~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~ MG FF IMP NOTE ON PG-153 - Page 71

Created

Last reply

Replies

987

Views

157.3k

Users

116

Likes

2.3k

Frequent Posters

komlika thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

<font color="#cc0066" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">sorry my whole update got deleted...now have to type it again...</font>


<font color="#cc0066" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">literally irritated now😡...sorry for those who waited</font>


Nahi 😭

Will wait 😳
Drashtirocks1 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
we're waiting😭 update soon
deepali1022 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

sorry my whole update got deleted...now have to type it again...

literally irritated now😡...sorry for those who waited


will be waiting...
.lovemaaneet. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
will wait its ok itna wait kiya kuch aur time 😊
singh24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago



Smiley sad
mahimaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
mahimaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
its an long one...just adding pics
mahimaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago

~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~

PART-6
Finally the decor was complete and geet took a sigh of relief...she looked at adi and pinky...who where looking at the decor with there mouth hanging open...she looked at the direction...and was completely mesmerized with the decor...a smile crept her lips...and beautiful was all she could utter...
"isnt this looking amazing guys" geet said chirpily...
"ha geet" adi said giving his trade mark smile...
"ha nahi toh kya...aakhir humne itni mehnat jo ki hai" pinky said munching some more chips...
geet smiled...and moved ahead gazing around her, to see if anything she missed...
"guys you move on...tum dono ko ready bhi toh hona hai na"
"and what about you...tumhe ready nahi hona kya"
"hona hai par...let me recheck all the arrangements then will go"
adi and pinky moved out leaving her alone...geet walked around checking every nook and corner...finding everything flawless...she smiled and called the caterers asking them to be on time...
while she was moving out she trembled stepping on something, loosing her balance...then looked down finding it to be the piece of shimmer which she used as decor item...
she looked up where she placed it...then sighing, she lazily dragged that moving ladder...looked around if anyone could help her placing this...but then pouted finding no help...she climbed that ladder reaching her desired height...then placing that piece firmly...she smiled giving a sigh of relief...then climbed down slowly...while steping down her dupatta came between her feet and the ladder step...she lost her balance falling down...closed her eyes tight anticipating to get hurt badly...but before she could reach down...a strong pair of arms took her in his hold...cocooning her in his embrace...geet started trembling clutching his shirt...moving closer...hiding her face in the crook of his neck...this unknown hold was making her feel protected...like she knew who it was...a smile crept her lips...all this felt like a dream...
after felt like a eternity she opened her hazel eyes meeting his mesmerizing ones...she was completely spellbound with the intensity of his gaze...feeling intoxicated with his warm breath faining her neck...making her lose her sanity...she started breathing heavily getting captivated in his magnetic touch...blushed recognizing who he was...tears formed in her eyes, as she made her hold tight around his neck...not letting him go this time...possessively she kept looking at his face with tears flowing continously...not beliveing the fact that he is standing in front of her...finally she found him...they are together...she touched his cheek making sure he is there in real...
I didn't know I could love
anyone as much as I love you
for the sound of your voice,
makes all my dreams come true.
You walk into a room, and
I know you have arrived;
my heart skips a beat when
you walk up to my side.
I hope this kind of magic stays
forever between us two,
and the whole wide world will
know that god sent me for you.
suddenly her comfort was lost when he made her stand on her feet slowly...abruptly creating distance between them...he looked away...getting uncomfortable with her stare...
"miss are you ok" he uttered getting concerned looking at her tears...
she looked at him in shock...lump formed in her throat choking her with immense pain...he didnt recognize her...how could that be...
finding her not responding he moved out leaving her behind...walking away from her like always...her heart felt numb...seeing him walk away...her pain, her tears, her love, her longing all this years meant nothing to him...she fell on her keens looking at his indifferent behaviour...crying bitterly hiding her face...she could not digest the pain he left her with...he forgot her was everything mattered her rightnow...her tears, her longing, their unspoken love was nothing to him...
"woh mujhe bhool gaye"
she kept crying...feeling dizzy...then dragged her lifeless body to her home...sat under the cold shower washing her pain, his touch...hoping it all to be her nightmare...her tears dried...as the realisation dawned...that her dreams would never turn reality now...
