano's cremation,Mohinder & Geet left the village Tiruvayyar & went to his best friend's house Lakshya Khurana who helped Mohinder to gain a work in Mysore where Geet grew up practising the arts with concentration.(Guys in here Maaneet both hasn't met each other but they meet in a very peculiar circumstances)

Now after 20 yrs------------>In Mysore...a girl is dancing for keerthana of carnatic music 'Bantu reethi kolu.'composed by saint Tyagaraja which had fusion beats with western instrument...

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That girl had hazel brown eyes...long white nose...baby pink lips...her cheeks were rosy & her eyes were closed relishing the music in her ears & was dancing in full concentration.She had tied her duppatta to her waist tightly & had tied the payals which was tingling when with her slight movement.

She had perfect body structure built for the dance only.He hands were showing numerous postures & her face was showing numerous expressions.She was looking like an angel yet she was the matured girl.Her surrounding was perfect for her dance peacefully as she was dancing in Chamundi Hill near the big basava.

Here in Khurana mansion,a boy of 25yrs was drinking alcohol at dawn & was playing the piano in wrong tunes making apaswaras.He has chocolate brown eyes...long white nose...and exact M shaped pink lips...his stature was perfect for dancing but he had an immense pain in those chocolate brown eyes...

His father couldn't listen the apaswaras from his son & shouted,"Kyun aise play kar rahi ho Maan...bhool jao us ladki ko aur tumhaare zindagi mein aage badho...kyun beete huve kal mein jee rahe ho...!!!!!!"Maan didn't gave hell attention to his father's pleas & continued his wrong playing while his father's eyes welled up & he cursed the girl who had made his son like that.

Precap-Maaneet first meeting...😭

I hope u like my first part guys am a bit nervous😭...tich help me...😭

Prologue-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2982338/sound-of-music-updated-pt-07-pg-26?pn=3

Next Part 02-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2982338/sound-of-music-updated-pt-07-pg-26?pn=9

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago