MG SS Baagi : Note pg 30 13/3 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
to be frank i am not getting through this story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I have just read all the remaining parts and I'm speechless!
Amazingly written! 👏
Title carries the true essence of the story.
I guess even Maan's rebellious nature has some reason behind it.
I have seen people who face a lot in their life where some become more calm and patient ,some become extremely rebellious , in both the cases they learn to absorb a lot of pain..Geet's transformation from Geet to G was aggressive yet painful and the way you included Azad here was really good,Geet turning from a drug addict to a member in the group which works to put an end to the drug trafficking . In most of the cases where children run away from their homes they do get addicted to all such stuff ,sometimes it even happens due to the company they get into , why drugs? These days even whiteners work for them!
I hate Mohinder ! I seriously do!
Tej? He has faced such strong emotions in his life right from his childhood , one can-not expect him to be a saint ! We all are humans afterall..each one with their own flaws and when it comes to the other characters like in this case where you have pointed out the fault of Mrinalini ,I seriously don't know what to say!
It's difficult to look at it without being biased! Since it's more about the journey of Geet one might get inclined towards the people who showered their love upon her without caring about what society would think or talk about them.
I'm truly looking forward for the upcoming updates, continue soon and thanks for the PM


Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

to be frank i am not getting through this story.


hmmm...

Ohk... i really do not know what to make of this comment... this is a story of two people who do not want to conform to the norms of society... one is born that way and the other makes it a way of living...i really can't let on more than this as the story has just started to unfold... anyways givin here a run-down of the happenings of each chapter... see if it makes any sense

Chapter 1: Savitri Khurana has chosen Aditi Handa to be the bride of her eldest , stubborn grandson Maan. He goes to 'see' Aditi' and ends up shocking everyone present by proposing Geet, her younger sister...

Chapter 2 : gives the glimpse of Handa Family and their relations. It reveals Maan's motive and the ensuing sparring of words between dadi-pota as he is adamant on marrying Geet.

Chapter 3: Daadi sees thru Maan's plan and decides to play along. she manages to convince Handa's to let bygones be and give a serious thought to the proposal.

Chapter 4a: The first of many confrontations between Maan and Geet where she barges into his house and slaps him. She also very dramatically announces the illegitimacy of her birth to deter him from marrying her. The fact which is already known to Daadi. Another thing though not too obvious( my shrtcmng) was effect of Geet's outburst on Maan.

Chapter 4b: A disturbed maan has a visitor - Mrinalini Handa. After their exchange of words she is convinced that Maan is the one for Geet. He realises the bloody mess he has got himself into. Lucky for him he decides not to further complicate things, BUT will he be able to leave things on fate or take things in his own hands is the question of the hour.

This is where i have taken a small( eh! 😲35 pages of word + 2 pages of supplmntl) detour to go down the memory lane of Geet's past.

Making of G - 1: Geet's entry in the lives of Handas
Making of G - 2: The story of her life and her transformation to G.

Supplement: A documentary on Drugs... ha ha ha it is a brief on Geet's association with AZAD the organisation which works to eliminate drugs and drug traffickers.
Also my views on why Tej should not be explicitly blamed for Geet's predicament, if not for him than how was i to create some masala

So this is it...

It's OK if you still don't follow it or Don't like it ... it's just another sappy story

Thanks
TC





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Posted: 13 years ago

Now coming to Tej, I fault myself and my writing when he is depicted a villain.

I am not trying to justify him but than don't you think his venomous outburst was long overdue.

They (Geet and he) had been at odds throughout, indulging in frequent name calling; their minor arguments in no time would flare into major squabbles and bickering. If he was evil, she too was no angel. To top it she got preferential treatment in the name of being the youngest.

He had known Geet was somewhere responsible for the rift between his parents and his resentment intensified after he gained piece of 'misinformation'. He was 22 then and Geet was 14. Though he chose to turn a blind eye to it, he could never forget his mom's vacant look that fateful day.

I DONT FIND TEJ TO BE A VILLAIN

HE IS A YOUNG MAN WHOSE BELIEFS WERE SHATTERED ON KNOWING THAT HIS DAD WHO WAS HIS IDEAL HAS FEET OF CLAY

IT IS VERY DIFFICULT FOR A CHILD TO ACCEPT THAT THEIR PARENTS CAN DO ANYTHING WRONG SPECIALLY BETRAY THEIR MOTHER

AND GEET WAS A LIVING EXAMPLE OF THE TROUBLE BETWEEN HIS PARENTS

SO HIS RESENTMENT WAS EXPECTED

I FEEL SAD FOR THE WHOLE FAMILY AS SUCH

ONE WRONG STEP AND THEY ALL SUFFERED

CHILREN ARE THE WORST HIT


WAITING FOR MAAN AND GEET TO CLASH

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Posted: 12 years ago
been very long time...

whenevr i strt lkng story ...the writers strt plyng hide n seek...huh!!!!!!!!!

phr bhi... update plz...

love

SANJH
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just came across this ff and I must tell you that it is really good,very well written.It has a very unique concept and a different storyline.I am really looking forward to the next chp,pls update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very very very interesting SS.Unique concept.
Loved all the part very beautifully written.
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love ur ff... When will update
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Posted: 12 years ago
cmmon yaar Spicey...
ab toh aajao...
or i vl start spamming ur thread...
n i vl do it...coz ths s wht i m doing in my other fav writers thread...who hv gone on hibernation...

love

SANJH
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Posted: 12 years ago
so this is how geet was made...

update soon...

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