her phone kept ringing as she avoided it completely...finally she gathered her broken form and picked it up...
"geet tu pagal ho gayi hai kya phone kyu nahi utha rahi...kaha hai tu...yaha sab tera wait kar rahe hai" pinky screamed on other side...
"woh mai nahi aa paungi" she said meekly...
"oye kya ho gaya tujhe...aise kyu bol rahi hai" pinky said getting hyper...
geet bit her lips...subsiding her hiccups...
thats when dadi found pinky talking on phone...
"pinky beta geet kaha hai"
"woh dadi yeh lijiye aap hi baat karlo"
pinky handed phone to dadi,
"geet kaha ho aap...hum sab aapka wait kar rahe hai...jaldi aayiye"
dadi said hurriedly not letting geet speak...
"dekhiye beta guest sab aa gaye hai...aur ranbir aapka wait kar raha hai...aap bas jaldi aayiye"
and she disconnected the call...recieving other guest...
geet with no other option left...got ready wearing a beautiful white saree with silver shimmer at his border giving it a rich look...she wored a silver diamond studded jhumkas complimenting her silver bangles...applied kajal to her hazels eyes and a lip gloss hiding her naked plum lips...in all she dressed simple and sofisticated...but her inner serene beauty made her look amazingly gorgeous...
she riched the venue...feeling nervous as the images for their encounter flashed in front of her eyes...she looked around at the crowd who were looking at this angelic beauty...she started walking aimlessly...hiding her self from their penetrating gaze...
her clumsy moves made her collide with something hard, leading her to loose her balance...making her fall...but again she felt protected in the familiar hold..."maan" she whispered...as he pulled her up making her stand close to him...gluing her to his body...she downcasted her eyes...fearing to see anything but love in his eyes...he made his grip more tight around her waist...making her look up with surprise...the hope of him recognizing her was long gone...he looked into her eyes...seeking what bothered her...her pain was piercing his soul...but then finding himself drowning in her alluring eyes... he abruptly moved back...getting shocked with his own moves...brushed his hair back...and left hurriedly...
her tears dried as her dreams crashed down...she smiled painfully looking at him walking away...what an irony she thought...
she started moving out when dev called her...
"hey geet kaha thi tum...i was worried...chalo dad bula rahe hai"
and he dragged her to ranbir...
"finally...where were you darling" ranbir sighed in relief looking at her...
"woh mai...woh traffic..." she tired forming words...
"koi baat nahi beta" dadi came and hugged her side ways..."you are looking gorgeous beta" and she kissed her forehead...
ranbir smiled and excused himself...he went to the stage...holding mike in his hand...
"ladies and gentlemen...thank you so much for all your wishes...but here i have one more good news to share with you all"
dev moved besides geet, keeping his hand protectively on her waist...she looked at him...and he gestured her to move ahead towards the stage...they stood infront of ranbir...as he smiled looking at them...
"the good news is...my younger son MAAN SINGH KHURANA is back from london...after completing his engineering and management studies...and now would join us in khurana construction as managing director...i am really proud of my both the sons...who will be the pillars leading us to glorious new heights...and then he gestured both maan and dev to join him on stage...he hugged them both...as he stood between them...they where happy smiling, clicking pictures...as ranbir continued further...
his name itself felt magical to her ears...like she was possessed...she moved away from them...walking back, feeling suffocated...she stood in a lone corner looking at his smiling face...wishing if that smile would have meant for her...
she saw now dadi joined them...and maan lovingly kissed her cheek...hugging her close...maan looked happy contented like never before...and this brought a geniune smile on her face...
now she thought it was better he didnt recognised her...or now after he knowing her and then rejecting her would have being more painfull...
he belonged to a rich family...he was ranbir sir's son...and she was just their mere employee...nothing as compared to their status...
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzoon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzoon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik dooje se huey juda Jab ik dooje ke liye bane

Teri meri, meri teri Prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

she looked other way...fighting with her heart...making her belive "we are not meant to be"
but still she could not stop her craving to look at him smiling, happy with his family...she wiped her tears...determined to be strong...
then started leaving...when adi called her...
"geet, sir is calling you...chalo jaldi"
and he dragged her with him to the adjacent hall, where all the employees where standing...she looked around...as adi joined the other employees pulling her with him...she looked at ranbir...who was introducing maan personally with each and every employee...

she kept looking at him as he smiled everytime shaking his hands...he looked so composed, yet so much captivating...

Tumse dil jo lagaya toh jahaan maine paaya
Kabhi socha na tha yun meelon door hoga saaya
Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwaab dikhaya
Jab haqiqat mein usey todna tha

Ik dooje se huye judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzon mein yeh Bayaan na ho paaye

Teri meri baaton ka har lamha
Sab se anjaana, do lafzoon mein yeh
Bayaan na ho paaye

finally they came to her...maan stood looking at her face,which only looked at the ground...
ranbir pulled geet out...as he did not liked seeing her standing in that row...
"kaha chali jati ho..." he asked in concern...
maan was looking at them amused...seeing his dad showering so much concern and love over this girl...he went into deep thoughts wishing if he could have seen her with his dad like this...
Har ehsaas mein tu hai
Har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

his trance was broken when his dad spoke...
"anyways maan, this is geet handa, our senior most architect...hardworking and efficient" he said proudly hugging her from side...maan's heart missed a beat hearing her name...
"hello...its nice meeting you" geet said blankly without any emotions...
"same here" he said meekly gazing her eyes...searching his soul in her...wanting it to be geet, his geet...
Sara din bit jaaye, Saari raat jagaye
Bas khayal tumhara lamha lamha tadpaye
Yeh tadap keh rahi hai mit jaaye faasle
Yeh Tere mere darmayaan hai Jo saare

Ik dooje se huey juda Jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri baaton ka har lamha Sab se anjaana
Do lafzon mein yeh Bayaan na ho paaye
geet felt choked with unknown pain...his gaze was adding to her misery...
"woh sir, i am not feeling well...can i go home" she said looking down...
"ofcoures beta...pehale kyu nahi kaha...thats why you look so pale"
he checked her forehead for any fever...then called dev...and asked him to take her home...dev got concerned looking at her pale face...he embraced her sideways, walking her out...
maan looked at them...and then dev's hold on her...an unknow rage, pain took over him...seeing her walking away...
dev made geet seat in his car...and drived off to her home...he kept stealing glances of her...feeling worried for her...geet kept looking out of the window...into deep black sky...as images of maan flashed infront of her...his mesmerizing look when she saw him for the first time, his stealing glances of her, that sweet smile, that magical moments they shared...
Har ehsaas mein tu hai har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

it was end of it...everything is finished...their love or whatever they shared...they are poles apart now...never meant to be...she closed her eyes digesting this painful truth...determined to move on...strongly...

*************************************************************
Precap:- working together😳😳😳😳

hello sweeties...please dont throw juttis on me...for making them meet this way...i known its painful, but what to do i have planned this story this way...

just keep ur patience and trust me...after this it will only be maneet maneet and maneet...and their eternal love, their sweet realisation begins from here...

so just stay tuned as picture toh abhi start hui hai😉
ur criticism n suggestions both are welcomed...
and pls hit the LIKE button and comment ur views...
love ya
varsha😃
Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
komlika thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
So finally they met

Hope there is nothing between DEV n Geet other then friendship or bro-sis relationship

Did maan recognize Geet??

Excited abt precap
sdlife19 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update,,,,
its fine tat they met like this...
but dev m bit worried yaar...
kahi he loves geet than lene ke dene na padh jaaye..
the way he looks at her and all..
and felt sorry for geet yaarr..
but atlast maan came to know tat she is his geet...
and hope now they come close soon and dev far away from them...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF- Silent Whisper- Note Pg 105 Jun 30 Chapter 26, Pg 104

Overview Two people completely poles apart in career, status and style. One is the epitome of elegant, the other epitome of simplistic. One is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

3 years ago

tellyme's MG World of Dreamzzzz - New Note Pg 83 Jun 29

Hi Buddies, Here is my all FF work compiled. Latest on Top My Forum - Anu's World of Fictions In Progress...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Vaidhumom

3 years ago

💗MG SS O RE PIYA #3 - Important note on page 19 dated 26th Jan 2025

WORK IN PROGRESS... . REQUEST YOU TO LIKE AND COMMENT ONCE I ANNOUNCE THIS THREAD IS READY I AM SO GLAD TO REACH TO THIS LEVEL. I CANT EXPRESS...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Bound by Honour| Note page 50 Bound by Honour| Note page 50

Prologue “Where are you, Sameera?” I yelled unable to hold myself back. “I’m not coming, Maan”. “It is our wedding day. You know what my...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

6 months ago

MG-Twisted Love/pt11-pg18- 1 july

Twisted Love This story i written for OS contest, in sort version, today i thought of sharing the story in little, long version This is the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".